A New Beginning for IshRa - Page 2

Janu ji, am so excited before reading the first line itself.. Osj on ishra 😊 ahhha

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

WOW ..WOW...WOW...AMAZINGGGLY well-written...u r such a natural writer dear..loved the way u portrayed her POV and last portion with Raman's POV was cherry on the cake...

He had felt his heart doing a somersault when he had set his eyes on her. What was happening to him? He was no longer a teenager. May be he was getting old and his heart was going weak? He would tell Mihir to fix an appointment with the heart specialist.

Poor guy dont have any idea..only this dentist can cure his brand new heart disease,,,cant wait for the confession😳


Great piece of writing dear..plz update soon


PS- Cant wait to read an OS written by Nikki😉

Thank u Deepika. I must say i am happy to see ur comments. U r the first member i received buddy request from on this forum. I must say u r amazingly talented. I am reading ur SS right now n i am impressed. Will comment there as soon as i am done with the 3 parts😃
Will update very soon. Thank u for ur encouragements.

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl

Janu ji, am so excited before reading the first line itself.. Osj on ishra 😊 ahhha

Will comment more later.

Ad😃
I am so happy to see u here. My first time on IshRa. I will wait for ur feedback. Nikki had encouraged me to write n u know how much i love writing so i am here. 😳

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

PS- Cant wait to read an OS written by Nikki😉

aww thank u...bt sorry dear...i donno y u all feel i shoudl write OS n i hv to say my tape recorded ans tht i am NOT story writer..i can never write lik u ppl on imaginary situations n ppl...😆😆...i need to see them n then only i get inspried to write dear..!!

so jinko jo aata hai unko hi woh karna chahiye...!!😳

What a perfect story!! It has all the elements of actual YHM :)

edited my chota post @pg 1 😆

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl

What a perfect story!! It has all the elements of actual YHM :)

- full on blushing ishu, bipolar rkb (Nikki 😊...), their cupid Ruhi, rkb's karelas, one liners, confused dentist and their self complicated ehsaas 😳

And heart specialist appointment 😆 seriously...!!!! LoL

Looking forward to next part. Kya twist laoge aap?

@bold..
ismein main kahan se aa gayi?😲😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

@bold..
ismein main kahan se aa gayi?😲😆

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl

Obviously! I believe bipolar rkb is a term coined by you right?? 😲

So I was just giving credit to the creator 😊

oh lik tht..yes yes me the proud creator of tht name for chaalu bhalla..😆

aditi dnt forget to see my comment in pg 1..😆