Happy Birthday Raman OS Last Part pg 19 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start. I thought that the surprise is for Raman But you gave me the surprise. What about Raman? Don't kill him. Waiting for your next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice...plz continue the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!!!🤗 Aw!! Such a amazing OS!! ❤️ Loved it it was fab to read👍🏼
The last part was so unexpected!😔 Plz do continue!!! I want to know what happens!🥺
Do PM for sure!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful start Dear 😊 Waiting fr next 😉 Pls continue soon & pm Me 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u For the lovely comments guys !! I didnt expected !!!
Welll The next part will be available tonight !!!
:D <3 I hope i dont disapoint u guys !! and For pm's Buddy me !!
Thank u so much !!! for all the lovelies comments !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
Ishita was sititing on the floor she was continuously weeping . All the moment spent with raman were passing in front of her eyes.,just like a fast forward film .She couldn't imagine her life without him. It was just a big NO . She stand up and call the number on the screen. The number was engaged , cuz millions of people must be calling on it . She tried raman numbers once again , and it started to rang. She felt a hope.
Ishita : Raman pick up the phone please but all in vain . It was only ringing but no one was picking up the phone. She ran from the house heading to the airport to get some news . She couldn't sat hand on hand.
once she reached the airport she tried to have some news. But the employess said they are clueless too . she asked them to check if Raman Bhalla was on the flight . But they couldn't help . It was crazy ! Everyone was crazy for their loved one .
Ishita felt so helpless. She wasn't able to do anything .
Ishita : Raman tum kaho ho, Please wapis a jao I promise I will never fight u !!
Please ! Don't leave me . I will die without u !! I CANNOt imagine my mornings without fighting with u , without taunting u . Ayoo murgan please protect my Raman .
She had no choice but to return home . She returned home , shattered, .
She saw everyone was still crying. Mihir and Romi were trying to get some updates on Raman but no clue. The Iyers were there too and they were crying too ... Raman was their Son in law after all .

Just then someone rang the bell. Ishita ran to open the door .
Ishita : Ramannn
But she was disappointed cuz it was Bala and Vandita .
Ishita hugged Bala and started to cry even more . Her sister and Brother in law couldn't see her like this . But nothing could be done because the aiport said to cooperate.

After 3 hours , Mihir received a call but before he could answer it the call was cut. Therefore he couldn't see the number .
And after some time . Someone again Rang the door bell.
This time ishita didn't wanted to open it cuz she didn't wanted to disappoint . Romi opened the door.

Romi SCREAmed with happiness : BHAIII
Ishita ran towards the door and Raman was there . Bhalla's ke jaan mein jaan ayi . Everyone's eyes were fix to the door . Raman entered. He was struggling a bit he coulndt walk properly ..

Ishita went towards Raman and hugged him . Wihtout caring what his reaction would be , without caring that they were not alone . Raman understood the situation and hugged her back and whispered: IShita Relax ! Im fine !! Main itni jaldi to nahin marne wala !!
Ishita puts her hand on his mouth and tells him to shut up . and make him sit .

Everyone felt releaved that Raman was actually safe .
Mihir : Bhaii App teek ho na ?
Romi : Bhai ap ko lagi to nahin ?

Mrs and mr bhalla : Doctor ko bulao
Bala and Vadita : Raman are u alright ?
Raman smiled to his family craziness. He was so touched to see how everyone care for him . He looked at ishita and said : Tumhe bhi kuch kehna hai to kehdo ? and he smiled.
Ishita was so relived to see her Ravan ERR to see her Raman smiling .
Raman : Guys hold on !! Im good . TOdi si chot ayi hai . Ill be fine in a couple of days no over reaction .
Ishita could see that he was really injured : Raman itni baar phone kiya utaya kyun hum sab ki jaan nikal gayi thi and app ne ek baar nahin socha mummy ji papa ji romi mihir simmi rinky ka kya hota , Ruhi ka kya hota and ... Mera kya hota. Waise to bohat smart bante ho . Ek phone kardete to apka kya ho jata .
Bewakoof Admi she said her eyes full of tears.
He smiled at her . Ishita , I actually didn't boarded on the flight that got crash . I took another flight because there was man who badly needed to go to see her wife . because she was in labor , delhi mein ,So I took the next flight . Simple .
iSHITa : THEN WHY u didn't call ?
Raman : I tried but the connection was so poor , I was out of signals , my phone was behaving crappy . and after a while It was out of battery . Im sorry .

Romi : But bhai , how did u got injured then ?
Raman : wo , mein.. I learned about the crash when I reached delhi. And the airport was packed and the driver didn't came to pick me up cuz of the differenent timing . I didn't know anyone number it was all in my phone and the phone battery was dead. So I decided to pick a cab but udar itna rush ta ke I got hit by a car. And then when I woke up I was in the hospital . I didn't call cuz I was discharged and didn't wanted to freak u out .

Ishita realised that in all this they forgot Raman's Birthday . She goes near Raman and grabs his hand . She gives him support and bring him in the room . Raman : ishita im alright let me sit here .
Ishita said that he must rest and she is a doctor . Toshiji : Ishita if he wants to stay with us why are u bringing him inside. Ishita didn't paid attention to any comment and she pulled him in the room and Locked the door. Everyone was shocked from this behavior.

ishra in the room . Raman sitting on the bed .Tumhe kya hogaya ? Aise koyi lata hai room mein . Sab log kya sochegein. Ishita : Raman please. Ap change karliye. Ive been through a rollercoster of emotions I don't have the power to argue please. And she went out of the room


Raman struggled but finally changed into his night dress. It was 10 pm . He decided to get out of the room . The hall was dark . Raman : LAGTAA hai light chali gayi !! But where is everyone ?
He step forward and the lights goes on and everyone started to sing : Happy Birthday Raman !!! :D
Everyone was really happy !! So was Raman !!!! it was indeed a superb surprise from his family .


Ps : hope u liked it !! Awnn Guys u care so much for Raman.
As much as i love him i would be the last one to write an OS of him dying . never say never !! Do let me know ur feedback and any suggestions for the next part !!

Pm's sent to all those who are in my buddy list ! For pm's BUDDY ME !

Edited by yhmfever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YAY! He's alive!
Good cuz otherwise...😡

Just kidding! 😆

But really your os was super cute!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PyaarDostiHai

YAY! He's alive!

Good cuz otherwise...😡

Just kidding! 😆

But really your os was super cute!



How can i kill my fav Ravan kumar ? :D :D :D
NEVER !!!!
Lol thank u !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awww loved this update..nicely written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank god raman is fine...
Awww..love ishra hug...
Lovely update . ..
Continue soon

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