ISHRA OS Tagathon #5 Pal Pal Dil Ke Paas Tum Rehte Ho.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So basically I am going to start my part from the day after the confession in Sai's OS. I have never written any intimate scenes because I am not sure how to present it so I am going to take a different route. Hopefully you guys enjoy it. So here it goes. And I would like to nominate naddiya26 to continue to Tagathon. J I absolutely love reading her work.

Link to Part 4 :)

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4050853


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is the morning after Ishita's birthday and she could not be happier. She felt like it was all dream, actually it was better than any dream. Waking up next to her hubby, wrapped up in his arms and seeing his face first thing in the morning is beyond perfect.

Ishita (ST): This here is what I wished for all my life. Raman is every girls dream guy, and I can't believe that he is all mine. He loves me just as much as I love. When we first met, I had no idea that my life will take this turn and he would be this important to me. Ruhi and Raman are my life now. Their happiness is mine, their tears are mine and their problems will be mine. I will shield them from all troubles and as long as I am there, nothing will hurt them, that's my promise to myself.

Raman stirs in his sleep, and slowly opens his eyes to the most beautiful sight he ever laid his eyes on. His JKR, his wife looking ever so sexy with her tousled hair, sleepy eyes and a content smile on her face. This is the sight he would like to wake up to each and every morning for the rest of his life. Raman sees that Ishita is lost in her thoughts so he pulls her towards him and holds her tight. Their bodies are stuck together and as expected, they are a perfect fit like pieces of a puzzle. They make eye contact, and the eye lock lasts for who knows how long; maybe a few seconds or maybe minutes have passed by. This is their paradise, their own piece of heaven where they can get lost in each other.

Raman: Kya soch rahi thi tum?

Ishita: Tumhare bare mein soch rahi thi. I can't believe ki mera Raavan Kumar Romeo bhi ban sakta hai. I can not thank you enough for coming into my life. A few tears escape her eyes.

Raman kisses away her tears, and cups her face.

Raman: No fair, tumne to meri line chura li. Tum mere black and white zindagi mein aa kar usme rang bhar di hai. Tumhari waja se main aaj muskurata hoon. Jo admi kuch mahino pehle apni beti se door rehta tha, aaj woh khul ke usse apna pyaar jata sakta hai, aur uski zimidar tum ho Ishita sirf tum. [He take her hand and places it on his chest]. Kya tum mere dil ki dhadkan mehsoos kar sakti ho, yeh dil sirf tumhare liye dharakta hai.

Ishita: I love you Raman <3

Raman: I love you too. Waise main soch raha ki main tumhe kya bulao. I mean pyaar se JKR bulata hoon lekin ab sab ke samne toh yeh nahin kahe sakta hoon. Aur tumhari family tumhe Ishu bulati hai, main kuch unique chahta hoon.

Ishita: Mujhe JKR pasand hai. It's us, hamari kahani ka shuruwat. Aur main to tumhe Ravan Kumar hi bulaongi, change nahin karoongi.

Raman: Acha hua ki tumne Romeo nahin choose kiya. I mean main ek itni bari company ka CEO hoon. Apni reputation ka khyaal rakhna padta hain.

Ishita: Aap kabhi bhi nahin sudhroge.

Raman: Agar mein sudhar gaya toh tum Raavan Kumar kisse bulaogi.

Ishita: Aap bahut ajeeb ho, apko pata hain na?

Raman: What the! Tum mujhe ajeeb kahe rahi ho? Have you met yourself. Tum ek museum piece ho.

Ishita just sticks her tongue out and starts tickling him. Raman quickly flips Ishita over and pins her underneath him.

Raman: Ab karo..

Ishita: uhh Raman, aap kya kar rahe ho? Mujhe jana hai. Sab ke liye naashta banana hai.

Raman: Abhi sab ko uthne main time hai. Mere saath time spend karne se darr rahi ho.

Ishita: Darr? [Looping her arms around his neck] Of course not. Agar mera bas chale toh main apna sara waqt tumhare saath spend karoon.

Raman: Oh really? Kya baath hai. Bahut romantic ho rahi ho?

Ishita: Well woh kya hain nah, yeh sab mere romantic hubby ka asar hai. Itne hot hai toh thora flirting aur romance toh banta hai.

Their blissful morning comes to an end when someone knocks on their bedroom door.

Raman: Abhe kaun hai? Apne hi ghar apni hi biwi ke saath time spent nahin kar sakta hai koi. :@

Thank you.Hopefully it lived up to your expectations. Feedback will be appreciated.

Edited by shaayne - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awnnn i absolutely loved it |!!! wish it was longer !!!!!!!!!
:D :D :D
Romeo !! haha i like it !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I agree with Ishita, JKR and Raavan Kumar is how they started and it's cute to stick to that. Super sweet OS!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ABBY92

I agree with Ishita, JKR and Raavan Kumar is how they started and it's cute to stick to that. Super sweet OS!


Yea I couldn't think of anything that would suit them better. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sweet Shaayne! Loved the conversation they had early in the morning!

This is a perfect scene! 😊 Looking forward to what Naddiya has in store for us! 😊
Edited by Indian_Isha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely loved how Ishita and Raman confessed their love for one another. Would love to see a similar scene in the show - with the 12 gifts and all and the talwar was a brilliant idea😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww sooo cute...
very nice update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read this at 2:00 am, with a tired mind and body. Your OS brought a sweet smile to my face, like I had just had a good night's sleep...

Thanks for taking this forward so beautifully dear... Very well written!!!

@Naddiya... Looking forward to your part :)
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was so chweet.wud like to see such scenes in show too.

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