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Hey guys i'm trying my hand at some writing here...these are just some scenes i personally would like to see in the serial..so here goes.
Part 1:
Raman woke up and looked around, rubbing his eyes.Ruhi was still asleep and had her legs sprawled over his chest, while her head was in the same direction as his legs were!
"Kaise soti hai yeh ladki?...bolti hai papa kick marte hai raat ko...yeh to pura bharatnatyam karti hai bistar pe..!jhansi ki rani sikhati hogi ise din mein..aur practice meri beti raat ko karti hai.."
His eyes scanned the room for Ishita..
"Chali gayi kya bandit queen already?...dikh nahi rahi kahin?..."
He carefully got Ruhi's legs off his chest and got up from the bed.He walked towards the bathroom looking downwards and rubbed his eyes trying to get them to open all the way when suddenly Ishita rushed out from the bathroom and crashes right into him.
She loses her balance for a second and he steadies her by her shoulders...
I: "Kya hai...dekhe to chalo...aankhein hai ya button?" she smirked
As she walked away she waits for his reply to her taunt but gets none.
A tad disappointed, she wonders
"Yeh kya hua aaj ravan kumar ko?chup hai?"
For once he said nothing..he just couldn't.She looked too angelic at the moment.When she bumped into him..he had felt her soft cheek brush against his jaw..the water droplets from her hair fell on his face,his shirt...the fragrance of her shampoo..it all just made his mind go blank for a good 10 seconds.
He snaps out of it and silently walks into the bathroom.He was desperately trying to avoid falling in love again..but this woman was not making it easy for him.
Meanwhile Ishita starts rummaging through her sarees trying to pick one for the day.She had started coming to terms with the fact that she had feelings for Raman.She decided against expressing it to him though.
"Kya faida...jab ravan kumar ko main pasand nahi hoon to...(turns up her nose and makes a face) itni achi si pyari si biwi mili hai...par nahi..usko to sonali kotnis type item pasand aate hai...inthaal sariyana muttaal" (this guy is a real idiot)
As she voiced those words aloud,he happened to walk by her.Stopping in his tracks and turning towards her he asks
"Huh kya? hindi main bol...jab dekho mutta sotta karti rehti hai"
She turns around to face him and once again he cannot help but be stuck by her simple yet so so attractive looks - her wet hair all swept to one side..the water dripping from her hair, had drenched one side of her kurti almost completely.As he watched, tiny droplets of water continued to drip down from her long hair ..some down her neck and some onto the floor.
"Sach much pari lagti hai yeh jhansi ki rani kabhi kabhi ..." he thought to himself.
I:"Oh ab aapko meri tamil se problem ho rahi hai..?har din ek naya problem hai aapko mujhse..nahi bolti main hindi..tamil mein hi bolungi...kya kar loge?she continues naughtliy..
Yennakku ungale rommmba pudichirukku..."(i have really started liking u)
R : (angrily) "Stop it!..romba romba ..Nonsense!"
She was really enjoying this...
R : "main aakhri baar bol rahan hoon..bahut ho gaya tumhara..."
He looked so cute when he was annoyed,she felt.
I : "Ayyyooo...red color-la antha mokka paatha appdiyee ungale tight-a kattikkanumnu thonudu...aanaaa..vena..ippo vena..time varattum.appo pakkalam ok-va?" she taunts (when i see that nose of yours that goes red in anger i have this urge in me to hug u tight...but no..not now..let the right time come ok?)
R(livid) :"BAS! Bohot ho gaya tumhara bakwas subah subah... dimaag khane aayi hai ladki".He walks out of the room in a huff.
Ishita laughs and begins to get ready for work.
Brilliant Ishita!apni dil ki baat tune keh bhi diya ek tarah se...aur Raman ko kuch samajh mein bhi nahi aaya...feels so good!..she thinks to herself.
She glances at the clock
"Ayyayyo ammaaa...is Raman ko chedne ke chakkar mein aaj to bohot late ho gayi"
She grabs her handbag and mobile ,and runs through the living room towards the main door.Seeing her Mr Bhalla calls out "Arre yeh kya?Naashta to karke ja puttar!"
I :"Nahi papaji..." she begins to explain when Raman cuts in from behind the newspaper.
R: "Usko bhook nahi hogi aaj "
Mr: Bhalla "kyon?"
R: "Subah subah mera dimaag jo kha chuki hai yeh"
Mr Bhalla shakes his head and smiles.
Ishita playfully rolls her eyes , gives him a mock stare and runs out.
R: "Waise kya boli hogi woh tamil mein?...gaali to nahi de rahi thi mujhe?" he wondered.
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Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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