ISHRA SS - HUM TUM Updated Part 4-pg 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello ppl...m new to this forum and I just wanted to write a ss...I hope u like it.!!


HUM TUM

Jab pehli baar maine usko chaha tab mujhe nahi pata tha ki koi kisi ko itna chah sakta hai...lekin itni chahat ke baad bhi hum ek nahi ho paaye...usko toh pata bhi nahi hai ki wo mere liye kitni important hai...

Aaj kareeb 4 years ke baad maine usko dekha...uski awaaz suni...aaj bhi wo waisi hi hai...Jhansi Ki Rani

Main life mein aage badh chuka hu...lekin aaj usko dekha toh wapas wahi pahoch gaya hu...inn 4 saalo mein itna kuch hua hai ki mujhe toh badalna hi tha...lekin aaj mujhe phir wahi Raman Kumar banne ka mann kar raha hai jo kisi pe bhi bharosa kar leta tha..!!



P.S-sorry if thr r any mistakes..pls do tell if u like it or not and should I continue..!!
thanks




PART 1-PAGE 1
LINK-www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4071555&PID=109002522&#p109002522

PART 2-PAGE 2
LINK- www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4071555&PID=109227123&#p109227123

PART 3-PAGE 3
LINK-www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4071555&PID=109440947&#p109440947

PART 4-PAGE 5
LINK-www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4071555&PID=110792273&#p110792273


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Posted: 11 years ago
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interestin prologue...plz post 1st chap soon n pm me too plz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JniISHRA83

Interesting story...continue yaar...



thnx... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

interestin prologue...plz post 1st chap soon n pm me too plz😊



thnx..I ll update soon n pm u.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This part is about Raman's past...
Hope u like it..!


HUm TUM
PART-1



Hum dono ek hi college mein padhte the...but in different courses...she was doing BDS while I was doing engineering...
Maine usko pehli baar library mein dekha tha...she was sitting right in front of me...it was the first time I stared at a girl for such a long time...
At that time the only thing I was good at was studies...I was a total geek...she didn't even notice me...
Waise toh main library mein studies karne jata tha but nowadays sirf usko dekhne ke liye jane laga tha...main toh itna phattu tha ki usse kabhi kuch keh hi nahi pata tha bas dekhta tha usko..uski likes and dislikes janne ki koshish karta tha...
Humara college khatam hone wala tha toh I decided ki main usko apni feelings ke baare mein bata dunga...so I started following her...she was going towards the garden...she went and sat on the bench in the garden...I thought ki Raman isse acha time tujhe nahi milega so abhi hi usko bata de about your feelings for her...main usko batane ke liye aage badh hi raha tha ki ek ladka aa ke uske paas beth gaya...wo usko dekh ke bahot hi khush lag rahi thi...I couldn't understand anything so main unki baatein sunne laga...wo dono shaadi karne wale the...wo kisi aur se pyaar karti thi aur usse shaadi bhi karne wali thi...main usko kaise kuch bolta...
Meri life ka wo chapter wahi close ho gaya...kuch dino mein college bhi khatam ho gaya aur maine phir usse milne ya uske baare mein jaane ki koshish bhi nahi ki...

Maa ne meri shaadi karwa di Shagun se...wo achi thi aur main uspe bahot bharosa bhi karta tha...main usko har khushi dena chahta tha...aur ab main uske saath life mein aage badh chuka tha...Shagun ne mujhe meri life ka sabse bada gift diya...mera beta Aadi...meri jaan mera sab kuch...
Jab tak humara 2nd child hua Shagun ko mere boss se pyaar ho chuka tha kyuki uske paas mujhse jyada paise the...wo Aadi ko toh apne saath le gayi aur humari choti si beti ko mere paas chod ke chali gayi...
Main kabhi bhi Ruhi ko wo pyaar nahi de paaya kyuki wo mujhe Shagun ki yaad dilati hai...

Ishita mera pehla pyaar thi aur Shagun wo insaan jiski wajah se main aaj yaha tak pahocha hu...agar wo mujhe chod ke nahi jaati toh shayad aaj main 'CEO Of The Year' nahi hota...

P.s-sorry for mistakes..!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its very very interesting...
I request you to please update...
I so wanted to read a story like this...
Its amazing...
Please continue it and please PM me... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LaughItOff

Its very very interesting...

I request you to please update...
I so wanted to read a story like this...
Its amazing...
Please continue it and please PM me...😊






Thank u soo much...I ll update soon n pm u... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome. Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ramans first love is Ishita👏👏...So chances are there... I like it..superb yaar.continue soon...
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Itt is v.good. and I loved the way u narrated it. Plz pm me when ure updating. Loved the way raman's thoughts are flowing...

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