OS: Koi Yeh Kaise Bataaye - Page 9

Beautifully written!! I really loved how you portrayed Ishita...mature, understanding, and yet she knew where to draw the line.

Originally posted by: -SakuraS-

Beautifully written!! I really loved how you portrayed Ishita...mature, understanding, and yet she knew where to draw the line.

2 points I must mention : When she asked "what then? do we wait for another holi,etc?" and when she said "I understand but I don't forgive u..." This is how most of us would react if put in Ishita's place, so was able to totally understand the feelings and emotions.

I hope u do continue this...

btw, Nice quote at the end!

Hi Thank you so much for reading and commeting 😊

Yes, I will continue (depending on how the track goes on the show !)

Hey Lucky,

Originally posted by: shalu79

Hey Lucky,

i deleted that last para from my comment u too remove it frm ur reply where it is quoted.

We don't want to take any risk with our fav😉

Love,

Shalu

Its confirmed. we are BOTH paranoid now 🤣 edited...

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Hey NIchuss...Thanks for commenting 😊

It seems incomplete, because there is now potential for Ishita to give him the silent treatment. and there is more potential for Raman to come up with ways to make it up to Ishita 😉 I am waiting for some more inspiration and see whats happening on the show, befor I can write it.

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Hey Uz... you are right, Raman needs to start talking to. 99% of the MUs in our serials are because people dont talk. Thats what made me write this one (other than the obvious turmoil I felt Ishita is suffering)

tomorrow noon Uz... Heathrow here I come... u dont need to take the day off and roll out the red carpet or anything for me 😉😆 but a bouquet wouldnt be that bad 😃

Haha/ If you were to bring someone along with you I would be at Heathrow right now awaiting your arrival 😉 😆 will be good to have you back 😃

It was beautiful.

Originally posted by: happenstance

Haha/ If you were to bring someone along with you I would be at Heathrow right now awaiting your arrival 😉 😆 will be good to have you back 😃

U wish!!! like I would tell you if I was coming in with that someone😉. I dont like you that much 😃😆
Talk to you tomorrow Uz...

Originally posted by: LaughItOff

It was beautiful.

Can we have the continuation please... Something felt missing... May be Raman's POV?

Hey Thanks :)

for the first time since I started writing for YHM, I dont know what Raman is thinking. I always write for him. BUt this time, I feel like I understand Ishita more than him. Let me see if I can come up with something! THank you for the honest feedback 😊

Originally posted by: modernfamily

That was excellent Lucky! Ishita's growing fondness for Raman is compelling her to justify his behaviour...that was superb. You delved into Ishita's psyche beautifully. The way she argued him down was a product of your rational arguments I guess, but I'm sure Ishita thinks the same way.

Oh Sudhi, I have NO Idea how I missed your comments. I am sooo sorry (kaan pakadke)...

I cannot believe I wrote something entirely from Ishita's point of view! I always wished for them to add some meat into her character, so I am happy. I didnt know they'd weaken my Raman for that though

Thanks for liking it 😊