A short original ishita - Raman scene after Raman drunken drama

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ishita is pretty jittery regarding the marriage

Ishita so goes and sits on the bench downstairs

Now Meanwhile Raman comes fully drunk


Raman comes and sits on the bench

Ishita is shocked and angry that Raman is heavily drunk


Raman is not in his senses and before he turns towards ishita lights go off


Ishita asks "Raman why are you so heavily drunk "

Raman starts laughing continuously


Ishita gets even more irritated
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Raman then says " see madam I am about to do a act of bravery

Raman says "I am about to marry Jhansi ki rani and I can't marry her normally so to gather courage I had to drink "

Ishita gets even more angry and is about to say something

But Raman continues " but I have a hunch she is going to be a best mother for my Ruhi "

Raman continues "and I feel she is the best thing that has happened to Ruhi "

Ishita hearing this starts crying

But Raman is still going on and says "and but for me I feel she will prove to be ...

Ishita is surprised

But before Raman could finish he passes out

Ishita is intrigued and thinks to herself " so what did he mean whether I will be good or bad for me "

Ishita to passed out Raman "you know you make more sense when you are drunk then in normal state "

Ishita sighs and helps Raman to his flat
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chathu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol I was expecting more from Raman .😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome👏 Her being the best mum to Ruhi is the best thing ever Raman said to his Jhansi ki Rani would be wife😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one again...
title these scenes as Oneshots ie OS...and then make index for ur writing and post link to all the OS there...it will be awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Awesome👏Her being the best mum to Ruhi is the best thing ever Ramansaid to his Jhansi ki Rani would be wife😉

thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like your One Shots a lot :P
Superbly Written, Ekta & CVs should take some ideas from you :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps_92


</div>nice one again...
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title these scenes as Oneshots ie OS...and then make index for ur writing and post link to all the OS there...it will be awesome

thanks for suggestion
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. Must say short, but it comprehend every feeling, every thought! Too awesome!
I would have loved if you made it little longer, but it was very well written!hats off!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome.
I wanted something sensual😳.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks folks for the feedback

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