ISHRA OS Misunderstandings Part 2/ Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello!! So I just had this scene in my mind after June 19th episode. So here it goes...

Raman is mad at himself.

Raman: How could I forget such an important date? It was such a happy time for me. And on top of everything, Shagun had to be the one to remind. I failed to be there for Adi all the time just as I promised to be.

Ishita sees Raman and he looks upset. He is constantly talking to himself and downing drink after drink. From her peripheral vision she notices Shagun smirking at her. Ishita decides to go talk to Raman and stop him from drinking too much.

Ishita: Raman sab theek hai na? Aap itna drink kyun kar rahe ho?

Raman: Tumahri problem kya hai? Hamesha mere piche padi rehti ho?

Ishita: Aap upset lag rahe ho isliye pooch rahi thi.

Raman: Dekho mujhe tumhari concern ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Mujhe mere haal par chod do.

Ishita: Aise kaise chod doon? Main aap ki biwi hoon.

Raman: Hamari shaadi Ruhi ke liye hui thi. Tum uspar concentrate karo.

A few tears escape from Ishita's eyes. Shagun chooses this moment to interrupt them .

Shagun: Raman main kal tumhara wait karrongi hospital main. Bhoolna mat!

Raman: Don't worry main aaunga. And Im sorry ki main bhool gaya apna promise ko.

Shagun: It's okay. Tum apne new family ke saath busy the, yeh pehla saal hai jo tum bhool gaye.

Raman: I will be there on time.

Shagun: Bye Ishita, Have a good night.

Ishita: Kal kya hai?

Raman: Maine kaha na, mere kaam mein interfere mat karo.

Ishita: Ghar chale. Main drive karoongi.

The next morning, Raman wakes up with a hangover.

Raman: Ugghh sar phat raha hai. Aur abhi JKR ka lecture bhi sunna padega. Kahin dikh hi nahin rahi hai. Shyaad breakfast bana rahi hogi. Theek hai, mujhe atleast khane ke baad lecture sunne ko milega. Chal Raman beta, fresh hoja, office bhi jana hai. After hes done freshing up, he notices a paper on Ishita's pillow with his name.

Raman,

I thought that we were past being just Ruhi's parents, I thought we were at least friends. The way you behaved with me last night hurt me. I have decided to give you space. I will not interfere in anything related to you, Adi or Shagun. I will just be Ruhi's mum and that will be it. You don't have to worry about me wanting to know anything regarding you. I am going away for a while, I don't know for how long though. I just need some time away from everything.

Bye

-Ishita

PS. Enjoy the days without me.

The letter falls out of Raman's hand and he tries to remember what he said last night. He can't remember much after leaving the party.

Flashback:

In the Car.

Raman: Tum janna chahti thi na ki main kal kya karne jaa raha hoon?

Ishita: Mujhe usme koi interest nahin, you are an adult, tum jo karna chahte ho karo.

Raman: Main Shagun ke saath jaa raha hoon kyunki usne mujhe is duniya ki sabse badi khushi di hai, mere bache.

Ishita: Mujhe pata hai ki main aap ko bache nahin de sakti, aapko mujhe yaad dilane ki zarrorat nahin hain.

Raman: Mera woh matlab nahin tha.

Ishita: Rehne do, we have reached.

Raman passes out as soon as he reaches hi bed. Ishita calls her colleague and lets him know that she will be joining him for the Mumbai conference. She decides that she will leave straight from the clinic and meet Ruhi on her way to the airport. She packs her bag at night and writes a note for Raman.

Flashback ends.

Raman rushes outside so he can stop her from leaving him. He is under the misconception that he is leaving him rather than just going for a conference. He sees Toshiji in the kitchen.

Raman: Maa Ishita kahan hai?

Toshiji: Puttar woh toh subha hi apna bag pack kar ke chali gayi.

Raman: What? Woh jaa rahi thi aur apne usse roka bhi nahin?

Toshiji: Main kyun roku? Teri biwi hai, agar rokna hota toh tujhe rokna chahiye tha.

Raman (ST): Jaan ke yeh JKR subha nikal gayi, usse pata tha ki main usse jane nahin doonga. Aane do shaam ko dekh loonga. Apne appa ke ghar mein mooh phula kar baithi hogi. Galti toh maine kiya hai lekin pata nahin ki kya kiya? Shayad shaam tak yaad ajaye.

It is 5pm and Raman still cannot remember anything regarding last night. This on top of meeting Shagun, Raman wanted nothing more than to spend some time with his wife and daughter. He rushes home and while entering his house he sees that Ruhi is at her patti's house. Taking this opportunity he goes there as well.

Appa: Raman ayo beta. Mihika Raman ke liye coffee le ayo.

Mihika: Of course. A special coffee for my special jiju.

Ruhi comes and sits on Raman's lap.

Raman: Apne Ishima ko miss kar rahi thi.

Ruhi: Haan papa. Main Ishima ko bahut miss kar rahi hoon.

Raman: Miss kar rahi hoon ka matlab? Apne room me hogi.

Ruhi: Offo papa, aap bhi na. Mumma toh Nitesh uncle ke saath Mumbai gayi hai.

Raman: Nitesh uncle? Tumhe kaise pata hai.

Ruhi: Ishima jane se pehle mujse school mein milne ayi thi aur Nitesh uncle bhi aya tha. Usne mujhe ek pretty si doll bhi diya hai. He is so nice.

Raman: Nice, my foot. Aur woh bewakoof aurat. Delhi hi chod ke chali gayi. Kahan dhoondoon usse.

Just then he hears, Nitesh's name mentioned by Mihika.

Raman: Mihika yeh Nitesh kaun hai?

Mihika: Jiju, Nitesh Akka ke college ka friend hai. Akka pe woh marta tha. Lekin us waqt Akka Subbu ke saath thi. Aur usne bhi shaadi kar li. Last year uski wife left him. Poor guy.

Raman: Uski biwi gayi aur mere biwi ko le gaya. Madrasan kahin ka. Usse toh main ab Mumbai main dekhoon ga.

Precap: Raman in Mumbai..

Feedback appreciated

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P.s " Galti toh maine kiya hai lekin pata nahin ki kya kiya? ". 😆 I can just see him muttering this to himself.
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