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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Karan comes saying well guys, now is time for some dance and Karan plays a song and all of them start their slow dancing :

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AORjBFTiItE[/YOUTUBE]

Karan grabs Abha's hands and starts dancing and all of them are happily dancing. Lata while dancing almost trips and falls while Raj grabs her and holds her in time while Lata looks at Raj and hugs him and they continue dancing. Saaniya then looks around and smiles and tells to Sanskar, look at all of them Sanskar. How happy are all of them. We should not trouble them and lets leave from here. Sanskar says Saaniya, you know our condition very well and why we have came here, so just listen to what i said and as they turn, they see Karan and Abha looking at them. Karan says why are you saying that you would trouble us? Aren't be bestfriends? Saniya, we have been friends since small and even you have started thinking of me as a stranger? Saniya looks at Sanskar and Sanskar cuts in saying, you know about Saaniya. She gets worried for everything. Veer comes and calls everyone for food and while having food, Karan introduces Sanskar to Raj saying He is Raj Singhania, Lata didi's husband. And he is Sanskar, Abha's childhood friend and also married my childhood friend Saniya. Both Raj and Sanskar shakes hands and Raj asks Sanskar, so tell me. What are you doing in UK?

Sanskar starts to get panic and he says he is doing his own business there taking over his father in law's business and Raj asks questions regarding Sanskar's business which Sanskar feels uneasy and Lata comes to Raj and says arey, this is not a business conference but a family gathering. So leave aside all the business talk and they all laugh and Sanskar sights a relieve. Daiima is on the phone to someone saying 'I need to get her out somehow and i need to do it fast' and hangs her call. At Swarn Bhavan, Raj and Lata are about to leave where before leaving, Lata says Raj ji, before we leave, we have to do something. Its not for us but for our child and our child really needs her blessings. Raj asks who is it and Lata says Maa. Raj looks angry but Lata says please Raj ji, for me and our child. Lata and Raj then takes blessings from Aruna ji and Aruna ji hugs Lata and Lata says i will soon bring you back to our house and they leave. Sanskar then gets a phone call which is not shown and he says i have told you that i would certainly keep to my words. So don't keep calling me and puts down the phone in anger.

The next day morning, Sanskar calls Abha to follow him out as they have not spoken and kept in touch for so long and Abha follows Sanskar. On the way, Abha updates on all that has happened after Saaniya and Sanskar left and they both have good time exchanging memories. Abha then asks Sanskar how is his life in UK and how has he been? Sanskar says that is what i didn't know how to tell you Abha and i really need your help. Abha says my help? Sanskar says something in which is muted where Abha is shocked 😲

Precap : As soon as Abha and Sanskar arrive back at Swarn Bhavan, Karan says where have both of you gone early in the morning leaving me behind? Sanskar says we just had some good time talking. Am i right Abha? Abha stares at Sanskar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What can I say Visha?? 👏👍🏼🤗
Message to Kavita: read this topic NOW
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Is it really good Shobhi. I just plan what is going to happen and just start writing as the idea keeps flowing 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Visha_Dhami

Is it really good Shobhi. I just plan what is going to happen and just start writing as the idea keeps flowing 😆

definitely good. far far better version than what kavita & CV's showed us. That is why you got 3 emoticons from me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haha, i now need to plan how to continue the story. Any guesses who were Daiima talking to about and what is Sanskar's problem?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Visha_Dhami

Haha, i now need to plan how to continue the story. Any guesses who were Daiima talking to about and what is Sanskar's problem?

re. daaima - I would still say Dev as she used him so often in her plans. I know the last track on them was a hush hush so CV's/Kavita made him her son but if the show had continued then I think it would have been a different relation. After all Dev is the only common link with Lata so definitely daaima talking to Dev.
Don't think it would have been Samarjit (lata's ex).
re. sanskar - he is broken. He might have taken a deal which went wrong so his company got into liquidation OR his company is in the process of being taken over by another corporate so he is asking abha if either Prasads or Raj could bid for his company. At the moment it looks like he is going to be negative but I think he is only worried and don't want saniya to say anything to the prasads in case she gives wrong impression.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are really smart Shobhi and that is something similar i have thought. Not yet plan if Sanskar is going to be totally bad or that he only needs help. Lets see how it goes as i start writing 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice.. visha hope u become a cv one day.. i must say.. nice plot and i like how u are mixing suspense with also some romance from the characters.. (dancing) nice.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is just fantastic Visha,it is much better than the cv's version and you are truly a talented writer and still a bit doubtful about Sanskar,why did he come back after all these years and what did he tell Abha that she became shocked after hearing it.I just can't wait for the next episode and thank you Visha.👏👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone for the support, the next one will be posted next Saturday. So keep the guesses going 😆

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