OS: Kabhi To Samajh Bhi Jao

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Posted: 11 years ago
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What's up my fellow YHMians!!

So I am back with another OS...You probably know that I like to integrate them with the current epi tracks hence this one is after the Monday 9th June epi when the Romi's truth is out etc...

@ Uz... After reading your latest mirror/mirror and the song selected...it kinda gave me this idea. Thank you 😊

I dedicate this OS to all my BGD's ... Love you all 🤗

Warning...it is long!

(Raman's dialogues in blue and Ishita's in green... the rest well ummm in black 😆)

Ishita woke up early ... she felt really bad that the other day because of her Raman couldn't have breakfast. So here she was in the kitchen still in her night clothes cooking breakfast for her Amma. Only after giving Amma her breakfast did Ishita start making breakfast for Raman, just to make sure.

Raman all dressed to go to his office comes walking towards the door and informs Ishita that he is leaving without even looking at her. She calls out to him "Raman...rukiye na". He stops in his tracks and turns to look at her... she was looking no less than an angel in the white coloured night clothes...just perfect.. with her hair roughly tied up...

"Haan kya hain?" he eventually manages to say after a few minutes. "I'm really sorry aap us din nashta nahi karpaye...lekin aaj maine pura nashta banaya hain...aapko pasand hain waise eggs, phir wo kishmish wala halwa...aur aapko yeh nahi khana to aloo ke parathe bhi banaye hain" she answers while turning off the gas knob.

"Isko ho kya gaya hain...itna maska kisliye?" Raman thought to himself ... Ishita now bringing the plates to the table says ... "aap bethiye aur khaye warna thanda ho jayega"... "Itni garmi mein ab thande ki hi zaroorat hain!" he says...Ishita gives him a puzzled expression and says "Garmi mein thanda khana kaun kha" ...

He interrupts her "Wo meri aaj meeting hai abhi ... to mujhe jaana padega" ... "Lekin mujhe to Mihir ka phone aaye ke aaj ki apki meeting post pone hogayi...wo kya haina aapka phone nahi lag raha tha ...isiliye Mihir ne mujhe phone kiya" informs Ishita slightly confused.

"Yeh Mihir bhi na...phone nahi lag raha tha to mujhe message kar deta ...lekin nahi har baat isko apni pyari bhabhi ko announce karni hain...Mihir ko main baad mein dekh lunga" he says to himself... Unwillingly he puts his coat behind one of the chairs and sits down. He asks her "where is everyone else" as she is serving the breakfast to which she replies that "Mummyji has gone to Pammi aunty's house, Papaji and Simmi have gone to get baby's routine vaccination and Romi has left early".

She sits down beside him, elbow resting on the table and chin resting on her hand. He is about to take the first bite but stops and asks her ... "Tumne khaya?"... She was looking at him and seemed lost ... so he snapped his fingers and asked again... Caught like a deer before headlights .. she replies "Nahi ...wo ready hone ki baad khalungi" ..

"Hmmm mujhe ghoor ne ki koi khaas waja?" he asks with a curved smile... "Oh please...itna mat phulo...main ...wo soch rahi thi ..ke ab Amma ghar aa gayi hai to kyun na main thode dino ke liye Amma ke saath rehne chali jaun...unke khayal bhi ache se rak sakti hoon aur Amma ko bhi acha lage ga" she says.

He nearly chokes on the eggs and says... "Tum pagal ho kya?... Amma ko rest ki zaroorat hai...agar tum waha gayi to bol bol kar unko paka dogi...aur waise bhi unko har waqt crowd karna sahi nahi hai" ... Ishita retorts ..."yes I know that but if I will be there then I would be able to attend to her properly... as it is Mihika also goes to work"..

