OS: Jaane Kaise Kab Kahaan - Page 6

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

lucky..ur version ws great...👏👏👏...esp loved the way u made ishra realise each other how both of them were being wrong in understanding each other's feelings...😳😳...

i want part 2..can u plz 😃

the title is APT...one of my fav old songs...😃😃

Hey NIkki... part 2... hmmm... let me think... but i am travelling for a couple of days, so wont have time to write anyway.

and thanks for liking this story :)

Originally posted by: shivaniaroraji

superb👏👏

Thank you Shivani :)

Lovely OS Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

Originally posted by: debomaaneet

So good to see u back with another OS 🤗
I love this as usual 😊 This version of yours is as good as the original episode 😊 I love the way u mended your thought, the way u included that promo version in this OS 👏
I heart this line "I'd go to the dark side of the moon if you want
me to, i'd never say no to you" he muttered with
an end of the towel in his mouth." ❤️ Oh man u are helplessly falling for your JKR!
"Attraction was such a small
word for what he felt about Ishita. May be
admiration was a better choice."- yes u are right Mr. Bhalla! One can't help but admire her, she's gem of a person!
" Sitting in
front of the fire and smoke, they both remembered
their marriage ceremony." It reminds me the same.
"Tumko pata hai na, meri back weak
hai. ab tumhaare bojh se taangein bhi toot rahi
hai. Tum hi balm lagaaogi samjhi?"
She smiled and said, "main moti nahin hoon,
aapki umar ho gayi hai"
"tum akele milo, phir bataata hoon" he said" 🤣 Typical Mr. & Mrs. RKB wala dialogue! 😆
Last of all u again select the apt song AS USUAL :)
Love U ❤️

Hey Debo... love ya too 🤗 thanks again for being so appreciative :) jyaada time nahin hai, isliye no detailed reply, sorry :(

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Lovely OS Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

Thank you 😊

Dude Lucky! From where do you type out these quotes at the perfect times? You're like BANG ON! I feel like you have a whole knew stock!😳🤗
Anyways, love the reason behind this short passage. Even I wanted to witness the entire promo, the reason didn't matter but wanted it to BE THERE and it wasn't. Was sort of disappointed but this made it up.
This couldn't have been better i guess. Love those awkward silences and upraising heartbeats!
They are just getting better with each fleeting moment regarding their thoughts for each other.😳
Thanks a ton for writing this. Much needed solution to fill in for not executing the promo in the desired way.
P.S : I'm awfully late i know. Sorry. Though thanks a ton for the PMs.🤗
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Thank YOU 😊 I was desperate to see the promo too... they were oh so close 😭

I dont really have a stock of quotes, I have to search every time. I am what you call a "googlellectual", not a real intellectual 😆

This was other OS right ?
I have a gold fish memory when it comes too which updates I did not comment on
Okay this. Update was super u know now I am just repeating myself each time but then ur work is soo perfect that I don't really have any complains and the feedback keeps repeating because I don't have enough words to describe how amazingly u write
I wish this happened in the show
U know I love ur dialogues I write myself and adding one liners to a story is very hard. And those punches which u add are just soo good
And a few lines gave me goosbumps like " baad main milo dhikatha hoon " something like that it was very good
I loved this piece
Sorry late comment and thanks for pm
PS : I have read everything u have written on YHM forum so far so if their any story I did not comment on due to my laziness or busy schedule aor any other lame excuse :P I am sorry do remind me and I will update my comments
Hugs

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

This was other OS right ?
I have a gold fish memory when it comes too which updates I did not comment on
Okay this. Update was super u know now I am just repeating myself each time but then ur work is soo perfect that I don't really have any complains and the feedback keeps repeating because I don't have enough words to describe how amazingly u write
I wish this happened in the show
U know I love ur dialogues I write myself and adding one liners to a story is very hard. And those punches which u add are just soo good
And a few lines gave me goosbumps like " baad main milo dhikatha hoon " something like that it was very good
I loved this piece
Sorry late comment and thanks for pm
PS : I have read everything u have written on YHM forum so far so if their any story I did not comment on due to my laziness or busy schedule aor any other lame excuse :P I am sorry do remind me and I will update my comments
Hugs

Thats it, i wont call u Saira anymore :) goldfish it is ;)

I sent a PM yesterday... Not sure if u have seen that yet :)

And thanks for commenting hun :) that line was so loaded na :D