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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi,
You guys might be knowing that every tamilian Brahmin knows music, whether it is singing or playing a musical instrument or dancing. So my OS is based on this.

As per the spoilers Raman and Ruhi, Shagun and Ashok, ishika and prateik will be going on an event.

In the event a singing program is organized, where the the most popular karanatic singer malini iyer will be singing in the event. She is an old lady and very famous all over the India for her singing.
The event is about to start and all the people are gathered at the stage to hear her sing. As usual Raman is staring at Shagun and Ashok and ishika is staring at Ruhi. Raman leaves Ruhi's hand and she is running to meet ishika and in the process she falls down and gets hurt. Ishika comes running to her and Raman scolds ishika and asks her to keep away from his daughter. In the meanwhile prateik calls ishika and she goes to him.

All the guests take their seats and malini iyer takes her seat at the stage,Ishika recognizes her and tries to hide so that malini cannot see her. Malini starts singing but she starts coughing after 2 minutes and cannot complete her song. The people in the event gets restless and Ishika cannot see this. She waits for sometime but the situation remains the same. So ishika starts singing in the most beautiful voice from the crowd and moves towards the the stage. Ishika is singing the karanatic music most beautifully and Raman and Prateik looks at her surprising. She reaches the stage and takes blessings from Malini and sits next to her and completes thes song. People gets mesmerized by her singing and there is a pin drop silence in after she finishes the song. Ishika completes the song with " Guru brahma, guru Vishnu, guru devo maheswaraha,guru sakshat para brahma tasmisvi guruvenamaha " and touches malini's feet once again and completes her song. Every one claps for her for more than5 minutes, but Raman stares at her in astonishment.

Malini introduces ishika to the crowd as her most beloved disciple and the most talented singer who can carry on her saga. After the event everyone appreciates Ishika, malini wants ishika to take up singing as her profession. Right then Ruhi asks for some water and Raman comes to get some water for her which is behind ishika. An owner of the music company approaches ishika and wants to sign up her for his company and offers a blank cheque. But Ishika refuses the offer and says that she does not want to do business with singing as it is vey sacred for her and she only sings for her happiness and for charity. She enjoys her profession as a doctor which is helping people. The owner tries to convince her but she denies his request with respect. The owner leaves and Malini asks Ishika is this becoz of Subbu, ishika says she does not want to go there. Raman is hearing all this from behind and he looks at Ishika with admiration. In the mean while prateik come there and she introduces him as her would be husband and Raman leaves from there.

Its late night and everyone is driving home, prateik asks Ishika that why she never told him that she is such a good singer. Ishika says that we just met, and there is lots to learn about each other. It's night and Raman lays on the bed and remembering how Ishika has rejected the blank cheque and how he called her family as gold diggers and feels bad about it. Next day morning he reaches the office and sees Mihir upset and not interested in the work. In the evening he decides to call Ishika and talk about Mihir and Mihika.

He calls ishika's house but amma picks up the call, she asks why did he call their house. Ishika drags the phone and asks the reason for calling. Raman says that he wants to talk about Mihika and Mihir but ishika does not wish to meet him. Raman get angry and shouts that this is not for them and we cannot let two lovers suffer because of their differences.Ishika agrees to meet him at the coffe shop.


This is my first OS . Please forgive me for any mistakes...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one dear.. Interesting.. 😊😊
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Very Nice OS...

Beautifully written...and well thought out...

Keep Writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written
loved the update
Continue writing :-)
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Its beautifully written... you should continue your writings.. loved it...:)
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nice os.. plz continue asap :)
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Very nice OS please continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all for the beautiful compliments and also for encouraging me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...u can surely continue this os into an ss
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Nice ... Plz keep it up dear ... Any plan for next part :)

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