"Tumhe kya lagta hain... wo nurse muft mein kaam kar rahi hai...maine usko sirf adhe paise diye hain ke wo apna kaam theek se nahi karegi ... Amma ka dhyaan nahi rakhegi...aur Amma samne hi to hai jab chahe milne chali jaana...khamkha bheed laga ne ki kya zaroorat hain?!"... "Maine aisa kab kaha... I was just saying that ..."

Extremely irritated he cuts in and yells "Tumhe itni si baat samajh mein kyun nahi aati??...Lekin samajhne ke liye to dimaag chahiye... Aur tumhara dimaag to chobis ganta saathon din hartal pe rehta hain"

Saying this he gets up ...grabs his coat... And Ishita also gets up asks..."Aap itna gussa kyun ho rahe hain...main to sirf"...not allowing her to complete her sentence Raman marches out of the door mumbling "Pagal aurat" ... leaving a bemused Ishita.

Smiling to herself Ishita also walks to the door thinking ... was my Raavan Kumar getting agitated?? ...Hold on did I just say MY Raavan Kumar?...of course I didn't ...and did he really think I out of all people wouldn't know that it is not correct to crowd around a patient all the time... How could he not understand this?? ... I know Amma has the nurse for medical attention and I am literally opposite to Amma so I can go to her anytime I want... but what else could she have said to Raman when he caught her staring at him ...he was looking so handsome in the blue shirt and slight stubble...plus it was so amusing to see this reaction of his ...she turns around and her gaze shifts back to the table to spot Raman's car keys ... "Aiyyoo... yeh Raman bhi na"...

Raman is in the building compound when he sees Appa coming with a grocery bag... He walks over to him to help carry the bag... but Appa says... "nahi Raman ...main theek hoon...aur waise bhi ye itna bhari nahi hai...tum dekho kitna light bag hain yeh"...Raman mumbles quietly... "bag to light hone hi tha kyunki beti jo hai sab pe bhari padne ke liye"... Smiling he hands the grocery bag back to Mr Iyer who walks towards the building stairs...

When Mr Iyer reaches the 3rd floor he sees Ishita running out of the Bhalla house nearly bumping into him... "Arrey Ishu ...dhyaan se...why are you running??" ... Ishita not wanting to tell her father that for mere car keys she was running like as if it was a fire evacuation just mumbles... "Wo Appa...main bas"... Mr Iyer, unknowlingly, makes life easier for Ishita and responds "Actually mujhe Raman mila niche...office ja raha tha". And a smirking Ishita thinks in her mind... "Jaa kaise sakte hain...chabi to mere paas hai!"... quickly removing the smirk from her face she says to Appa... " Oh acha hua! ...mujhe unse ek baat poochni thi...baad mein milti hoon Appa".

Meanwhile... Raman reaches his car while checking his pockets to realise that he doesn't have his car keys... and curses "Damn it!" ... He heads back to the building only to see Ishita coming down the stairs with his car keys swirling in her hands... He climbs up the few steps and remembers his many meetings with her at this very same spot... like their first meeting and then day she wanted to speak to him about Ruhi while the delivery men carrying the sofas unintentionally (or intentionally) had them huddled in the corner of the staircase wall.

She sees him and leans against the staircase wall while holding the key ring in her between her thumb and index finger and while looking at him sideways remarks "Kabhi kabhi na log yuhi baatein karte hain...dimaag ke bare mein ...lekin confirm karna bhul jaate hain ke jis cheez ke bare mein wo baat kar rahe hai...khud ke paas hain bhi ya nahi!" ..

What in the world was this woman trying to do? Fuming Raman tries to get the keys from her hand ... to only have her close her hand around the keys ... "Dekho jo tumhare paas hai hi nahi uske bare baat mat hi karo" he looks to his left and then back at her adding ... "aur rahi baat in chaabiyon ki ...to mujhe chaabi ki kya zaroorat jab driver gadi chalayega?" he mutters...Ishita now turns to face him, half smiles and says "Oh really then why were you coming back up?"...

