IshRa Sensuous Series: OS-6~~Incandescent Imbue~~ MATURE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: malini96
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#172

Originally posted by: Rozy77
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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart
Okay now that was quite un blush-licious!

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#174

Originally posted by: Raatri
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#175

Originally posted by: day_lily
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Originally posted by: SWAN123
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#177

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia
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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

wow..dis is soo sensuous and romantici was blushimg throghout

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thankx for this wonderful os👏...do write more of like dis🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Isma_A
Res. Can't wait!! 😃
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Another great update, yaar!! I liked it! I would say this one was most different to your others, especially in writing style. I think stylistically, the others are stronger. However, I also saw that there was more internal reflection in this one, with fewer dialogues. It was good to see that because it gives you/your reader more space to explore and understand the individual characters and their inner thoughts in regards to the relationship (especially this aspect of the relationship). It also shows your versatility as a writer. 😊

Which style were you referring to that you said you didn't like? I really feel the others are stronger in writing, so if you were doubting that, don't! I Also, and this is just my personal preference, so you can totally ignore this (actually, you can ignore anything I say. I won't be offended. 😆😛), I like if there's a mix of action and reflection, dialogues mixed with thoughts. I realize in this piece, the 'action' was clear. 😛 But then I ask: does one want to be reflecting and thinking so deeply while in the middle of lovemaking? 😆😆 But I think I can see our hero and heroine doing that. 😳😆

I love your work!! You've become one of my favorite writers. Please keep writing (and letting me know every time you do. 😆).

I loved this analysis of yours, it gave me much more to think about .

@Bold-

1. I too think that stylistically others are stronger.😃

2.You are damn right there is more internal reflection in this one and indeed I wanted to divert from the funny genre that my stories portray in first and second OS. You have captured my dil ki baat so nicely. 😳👏

3. Action, reflection, dialogues mixed with thoughts- A perfect recipe for an OS. Though mine focus on one or other aspect but your point has given me so much to wonder.

4. As for too much reflection while lovemaking😆, i have to say that IshRa have seen soo many ups and downs in their lives; so they just cant believe that they are spending happy times, though what you pointed out isn't wrong, it cracked me up 🤣.

5. OMG!!! Someone calling me as versatile and a fav. writer is my ultimate fantasy and I just don't know how to express my happiness 😳.

Thank you dear for your appreciation and analysis.