Hi everyone, so this is my first post on Yeh hai Mohobatein forum. I was unhappy with todays episode, I know most of you believe that Raman was not wrong and I agree my problem is that he should have stood for Ishita when Parmeet was insulting her like Simmi stood up for Parmeet, but instead he questioned Ishita.
This is my OS on the situation, hope your like it.
Raman and Ishita (Ishra OS): An apology!
Mrs. Iyer heard loud sob coming from Ishita's room, she walked in holding a plate of samber idly.
"ayyio Ishu please don't cry, sab thik ho jayega". She put her hand on her hand comforting her daughter who was wronged by those stuck up Bhallas, she wanted to march in that house give everyone a piece of her mind, but she her daughter Ishu would want that.
Ishu looked up her eyes swollen and red with crying.
"Amma they are not letting me Ruhi, meri kya galti hai Amma, koi meri baat kyun nahi samaj raha hai, Parmeet ek bohut ghatiya insaan hai, woh Simmi ko dhoka deh rahe hain".
"isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai ishu, unka nazariya galat and trust me they will find out, sach ki jeet hogi!". Mrs. Iyer replied hugging her daughter.
"likin kab Amma do hafte ho gaye hain aur mummy ji aur simmi mujhe Ruhi ko dekhne tak nahi deh rahi, kaisi hogi meri bacchi" Ishu asked crying, she didn't care about all she went through, but living without Ruhi was difficult for her.
"Woh bilkul thik hai" Mr. Iyer walked in, "in fact kal uske school hai phela din isliye unhone ek choti si party rakhi hai restaurant pe, tumhari amma aur mujhe invite bhi kiya Mr. Bhala ne. he added.
"ILLE, hum kahin nahi jaa rahe, uss Bhalla ne meri beti ki saath kitna bura behavior kiya, hum kahin nahi jayenge!" Ishu's mother replied sternly.
"Nahi amma, please aap jaiye, kam se kam meri taraf se koi toh hoga wahan Ruhi ke liye, main jaanti hun woh bhi mujhe bohut miss kar rahi hogi, aap log wahan honge tu usse acha lagega". She got up, wiping her tears and handed her mother a gift box.
"yeh ruhi ke liye, maine liya tha uske first day of school ke liye, aap please usse de dijiye ga".
"Likin Ishu"
"amma, please mere liye". Amma agreed to go the party.
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It was almost past 11:00pm Ishu was sat on the bed holding the #1mom trophy Ruhi had presented her, how she wished she could see her daughter again hear her voice, she wanted to hold her tight. Tears rolled down her eyes, as she remembered her moments with Ruhi.
Doorbell ringing brought her out her thoughts. "lagta hai Amma Appa agaye", she wiped her tears and went to open the door.
She opened a door and suddenly felt strong arms push her inside and lock the door from behind, since it was dark in the living room she couldn't see who it was.
"Kya batmeezi hai yeh kaun hain app". She asked.
"kya baat hai Ishita ji itni jaldi bhool gayi apne aashiq ko". Parmeet answered stepping forward. The light from the balcony showed his face to Ishita.
"Tum, Tumhari himmat kaisi huyi yahan aane ki, nikal jao yahan se". Ishita yelled clutching the trophy in her hand.
"Kya aadae hain aapki Ishita ji, itna sab hone ke baad aapki aakad wahin wahin hai" he stepped even closer, ishita moved back.
"Maine kaha yaha se chale jao Parmeet warna, main" Ishita wanted her voice to come across as strong, but honestly she was afraid and sounded more vulnerable.
"Warna kya ishita ji, kya karengi app Raman ko batengi, kaun vishwash karega aapka, Raman, Simmi, Mummy ji, Kaun saath dega apka in fact, iss waqt toh main yahan ho nahi, main Ruhi ki party mein hun, aapse toh bohut badle lene baaki hai". He clenched through his teeth and pulled Ishita by her arms. He held her strongly as she struggled to relieve herself from his grip.
"chodiye mujhe, Chodo" Ishita struggled, she scratched him with the trophy, in anger he pushed her on the floor, the enter table scratching her arm, she winced in pain, tears began rolling down her eyes, and fear over took her. He held her hands tightly and hovered over her like a pervert he was.
Neither of them heard the door unlock, "PARMEET" his loud angry voice shocked Parmeet he turned around only to find Raman Kumar Bhalla standing their, his face expressing sheer anger.
Ishita pulled her hand out of Parmeet's grip, she felt her nerves relax seeing Raman their, she was glad to see him.
"Himmat kaisi huyi teri!". Raman pulled up Parmeet from his collar.
"Raman, tum yeh kya kar rahe ho, tum galat samaj raho...Ishita ji ne hi mujhe yahan bhulya tha". He tried to act innocent, Raman's eyes became red with anger, he gave solid punch across his face.
"GHBARDAR agar IShita ke KHilaf ek lafz bhi kaha, kya lagta hai tumhe ki yeh koi raha chalti laadki hai jiske saath tu kuch bhi kar sakta hai". Ishita just stayed were she was, she was in shock, she didn't think Parmeet will try to molest her again, the fear was lingering their, what would have happened if Raman hadn't showed up.
