Kya baat kya baat kya baat! You made complete sense Lucky and to the song on the DOT! Lovely portrayal of the song by drinking and grooving! Woohoo! Mazaa aagaya!
There are some lines that I really really liked! Sinfully perfect! 😉
//Under his gaze, she subconsciously touched her left shoulder to adjust her pallu when she was reminded she wasn't wearing a saree.
//Little did she know that while she was recollecting every detail of that dress and his dance practice, her husband was admiring how perfectly it fit her in all the right places. And if she would fit perfectly with him for the dance.
//To put her out of her misery, he shrugged his shoulders lightly to tell her he had nothing to do with his ex-wife being present at the party.
//He was mad at himself for feeling so out of control when she was in his arms, and she was baffled by how smoothly he moved with her, let her take the lead and hold her as if she was his.
//She was uncomforable with 2 things then, her dress and the feelings she had when dancing with him. She could fix only one of them.
//He lost his footing for a second when he saw her face so close to his, so soon after the dance. He hadnt even had a chance to regulate his pulse yet.
//May I borrow my husband from you for some time?
//"Theek hai Raman. Just remember, I gave you the go-ahead and you refused. Waise control lose karna har waqt bura nahin hota, hai na?" His jaw dropped.
//In some time, her hair had come undone, her lipstick faded, and her moves slowed down. But she hadn't lost the twinkle in her eyes and she looked more beautiful than ever. After the first few minutes, Raman had let go too. After a long time, he felt intoxicated, and he hadn't touched a single drop of alcohol.
This is the essence of the entire OS:
And his hands were somewhere between her back and waist. Every time his hands started going any south, he regretfully brought them back up. He respected her way too much to do this when she was drunk. Although he had been mad at whoever had made her intoxicated, he was happy she ended up there, in that moment with him.
Great job Lucky! There was a good flow and it was a very convincing alternate to the Shagun dance fiasco!
Kya tum mere nashe mein hone ka faida uthaogi? Nahi!
Phir peene ka kya faida!!!
I can hear the song through out the OS!
Edited by Indian_Isha - 11 years ago
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