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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dekhe kar baba " she ease the pain by rubbing it gently , she look at he , he was mesmerise her " i asked you but aap kabhi kaise ka baat manta kahan ho" she look at him angrily , he pull back his hand " you change i will bring for you " she said & stand between stove & him

"Ruhi " he said

"Ruhi is in bedroom , she was asking about you " she pour the tea , he walk in bedroom sat next to Ruhi


"Adi had asked me to change the sir name as he dont want to be know by my name . will you too ?" he tried to stop his tears ,but they float out of his eyes ,he run his finger in Ruhi hairs " you are my child my blood " he kissed her forehead


Ishita at same time walk in , she saw him weeping & hiding his tears ,she ignored & kept the tea on his bedside "you sleep with her , i will sleep on sofa " she walked with her coffee to sofa, he taken off his coat ,she was busy reading her book ,she secretly look at him ,he was stressed out & upset ,"what happened , hope Adi is fine " she wondered he walked out of bedroom to freshen up " i will call Shagun and tries to find " she was lost in her own thought when he walk back struggling with his shirt button , she left her book & got up

"Thanks " he saw her coming he said & raise his hand ,she stopped , he took a step forward , she look away & closed it " you sleep with her , i will watch tv " he said as she finished closing

"thanks for giving me back my Ruhi , she is so happy back to her cheerful mood" she said , he look at her " i always told her that you love her but she had doubt " she paused


picked up the cup & walked to sofa ,he settle there , Ishita noticed he was in deep thought

" i am a good listener you can share if you want to " she whisper , he look at her he wanted to say something when Ruhi started shaking violently



"Raman" Ishita tries to control her , Raman ran to other side of bed

"Papa bacho doggy " she murmur

"Ruhi Papa is here beta " he caress her cheek to wake her ,Ishita hold her legs as she was kicking ,Raman worriedly look at her

" she still has fear " she caress Ruhi face ,he cuddle her in his arms ,

"bus beta, Papa will not let anyone hurt you " he kissed her forehead ,she stopped shaking, Ishita got emotional to hide her tears she got up

"Thanks for taking care of my daughter " he said as he saw her wiping her tears

"she is mine " Ishita said showed him her eyes & trying to take Ruhi from him ,saw a weak smirk on his face , she understand he was teasing her , she drop the idea to fight



" you have taken away my daughter , now you want to be part of my sorrows too " he said

She look at him ,his eyes was closed he was hugging Ruhi

"you can trust me if you like " she said

"let me live with pain , you enjoy your daughter " he laid down Ruhi & walk back to sofa , left Ishita in surprise


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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are so good. Very nice 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved the ending... cliff hanger and suiting the current track ... I want to see this on screen
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb one dear!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww😳😳...such a lovely update😊😊..so beautifully written nadiya dear..😃😃..
but the last scene was painful....
"Let me live with pain"..truly this is the state of Raman in the show too....
Hope he allows Ishita to understand his pain..😃😃..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome..!! Thank you so much..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww so cute...loved it! Can't wait to see tomorrow's episode! Super excited!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haha when i was yesterdays precap i was for sure you are going to write the last scenes os 😆 Glad you did, loved it alot😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I always love your take on the story..this is very beautiful...thank you soo much :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb!!!!!!!!!! u r really very gud in dis😊

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