"USS din tumne Ishita ke khilaaf bohut kuch kaha, maine suna kyunki tum Simi ke pati ho, aur hum tumhe kayi saalo se jaante hai likin, yeh mat samj lene ki mujhe tumpe vishwas tha, tumhari sachiya ka pata lagne ke liye mujhe waqt chahiya tha, isliye Ishita go apne Amma Appa ke saath aane diya yeh soche ke ki woh apne ghar safe rahegi, likin tu itna gira hua Insaan nikla ki yahan bhi aagaye".
Raman punched him once more, parmeet struggled to get out his grip he finally pushed him and ran out the door, Raman tried to catch him, but he went out the door, Raman wanted to follow him, but he heard a loud sob.
He looked back and saw Ishita still sitting, she looked vulnerable, he saw the long scratch on her arm that was bleeding, her hair was messed up from the struggle, and her eyes were red.
He walked up to her and put his hand forward, Ishita stared at his hand, she slowly got up. Raman watched her, she was struggling to maintain her balance, he tried to hold her.
"Please, don't touch me, haath mat lagayi mujhe!" She put up her hand which was shaking, Raman felt guilt overtaking him, she was deeply hurt.
"Ishita, meri baat suno!" Raman stepped forward but she moved back.
"nahi, aapko kya lagta hai aaj aapne mujhe bachaliye, toh bohut mahan ban gaye app, aisa bilkul nahi hai Mr. Raman Kumar Bhalla, aap koi mahan insaan nahi hai, agar apne mera vishwash kiya hota toh yeh sab aaj nahi hota, yeh sab aapki galti hai". She yelled, her voice shaking with fear.
"Main koi mahan bane ki khoshish nahi kara raha Ishita (raman replied upset at hilself for putting ishita in this situation), tum dekho tum please relax karo, tum abhi shock main ho please baitho, main paani laata hun" Raman went towards the kitchen. A minute later he came out with the glass of water, he turned on the lights and looked around the mess, the table was moved few things were scattered on the floor giving him the idea of the struggle Ishita was going through, he looked around the living room, it was empty, Ishita was not there.
"Ishita!" he shouted no reply, he checked her room, she was now where. He became tensed, he quickly went out to find her.
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Ishita walked on the road, she could not stand being in the house, where Parmeet had assaulted her for the second time, the image of his face was bothering her, memories of no one believing her, Raman's quietness bothered her.
Cars were zooming past her, honking at her, but she didn't hear any of those noises, her thoughts had enclosed her from the outside world.
Suddenly she felt an arm grip her and pull her, instantly thinking its Parmeet, she screamed.
"chodo MUjhe". She struggled.
"Ishita relax main hun!" Raman said, Ishita opened her eyes, her nerves calming. Once Raman saw Ishita relax, "Tumhara dimag kharab ho gaye hai cars horn mar rahi tumhe sunai nahi deh raha kya, agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh" He yelled, his anger expressing his wariness.
Ishita pushed him away, "Toh kya haan, aapka kya jaata, main toh sirf Ruhi ki maa hun na aap ke liye aur kuch bhi nahi" Ishita yelled.
"aapne toh mujhe pe vishwash tak nahi kiya, in fact mujhe pe shak kiya, Jaante ho Raman phele mujhe lagta tha ki tum sirf kharoos ho, gussal ho, hamare beech mein pyar nahi likin mujhe laga atleast ek respect air ek trust ka rishta toh hai, likin aap," She moved back.
"TOh main kya karta Ishita, meri ek taraf tum thi aur ek taraf mera pura parivaar, Simmi ki khushi and main confused tha" Raman said in his defense.
"Toh kya main aapke parivaar ka hisa nahi hun Raman, kya mera rishta sirf Ruhi tak sehmat hai" Ishita asked. Raman was quiet for a moment.
"Main yeh nahi keh rahi Raman ki aapko mera saath dena chahiye tha likin kam se kam thora vishwash at least benefit of doubt toh dena chahiya tha, Parmeet mujhe pe kitne ghatiya ilzaam laga raha tha, usse chup karan ki bajai apne mere character pe shaq kiya!, mana ki hamare beech pati patni jaisa koi rishta nahi hai, likin aap toh mujhe jaante hain na, aapne socha bhi kais liye ki main aisa kuch karoungi, I hate you Raman!" Ishita in between sobs.
Her words did something to Raman, even thought he did believe her and was doing detective work with Mihir into Parmeet, but he realized he should have given her some hope that he believed her, he had hurt her deeply.
He moved forward, and held her face in his palm wiping her tears with his thumb.
"I am sorry, Ishita" Raman said, Ishita looked into his eyes, it expressed his guilt, his sincerity.
He pulled her close and hugged her, it was their second hug, this hug was different, it developed trust in their relationship, and he held her tightly giving her the support she needed. Ishita hugged him back.
"I am truly, very sorry Ishita!" he whispered in her hair.
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