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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was after shagun was given a tight slap across her face she was insulted once again.. ishita was there and the way she was there with the bhallas proved that neither ishita nor raman had any fight ..

it was just another fault of hers . her another defeat in the hands of the RKB.. the way she again and again trid to rule raman was actually mavellous but poor shagun she didn't understand still that the game is out of her hands now its not that geeky and innocent RKB but its the CEO.. highly praised and the rich RKB who will never be in her reach .. she should actually stop doing these childish acts..

raman looked at the jugde who herself was not sure how to deal with shagun..as far as she knows the couple looks deeply in love..she didnt miss the small isharas that raman everytime give to ishita .. it was their mutual cooperation that they hav ruhi now with them and she knew that ishita is actually proving to be the best mother ruhi could get.. whether it is ruhi's affection towards her ishima or their family's attachment she didnt have any doubt now ...

judge : if you are satisfied now miss shagun can we leave ..

raman gave an intense and literally murderous glare to shagun and she just shrugged off still trying to portray that she was the one who lost everything .. her loveless marriage she was the one who lost her daughter .. and all abla nari types. the judge left while when shagun didnt budge from her place .. raman asked her ..

raman : do you need an invitation ... or should i ask your so called boyfriend to come and take his shit with him.. believe me i will be obliged to do that ..

raman's smirk and his insulting was seen by everyone except ishita who was inside their room with ruhi..

shagun was angry and she yelled in her frustation

shagun : how dare you raman ...

raman came close , shagun for a second thought that he will approach her and her charm still affects him but she forget that he is the one who knew everything about her so called affairs.. her chaeting on him.. raman wen past her and showed her the door..

raman : just leave before i throw you out..

his anger was well evident that was somewhere subdued with his calm demenor...

shagun : don't you dare raman , i know you and this behenji's relation there is nothing between you two.. so just wait and watch i will take my daughter ..

ishita came in between seeing the two bickering..

ishita tried to stop but raman and shagun were out the door and raman the door seeing parmeet staring at ishita , he was having tough time now..

raman st : let me handle this wretched woman first than i will see that pervert..

raman : you don't have to tell me that i love my wife or not .. i am enough to show her and as far as i know , i can still see that puppy love of you andyour six feet boyfriend .. don't you think shagun that with aditya staying with you , you should better get married knowing that my son is growing and what image you two are portraying infront of him.. you know that those woman are called ... and you shouldn't want to be called you as a ..

before raman could say anything ishita stopped him.. he stopped looking at her ...

raman : what ishita , i am just telling her to be a good example for adi .. and as far as i know i know that adi will himself be with me .. and ruhi .. don't even think shagun about her .. today the way she greeted you ..forget i will even let you see her ... she has the best mother to be taken care off ...

shagun : just shut up raman ... you married this so called bhenji ...this ishita... don't you dare to put your finger on me...

ishita : shagun you please go... and raman come with me ..

she forcefully took raman with her while an angry shagun left..

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a short review from my side

Edited by suhaaana - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_

beautifully written ..plz continue


its a OS deepika 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana


its a OS deepika 😛



haha...They need to talk...if not in the show..at least make them talk in ur Fanfiction😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one.⭐️
P.S Suhana u had written a ff/ss too na? Please continue that too if possible. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Deepika_



haha...They need to talk...if not in the show..at least make them talk in ur Fanfiction😛



sweets reads the other OS thats my sixth one
just posted in the forum
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-

Good one.⭐️

P.S Suhana u had written a ff/ss too na? Please continue that too if possible. 😳



yup will continue
thanks for giving ur review
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nicee😊😊..though it ws more of Raman and Shagun..expecting ISHRA in your next OS😃😃..good job dear👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic OS
Loved it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its perfect!!!!!!!!!
just loved it❤️

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