OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Bruce_L

A very good attempt!
Keep it up 😊

Originally posted by: krikumar.91

Agar yeh suggestion pehle mil jata toh main definitely implement kar deta yaar... Iss baar miss ho gayi... Thanks for liking and commenting on it...

hahaha our male gopi bahu is incomplete w/o domestic violence 😆😆

I feel like giving u a hug 🤗 your writing is tooo good !! Amazing OS ... U shud have been the scriptwriter of YHM 🥳 Great Going ! Looking forward to read more OS and FFs from ur side 😊

Originally posted by: Megher_Palok

hahaha our male gopi bahu is incomplete w/o domestic violence 😆😆

Originally posted by: ZedZee

I feel like giving u a hug 🤗 your writing is tooo good !! Amazing OS ... U shud have been the scriptwriter of YHM 🥳 Great Going ! Looking forward to read more OS and FFs from ur side 😊

ohh haan ... .. i forgot that :P

chalo... 7:30 here ...#SPA2014 time ...Enjoy! :D

Originally posted by: Megher_Palok

ohh haan ... .. i forgot that :P

chalo... 7:30 here ...#SPA2014 time ...Enjoy! :D

Awesome. I read all the parts n it was too good with e beautiful ending.

Part 6 (Page 20):
'Tumne jo diya uss se kam ho raha hai' - Ooh that dard bhara comment must have hit Raman straight in the heart. Go Ishita go! Show him that he won't be easily forgiven for every mistake of his!
You gave your OS such a cute ending, Raman being all shy and running away so that he doesn't blurt out his love for her, and I'm glad Raman put the phone on speaker, it was symbolic in the sense that he'll never hide anything from his wife again. And Shagun finally realised that her tricks aren't gonna work at separating IshRa, instead she ends up bringing them closer than ever before. I hope even in the show Ishita doesn't forgive him so easily, she should make him beg for her forgiveness like you made her do in your writing!
Really enjoyed your chapters and I'm sad now that I don't have more to read! If you do make another OS on IshRa do PM me please :) ❤️

this is a wonderful os. Within a short span of time this is came out amazingly. It was really a pleasure reading this. Thank you for this os.