IshRa OS: Jaane chupata kya: Next half UPDATED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Just read both the parts... Amazingly written...👏👏

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
Nice one

Thanx😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

But she needs to know that he is her Mr. Perfect not any one else...

and He must know about her sadness... please don't end it now... please add just one more part... so that I can sleep contended.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
Lovely update dear

Thank you😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Nany
tead both parts...
its amazing...

Thank you😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Res for part 2

***EDITED

BIG Sorry for editing so late Aparna!!! I thought I had already done this 😭

This part was so different from the first one. You took it to a completely different level! I thought it would just be a continuation of the earlier one, in the same mood.

But this one was so much more. the naughtiness, shyness was still there. The dream element was very good!!!

the best part I liked was the ending. How he has realised that he only knows the parts of the book that she wishes to show him. So now, it will be a challenge for him to read every chapter. I loved the analogy you have used 👏

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I really liked the part where Raman observed Ishita crying and he was disturbed by it. It's made him realise that may be he doesn't know her fully and I'm looking forward to see just how he goes about finding out why Ishita is disturbed.

Well my intention of this OS, was just to give a slice of this other side of Ishita to Raman and not go about further. That's why I gave this title too. Hope I make sense.

Thanks for liking it😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: krikumar.91
wow...read both the parts... too good yaar... very different...

Thanx Kri ... glad u found it different 😊

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: avni_19
woww!! reallyy amazinggg!!! keepp continuingg.. loved tt!! esp the relief which raman gets!! slowly he is realising it!!
doo continee soonn.. plsss PM me... thnkuuu soo muchh

I intended to give a slice of this other side of Ishita to Raman...hence the title...so no cont of this...
Thanks for appreciating😊