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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ishita asked her in laws to come with her to attend the awards she made Ruhi ready , Ruhi look at herself in mirror

"aaj tou mein bilkul aap ki tarah lag rahi hoon" Ruhi kissed Ishita

" "yes mera bacha " she hug her & applied her kajol

"Ishita did you asked Raman to come " Mr Bhalla asked her ,she look away

" He is busy " she said & walkout to avoid him


Mr Bhalla called Ruhi to him & asked him to call Raman

Raman was trying to work in office but his mind was stuck at last night event. at the same time he received call from home

"uff no" he became irritated & picked the call

"papa Ishu mama is getting a award ,if you will come she will like it "she said as he picked the call

"hmm"

"papa aap aao ga na" she asked

"Ruhi i am busy " he cut the call & switch off his cell , he rested his head with the back of his chair & closed his eyes "if i will not go they all will not leave me , Shadi kyun kai " he bang his head with the back of chair



At the award


everyone was present accept Raman was not there

"Akka is Jiju coming" she asked Ishita

" i don't know " Ishita caress Ruhi

"Ishu mama all the best " she kissed her cheek, Ishita look at her .



Raman reached the hotel , he was parking car when he saw Ashok coming towards him , he wanted to go back but he stopped , he ignored him & passed him , as he passed him Ashok " i don't know why i love your wives , first i use to love your Shagun, now i love Ishita " he had a cunning smile

" i told you not to take my wife name " Raman grab his collar & punched him

Ishita who had come out to call him saw him fighting with Ashok

"he start everywhere " she ran to them & freed Ashok

"what is your problem ?" she shouted

"he "

" whatsoever he said is right , you can't see others happiness " she angrily said & walk back


Raman was stunned , he look at Ashok who winked at him he boiled " i will not leave you " he grab his collar




In Hall


Ishita named was announced she grab Ruhi hand & walked with her

"Papa nahi aaiya " Ruhi said sadly

"you are with me , i am more happy" she smiled " i knew this man can't tolerate other success " she walked to the stage

They gave Ishita award , she asked Ruhi to receive it on her behave

"madam can you pick her so we can take pic "photographer asked ,Ishita picked her up , she was about to loss her balance when she felt a strong arm wrapped around her waist to support her ,she look side away ,Raman was standing next to her taking all weight of Ruhi on him ,& holding Ishita tightly

"Papa see my best mom got award " she kissed Ishita ,Raman smiled & took Ruhi from her "Papa i will keep this with your's " she said , he nodded & they walk back to their seats


"Papa how we both are looking same same " Ruhi asked Raman, he look at her in surprise

"Ruhi look at me " he turn Ruhi face towards him

"bolo na papa " she asked ,she caressed his face

"yes you are looking like your Ishu mom " he hug her

"i am sorry beta " he whisper

"i love you papa" she said

"Papa love you to beta " he kissed her head

Ishita smiled & capture the moment " thanks Shagun for telling me i got the real reward " she hide her tears


"Akka i said he will come " Mihika teased her ,she saw Mihir she walked to him

"Thanks Mihir " she said

"my pleasure , i am glad we reach in time " he whisper

"where was he?" she asked

" when you called me i went to his office he was fast asleep "he said

"what happened on you hand?" she said

Flash back

Mihir received call from Mihika he went to Raman office he found him sleeping & murmuring , when he walked closed to him to wake him he grab his collar & tries to hit him


"Raman " Mihir shakes him & free himself , he opened his eyes"kya hogaya hai"

"it was just a dream " Raman murmur "what is time?" he checked it " i have to reach hotel " he stand

Flash back end


As he saw Raman coming toward him "thanks yar " he pat his cheek " sorry"

"with who you were fighting in dreams ?" Mihir asked

"I will not let him come near her " he said & walk

Ishita heard & with eyes asked Mihir , he raised his shoulder ,she saw Raman talking with Ruhi , she was sitting on car roof waving her trophy in air ,he tickled her , she giggle

"you alway be like your mom " he said as he saw Ishita coming close to them , he knew she had hear him

" Ishu maa papa said i should be like you " she shouted

"Shagun he hates you so much that he avoid Ruhi because of her mole "she said to herself & prays they father & daughter always stay like this



i read spoiler & wrote , i think the spoiler is Fake


Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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i must say THANKS TO YHM tht i cud read such outstandings stories of a gifted writer by u...I'm in IF nw for 5+ years,i can say u r one of those very few writers whom i wud myself call happily a FAN..😊...

u rock Naddiya...👏👏...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

i must say THANKS TO YHM tht i cud read such outstandings stories of a gifted writer by u...I'm in IF nw for 5+ years,i can say u r one of those very few writers whom i wud myself call happily a FAN..😊...

u rock Naddiya...👏👏...

oh me blushing here

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab OS!!! Keep writing dear!!!!
Loved it!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Man you are an awesome writer and have a story for every scene and most of them are excellent keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --MI--

Man you are an awesome writer and have a story for every scene and most of them are excellent keep writing

thx i can only write on character i feel , Ishra is one of them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow so beautiful dear
Ur os an stories keep me goin for 24 hrs till the next episode airs
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Hi nadi ur doing fab job alwyz love ur 👏 i apperciate ur work just ossawm 👏
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amazing.
nads u r an amazing writer
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Amazing i loved it😳
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