"Tum itne sawaal kyun karti ho...koi report submit karna hain kya jo sari details tumhe chahiye... Main to dekhne aa raha tha ke Appa theek se pohoch gaye ki nahi... tumhe chaabi ke saath dekha to socha backup ke liye chabi le leta hoon kyunki abhi tak driver nahi aaya... Ab Jagga Jasoos ka case solve ho gaya ho to can I have my keys?" He retorts sarcastically.

Seeing that Ishita had not moved an inch and had still clutched onto the keys he glares at her intently and says "Look Ishita I'm getting late and I don't have time for these games" ... "Oh... mujhe to laga aapko pasand hoga!" she replies... "Meri pasand na pasand ki baatein shyaam ko bhi ho sakti hai...just give me my keys.." he says sternly... Ishita now takes his hand and puts the keys in them and flashing him with a smirk says "Chalo to phir shyaam ko milte hain"... Taking her hand back she heads back up the stairs... While going back she unties her hair and lets them down, swaying with her every step.

Raman feels rooted to the spot... he is left open mouthed, eyes widened and cannot seem to move... Even now when she had already gone... Just then his phone vibrates and he gets a message... he snaps out of this trance and checks his phone to see the message

"Aapko der nahi ho rahi?"

"Yeh Jhansi ki Rani ki to main!...jo baat samajh ni chahiye wo to kabhi nahi samajhti...lekin jo nahi samajhna chahiye wo to super speed mein samajh jati hai ... bewakoof!" .. Saying this he heads back to his car, vexed, and drives off...

Seeing Raman going to his car and driving off while standing in the balcony, Ishita puts her phone down. Shaking her head and half smiling mutters "muttal" and heads towards the bathroom to get ready.

End

Jo nahin kaha hain..kabhi toh samajh bhi jao...hum bhi to hain tumhare ...deewane ho deewane

From here begins the 10th June epi as it was shown... And now that RKB has seen how severe things could get with Amma .. he tells Ishita to stay with Amma etc.

That's all folks!!

Apologies for any grammar/spelling mistakes. I haven't written for some time now... so thodi se zang lagi hai ... I have tried to keep to Ishita and Raman's current character traits, I hope I have been able to justify them and not gone overboard.

Feedback is welcome...good, bad and ugly 😆

Pri 😛

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--Sia-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS pri...
I felt like reading written update of YHM .
Keep them coming 😳
Edited by --Sia-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaah BEG...this ws BRILLIANT..totally in sync with show..!! loved the conclusion by Raman as thts wht exactly happened...😆😉...super adorable..i could totally imagine DivAn enactin this..!!

waitin for ur next chamatkaar OS..😆😉
Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pri i loved it! how can you say that this just a random OS?!! so glad the song inspired you too, i've had it on repeat lately😳😆 I loved their interaction at the bottom of the staircase and liked how you made reference to their first ever meeting too😳😳

Write more please!!🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aaah BEG...this ws BRILLIANT..totally in sync with show..!! loved the conclusion by Raman as thts wht exactly happened...😆😉...super adorable..i could totally imagine DivAn enactin this..!!

waitin for ur next chamatkaar OS..😆😉

Thank you my mentor 😃... that was my aim 😳... Thank you thank you for the appreciation 🤗
Hmmm.. no promises there 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you 😃
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Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Aww ossawm os...
Good job..

Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Pri

very well written. and fantastic job of building your 'scene' between the 2 episodes👏

Ek dialogue bahut mast tha, but I wont mention it here. I think you know which one😆

BEST one-liner bag to light hone hi tha kyunki beti jo hai sab pe bhari padne ke liye"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute os..😊
loved the song...👍🏼
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Originally posted by: --Sia--

Lovely OS pri...

I felt like reading written update of YHM .
Keep them coming 😳

Thank you Sia 😃... and awww that is so so so sweet ...YHM written update ... hayee shukriya Embarrassed
I'll try ... this was just random off the top of my head 😆

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