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Posted: 11 years ago
Its so short 😔 I want more 😃
loved it
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awww teaser
Im waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx for the pm but such a small update anyways it was amazing loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26

by the way i have updated on 18 feb , didn't make you wait for a week

guess this is your very first comment on my any work
Yes, I am a silent reader but I love ur stories I couldn't stop myself to comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey continue soon..loved all updates..good going n thanks for the pms :)



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Posted: 11 years ago
If I have to describe this is 1 word than I would say it was just 'MAGNIFICENT'.👏 Read it all in one short and it was literally mindblowing. Just loved the way you formatted the story and how you explained their emotions. I'm going in for a 2nd round. Looking forward to chapter 9.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Romi & Simmi took Raman SP friend with them to Shagun home , the guard didn't stop them ,they all got shock of their life when they found Ruhi all alone in big home burning with high fever & there was no sign of Shagun

"Ishita was right " Simi picked her up in his arm

" we have to take her to hospital" Romi said

"tell Raman " Simi kissed Ruhi " i will not leave this Shagun " she hurriedly walk out


At home

Ishita tries to go down Raman grab her arm "listen to me , if we will go out from here my friend will be in problem " he almost request her she didn't agrees to go in she sat on the stairs , he fetch her shawl & sat next to her

"you will get sick it is cold here" he wrapped it around her

"why they are taking so long" she said while biting her lips ,he look at her " why don't you call them ?" she asked him

"It is hardly 5 mins " he said politely, she tries to get up but he hold her arm "keep sitting" ,she look at him

at the same time his cell started ring he picked it up ,"what happened ?" she shakes him ,his face change color "hmmm " he didn't said anything , she tries to read his face & snatch cell from him as was not able to hear ,he hold her hand in his " you take her hospital & keep informing us " he look at Ishita who was hang back " Ishita " he drop the cell & hold her "Ishita " he rest her head on his shoulder & pat her cheek "Ishita " she was all pale & cold he picked her up & walked in

"Maa papa "he shouted & take her to bedroom ,made laid her down "Ishita " he pat & rub her hands

"Papa " he shouted on top of his voice "Ruhi will be fine " he cupped her face & said , Mr Bhalla enter their bedroom

"what happened ?" he look at Ishita

"Papa she fainted , i am trying to wake her but she is not opening her eyes " he said worriedly & sprinkle water on her face

"go get water " he asked him to move .he look at his papa as if asking i can't leave her " ok i will get " he pat his face & walk out , Mrs Bhalla to walk in rubbing her eyes Mrs lyer followed her as she heard noise coming from their home

"what happened to my Ishu?" she asked & started crying ,Raman panic

"I am taking her to hospital " he was about to pick her up she murmur

"Raman Ruhi " he placed her back & caress her cheek "Ishita she is fine Simi is bring her home " he rub her hand , she shakes her head

"make her drink water "Mr Bhalla pass him glass , Mrs Iyer came forward to take care of her daughter but mr Bhalla stopped her, Raman sat next to her & make her sit next to him

"please drink water " he placed next to her lips , she slightly open her eyes lean her head & look at him

"Raman Ruhi " she whisper

"they are bring her " he brushed his lips with her hairs peck her forehead "she is fine " he made her drink water ,she shiver against him he tightly hold her next to him

"Ishita what is wrong ?" Mrs Iyer asked her worriedly .Raman told them what all happened .

"Shagun b****" Mrs bhalla said " Ruhi was with us ,why she took her if she can't take care of her " she fume

"Let Ishita rest " Mr Bhalla asked them to walk out

"i will be with my daughter "Mrs lyer tries to stay , Mr bhalla hold both the ladies hand & walk out

"let him be with her ,in this way they both will come close "he smiled at them


" you are a dr ,even then you have such a small heart" he caress her face

"i am a mom too , a mom always has weak heart" she tightly clutched his shirt "ask them " she murmur ,He called them his friend told Ruhi has a mark on her face . the Dr has examined her & filed a case against Shagun of physical abusing. Raman some how control his anger as he knew if he will react Ishita will get more worried , he look at her she was silently praying , he gave a weak smile

"now you will take care of your Ruhi for ever" he whisper ,she open her eyes & look at him ,he told her everything

" i will not leave them " she sat & said angrily, he pull her back in his embrace

"have patience " he caress her


Simmi brought Ruhi direct to their bedroom

"Ruhi my bacha " she free herself & took Ruhi in her arms close to her heart , Raman caress Ruhi

"Dr was asking us to admit her but we brought her home "Romi said

" I will take care of my baby " she kissed her & covered her

"Dr asked to keep wet cloth " Simi placed bowl near her

"thanks Simi " Ishita hold her hand & said

"Bhabi we all should thank you as because of you we all reached in time " she smiled

