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Hey Guys
Encouraged by the appreciation received for my first OS "Raman cannot bear to lose Ishita", I'm back with a short story on IshRa again. This is based on Ekta Kapoor's typical dramas and a little bit of Bollywood masala. The story revolves around how Parmeet's true character will come forward and how IshRa will become closer due to this.
Part I
Raman is on the phone.
Client on the other side of the phone, " Raman, I'm sorry main tumhare office tak aane ka time nahi nikaal paa raha hun. Tum please mujhe Connaught Place main coffee shop per mil ne aa jao. Main papers wahin sign kar doonga. Mujhe kahin dusri jagah jaana hai."
Raman replies, "Mr. Kapoor, aap mat tension lijiye, main aa jaounga. Main aadhe ghante main aapse wahan milta hun."
Raman sits in his car and starts driving to reach the coffee shop. He reaches the coffee shop and calls his client to ask where he is. The client, Mr. Kapoor says that he is sorry he is running a little late and will be there in 10 minutes.Raman stands outside his car and leans on the bonnet and starts waiting for the client. His back is towards the coffee shop.
Inside the same coffee shop, Parmeet is sitting with a beautiful girl and is holding her hands and laughing. He also does not see Raman. He pays the bill in the coffee shop and then comes out with the girl, with his hand around her waist. They both go to a bike and Parmeet sits on it. The girl sits behind him and holds Parmeet tightly and kisses him on his shoulder. She says loudly, " O Parmeet, you are the best boyfriend ever...." and laughs.
Raman hears Parmeet's name and turns around to see. At the same time, Parmeet drives and goes. Raman was able to see only his side face.
Raman is shocked. He thinks, " Yeh Parmeet yahan kya kar raha hai? Aur yeh ladki kaun thi uske saath. Kahin Parmeet ... Nahi, nahi, yeh main kya soch raha hun. Parmeet aisa nahi hai. Aur waise bhi Delhi hum Punjabiyon ki hai, hazaar Parmeet bharein pade hai. Aur maine toh thik se uska chehra bhi nahi dekha. Jarur mujhe koi dhoka hua hoga."
But the image flashes in his mind again and even though he saw the side face he thinks it is Parmeet and starts feeling uneasy. He was just about to call home and ask Simmi where Parmeet is when he feels a hand on his shoulder.
He turns around and sees Mr. Kapoor standing in front of him.
Mr. Kapoor, "Hi Raman, Kahan khoye huye ho?"
Raman, " Kahin nahi, Mr. Kapoor. Main toh aapka hi intezaar kar raha tha."
Mr. Kapoor laughs jovially and says, "Yeh tum naye naye shaadi waalein logon ka yahi problem hai. Dhyan hamesha kahin aur hi rehata hai. Kaam main toh mushkil se maan lagta hai."
Raman laughs and in his head thinks, " Jiski biwi Jhansi ki Rani ho woh bechara aadmi kaam chahe bhi toh kaise kar sakta hai. Madrasan Kahin ki".
Raman and Mr. Kapoor both go inside the coffee shop and Raman forgets all about the Parmeet incident.
Guys, this is just the beginning. I have a rough story planned out. Let me know if you guys like the first scene and I will post further then.
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