Mature OS: Raman's 'hard' day at work and home!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi All,

I'm writing an OS after a long, long time ..this OS is wrapped around the new Ehsaas Part2 promo. It has subtle mature content so reader discretion adviced :-)

Raman's "hard" day at work and home.

Mr. Tandon was to leave for London in another two days. Raman's company had finally acquired some good land and before Mr. Tandon left for London they wanted to erect the foundation for their new cold drinks manufacturing facility. Raman was tensed. He had a hard day at work trying to reach out to different contractors and co-ordinate his new venture.

Finally, after a hard day's work Raman gets back home. Ishita, Ruhi and Mrs. Bhalla are waiting for him. Mrs. Bhalla tells him that Ruhi was waiting so she could say good night. She tells Ruhi to tell her papa good night and asks Ishita to make her sleep in her (toshi's) room. Ishita takes her to Tohshi's room ..tells her a story and tucks her in.
Raman's phone rings and he answers it...Mrs. Bhalla hears Raman's conversation and realizes he is rather tensed about things - she overhears him say..."Don't worry Mr. Tandon, hum foundation erect karna shuru kar denge kal" "You don't worry..good night Mr. Tandon". He then switches off his phone..

Mrs. Bhalla advises him not to work so hard and to give his family and health some time too and right now to have a good dinner. Raman finishes his dinner and goes into his room. Meanwhile, Ishita has also tucked Ruhi in in Toshi's room and is headed toward her room...

Ishita is wearing a very nice white night dress and Raman has changed into whites too ...They have both had a hard day ..Ishita had to catch up on a lot of appointments that she had postponed due to her busy household schedule the last several days. So both were tired ...

Ishita and Raman exchange smiles ...and Ishita heads toward the couch. Raman tells her that she looks very tired and she should sleep on the bed but Ishita insists ..She says she got a new book from the bookstore and would like to read a bit before she sleeps so will sleep on the couch ..Raman asks if it's OK if he watches some cricket on TV to which Ishita says it's totally fine. He replies to a few emails on his phone ...puts his phone in his pant pocket and turns on the TV and lowers the volume.

Raman is deeply engrossed in the cricket match and cheers on when he realizes that he might be disturbing Ishita ...He heads towards her on the couch and realizes that she's fallen asleep...He's struck by her angel like beauty in white ...He takes away her book and places it on the table. He pulls over her blanket to tuck her in and turns off the light ...He suddenly notices her hair is all over her face ...He gently bends over and moves her hair to the side...Once again with great difficulty and control he takes his eyes off her and heads back to the bed...Ishita who wasn't fully asleep but pretended to be so was deeply moved by his touch of affection ...Her heart sprouted wings and wanted to fly toward Raman but she controlled herself too ..What would Raman think? .

Raman muted the TV and watched a bit more of cricket to get his mind off of Ishita ...Now Ishita fell asleep with her happy thoughts ..In her sleep she rolled over to her side ..but the couch being narrow, she rolled off the couch..Raman looked in her direction and found her falling on to the ground ..he made a dash for her (dropping he TV remote on the ground) but she was on the ground already ...He went and held her and asked her "Ishita, are you OK?" ..Ishita tried moving and said "Aiyo, amma, I think I've sprained my back" ..Raman immediately moves his hand over and starts rubbing her back and they look into each others eyes ..suddenly both feel awkard and Raman in an effort to save the situation says "Maine kaha na bed pe sone ke liya ..kabhi kabaar meri baat sun liya karo..Tum itni moti ho, agar couch par roll over karoge to obviously giroge ..kaise itne kam dimag se doctor ban gayi" ..Ishita is smiling internally ..She says "I can't get up, what to do" ..Raman says "Wait, this time you listen to me. I will lift you and place you on the bed and u sleep there chup chaap. I will use the couch ..Main teri tarah mota nahi hoon or mera dimag neend me bhi chalta hai!" ..

