New OS: Jealousy Works!! - Page 2

Awesome os 👏
i hope ki actual epi mai aisa kuch ho 😳
Nyways luvd reading this os 😳

its a cute story when i was reading i was smiling

wow wow wow 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.

Fab fab OS buddy!
When Ishita turned James Bond and Raman Don Juan! Hahah! Too cute it was! Especially loved the end
Really well written!

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omg omggg Jaanu WHAT A ROCKING SURPRISE...🥳...

i LOVE U LOVE U LOVE U*infinite times* for this SURPRISE..!! N am so glad i am THE FIRST PERSON to read it...kya timin thi meri...i saw the moment u posted..😆😆...

omggg wht u wrote gave me 200% YHM feel...If Sonali Ma'm n team wrote this scene,it would DITTO turn out lik this...!!

omg i LOVED LOVED the cunnin raman...mirchified ishu..😆😆...

evn i felt EXACT reactions lik ishu when raman blurted abt hw subbu ditched her...SEE WOMAN i ws THT LOST in ur story...all thnx to ur PERFECT writin skills...👏👏👏...

n i LOVED hw IshRa patched up aftr tht..!! hw i epic wish show mein bhi AISA...SAME TO SAME hote.....

BRILLIANT OS..👏👏...plz come back soon with ur another OS soon...!!

PS : plz write a dori scene yaar...😆😉

PPS : i HAVE to mention one sentence of this OS...i hv quoted tht below



^^@bold...
u knw it just SPOT ON activated the "masoom" mode ON in me...🤣

Hi 🤗 I was planning to pin u on Skype but u r already here, first to post. I had some free periods so i jotted this down n posted. Happy to see ppl liking it.
N for you, millions of hugs for ur heartfelt feedback n appreciation. It s a huge compliment coz it means i have got the characters write now!!

@ bold:
It is just one of our fantasy more that dhakkan Ishita🤣

N dont worry ur dori scene will b up may b sooner than u expect.😃

Originally posted by: --Mia--

Aww what a cute story! Ishita was really adorable in this. And when she said she followed him to the hotel, 'ruhi ke liye' hahaha!!! Too funny!! And the ending was soo sweet!! I have a big smile on my face after reading this!! You should write more! :-)

Thank u my friend i really appreciate it and i will definitely write more. It is just the beginning😆 As for Ruhi ke liye line, it is one of my favourite which i like to rub on IshRa's face from time to time!!

Originally posted by: modernfamily91

This is really cute. And Raman Bhalla Don Juan???😆

Thanks for liking. It means a lot.

Originally posted by: felciya

Well written . I really enjoyed reading it. thank you.

U r welcome. It was a pleasure writing this.

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

It is just one of our fantasy more that dhakkan Ishita🤣

N dont worry ur dori scene will b up may b sooner than u expect.😃

ishu is a total dhakkan...wish v could "train" her..🤣🤣...

n omg omg "sooner"...yaaay...🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Originally posted by: ishra496

Oh dear...its marvelous!!!!...Its just the way Ishra really are...

Originally posted by: arryline

Firstly thanks @Nikki for bringing me here .

Fabulous write up.You captured their reactions and character nuances very well.Really looking forward for your more work😳

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

OMG...that was so so so beautiful...

Not very dramatic..not very realistic ..it was perfect balance of sweet adorable naughty IshRa...

I could visualize the entire write up...how he was affected by her words and comparison and his sweet revenge on his Jhansi ki Rani...

Ishita's reaction was so predictable..admit is girl..u r in love with ur Ravan Kumar

RavaN kumar took help of some lady to jalaofy Ishu...couldn't get better than this...

Aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai😆😆😆 ...

Sona called Ishu aunty thinking she is Raman's Mom ..that was hilarious ...she is HIS WIFE😆😆..CAPS & BOLD

Loved the last confrontation ..when she asked who is Sona and his reply to that...

- Tell me Raman who is it?

- You are a stupid plump, madrassan with big bright eyes and lovely long hair.

Mr CEO could have sealed the deal with a kiss😆😆😆...it was such a joyride...LOVED IT ...u r a natural writer😊❤️