Ishita caress Ruhi cheek & kissed on the bruise "was she always so inhuman ?" he look at her as he closed the door of bedroom ,he didn't reply & walk to washroom . He turn on the tap & cried "because of Ishita & my friend i am controlling myself otherwise i had sort them both " he punch the wall hard

Ishita who was place wet cloth on Ruhi forehead left her & ran to washroom "Raman are you ok?" she knocked at the door it opened , he was stand next to sink crying " Raman" he stopped her to coming close to him

"you go leave me alone " but she walked in & hug him ,he burst out as she hold him close to her

"to hurt her she took my daughter " he shouted & tries to punch on wall ,she grab his hand in time & pull him out with her

" what you think by hurting yourself ,she will be fine or you will take revenge from them" she made him sit & wiped his tears ,he caress Ruhi ,Ishita sat next to him & tries to calm him by gently rubbing his back , he took Ruhi in his arms next to his heart

"Papa can't live without you " he sobbed & kissed the bruise , Ishita was overwhelmed with emotional pain ,she wrap her arm around him tightly & weeped , he pull her too in his embrace & kissed away her tears " If you will break who will support me & her " he whisper while plucking away tears from her cheek , she shyly hide herself in his arm , cheek Ruhi forehead ,"she is getting better "she whisper

"hmmm you go to sleep " he whisper , she lean her head & look at him , he was looking at the ceiling lost in deep though ,she didn't disturb him, she switched the cloth over Ruhi forehead , there was a pin drop silence when his cell started ,she look at him ,he had doze off ,she quickly turn it off

"how much he had faced alone ? "she fondly run her fingers in his hairs , there was a pain on his face ,she tries to take make Ruhi rest on bed but failed as he was holding her tight , next to him ,she smiled & let them sleep like that very carefully she kept on change the wet cloth ,time flies


At dawn ,Raman tried to turn,he felt load on him , he opened his eyes & found Ishita on his left & Ruhi on his right , Ishita was about to slide down the bed "uff yeh larki " he pull her up with one arm

"Ruhi" she at once sat & look here & there

"you were about to fall down bed " he said hold her from waist tightly

" i was awake " she check Ruhi forehead "Raman" she grab his hand placed on her forehead

"oh my God " he panic & placed Ruhi in Ishita lap

"call Dr , i check half hour back it was normal " she said

" i am " he pat her & called Dr



Dr told them Ruhi is in state of shock ,because of fear she is having temperature, they must try to decrease her temperature & assure her that no one will hurt her,everyone gather in their room praying silently

It was afternoon when Simmi come to Raman

"bhai have something" Raman look at her "please ask bhabi to have something , she is crying badly she will get sick"

"ok you bring " he look at Ishita who was praying

"Ishita have your lunch" he placed the plate infornt of her, she didn't look at it & placed a wet cloth on Ruhi forehead

"i am talking to you " he touch her shoulder ,she with moist eyes look at him & kissed Ruhi hands " you will get sick like this " he tries to feed her she moved his hand

"till she will open her eyes & talk to me i will not have anything " she sealed her lips

"what is this nonsense you will faint again" he whisper ,but she didn't look at him ,he look at the lunch it was punjabi food , he walked out direct to Iyer place

"what happened beta ?" Ishita mom asked him

"please can you give me what Ishita likes to eat " he asked sleepily

"sure beta " Ishita mom caress his face & gave him ,he walk back to his place , he sat next to her

" if you will not have it , she will not talk to you " he with hand try to feed her

"are you crazy ? take back your words koi asie baat karta hai " she shouted

"ok ok sorry sorry " he stuff her mouth ,she with teary eyes look at him ,& placed her hand on her mouth "ishita fine don't eat , i will too not have medicine " he turn other side

"but you are having antibiotic you can't skip it " she said , he hide his smile & tries to get up , she hold his arm

"Ruhi your papa really blackmail me " she tries to take plate from him but he shakes his head & with eyes ask her to take care of Ruhi , he himself feed her

" Ruhi your mom is acting like a good girl come on open your eye " he whisper as he had made her finish the whole plate ,he peck her head

Ruhi moved her head & murmur "Ishi maa "

"Raman see she listed you " Ishita shakes him , he smiled at her happiness & thank God silently

"


my birthday treat for you guys , sorry it is sad , i can't help it

Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update...loved Raman Ishita and Ruhi bonding...
Happy birthday 👏 😊 ...many many happy returns of the day...May God bless u 👏 😳 😳
Edited by pri12 - 11 years ago
snehasri thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Happy Birthday😃
Edited by snehasri - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely...
i hope now ruhi will alwaays b wid thm...

pls cont soon..

thanx for the pm...


and ya dont proget to pm me next time u update...

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