That said, Raman takes Ishita in his arms and heads towards the bed ...little realizing that he had dropped the TV remote on the ground ..As he approaches the bed he steps on the remote and loses his balance ...Being close to the bed and having slipped in his forward motion ...he lands Ishita on the bed and himself on top of her gazing into her mesmerizing eyes ...His chain gets entangled in her white kurti button. When Raman tries to get up, his chain tugs on Ishita's button and it snaps revealing her soft and deep cleavage. Raman shifts his gaze from her unbuttoned kurti to her face ..they both have the most intense look on their face that says "Just do it, already" but both are unaware that the other feels the same way ..Raman is lost in Ishita's eyes and suddenly Ishita says "Raman" and with her eyes indicates the sudden hardness she felt on her thigh ...Raman was embarrassed...She had felt his "er*ction" stabbing her thigh ..How could he have let that happen ..Raman gets off her ...He has to say something to diffuse the sexual tension...He gets his phone off his pant pocket...He says "Sorry ...tumhara gift kiya hua 'pink' phone se hi tumhe laga.." ..He has a shy smile and moves away to the couch ..

Ishita has this most amazing peaceful and happy look on her face ...She falls asleep ...Raman on the couch ..has his hand on his head ...he cant stop smiling and eventually falls asleep too ...

Soon the night turns into morning. Ishita is up first ..Her back feels better and she silently leaves the room to get tea and breakfast ready ...Mrs. Bhalla is up too ..Soon Raman gets ready and is out too ...
Mrs. Bhalla says "Arre Raman puttar ..kya baat hai ..bohut khush dikhai de rahe ho" ..."woh "erection" ho gaya kya..?" ...Raman is embarrassed ...He says .."Maa...erec..." then he looks at Ishita with a question mark/shy/controlled smile expression ..his face down eyes looking up at her...with his eyes meaning to ask if she had said anything ...Ishita smiled and nodded a "no" with her head and had an equally embarrassed/surprised expression...Raman said .."Maa kya bol rahe ho.." Toshi says "Arre raman, tum kal Tandon se phone pe baat kar rahe the...maine sun liya ..do din me kuch foundation ka erection karna hai...Tum bohut tensed lag rahe the kal raat ko or aaj bohut khush dikh rahe ho ..isiliye mujhe laga ki wo erection ka kaam ho gaya.." Raman heaves a sigh of relief ...He looks at Toshi and says "Haan maa, contractor se abhi baat hui ..." shifts gaze to Ishita "erection shuru hua hai ..bas abhi jaldi aur bohut kuch hone ka intezaar hai ..." ..He gives her his killer "wink" and grabs a quick bite and leaves for work.


The End..

Guys, please let me know if you'll liked it ..I would really love to see something subtle like this ..and Mrs. Toshi's malapropism at work to ignite more sparks in IshRa life ..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome ...very sweet and cute ...reading it with Ishra imaginary expressions makes a very heart warming OS ..I wish our CVs would read the OSs on our forum and take some heed...this is a late night telecast so when the time comes hope they show something sensual ...IshRa really set fire when the get together ..the new promo with hardly any sexuality still exudes so much warmth! ..can't imagine what it would be like to see something like what u've written!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was fantastic! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG the ending was so cheeky
:-P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unreserved !!
OMGGG THAT WAS SUPER DUPERRR :D
loll toshijiii cracked me up :PPP
typical her !!
awnn would like to see what happen next :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG. this had me embarrassed all throughout was hell shocked especially at Raman and then Mrs. Bhalla 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update. Keep continuingg.. eager to read. Pls PM me. Thnkuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg this ws EPIC..loved loved the ending too...plz write more on IshRa..u write so so well...could clearly visualise wht u wrote..!! loved readin it..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol, loved the play of words throughout the whole OS. Very witty.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahem ahem😳😳😳😳
nice os
Please PM me if you continue
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