New FF:TUM MERE KAUN HO...(pt 4 pg 2)

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TUM MERE KAUN HO...
part 1
SWARNA BHAWAN,the palatial mansion in ujjain where Jagmohan Prasad and his family resides.He is the most famous lawyer in ujjain . His family consists of his wife Pratibha,his sons Vimal jagmohan Prasad and his wife Shaili,Veer Prasad and his wife Priyanka and his most favourite beta or the pet of the entire family Karan Jagmohan Prasad his twin brother Ranchod prasad who is in mumbai and is dreaming about a career in acting.They have a sister Kanika Prasad who is spoilt by the love of her parents,brothers and bhabhis.Vimal is doing business and veer helps jagmohan at his office and karan is a lawyer by profession and he also works with Jagmohan.
In Ujjain itself there lives Takur Uday Pratap Sing and his family consisting of his wife Chandraprabha,his divorced daughter lata,his son Prakash who is an auto driver and his favourite beti abha who wished to become a lawyer but had to leave her studies in between as takur could no longer support her studies as he was having certain financial problems.One evening Karan was checking his mail and his friends requests.he was just randomly going through the messages.suddenly a name startled him "ABHA" .he was upset . But he decided to read what the message was .it was "Hi Karan .. do u remember this abha after this two years where there was no contacts with you . hope you are doing well at ur profession. well i'm getting married soon and am writing this message to invite you to my marriage.it's on 18th march and hope you will make sure that u will come for u know that i have very few friends and u r one of my best friends.after all this much happening in life i really don't know what life has in store for me.i'm really worried... any ways plz don't forget to come i'll wait for u...good night... your abha".
karan couldn't believe his eyes and he read the mail again and again especially the last line "your abha".karan felt something touched his heart.he felt heavy at his heart to hear about abha's marriage.he stood up and went to the cupboard where his books were kept.he took one out and turned the pages. there was a photo of abha in it which he took while she was talking without her knowing.he came with that book to the window and sat on a chair there.there was gentle breeze and moonlight there though the window.he closed his eyes and he went back to his college days..abha was a very bright student and everyone liked her.she was in the same class as karan.karan loved her very much but he never let her know it.he admired her and knew the very presence of her without even looking at her.that much he loved her. he never told her that he loved her because he was just waiting for the right time,when he will finish the course and become a lawyer and will be able to stand on his own feet.he thought that afterall his father won't go against his will and when he will tell him about his wish he will surerly agree.he had told shaili bhabhi about abha and she also liked her but told him to just concentrate on his studies now and when he finishes his studies she herself will tell papa about the relation of abha and karan.karan was much releaved.The next day abha didn't come to class.he thought she might not be well.then she was missing for some more days..
karan was really upset now . he asked her other friends why abha was not coming to class as exams are nearing. they also didn't know.days passed into months then oneday he heard a friend talking that she abha at the office room and she came to get back her certificates and that she is not going to continue her studies anymore...karan got the shock of his life...he ran to meet abha...
(will karan meet abha? what will she say? will he confess his love for abha?... to be continued)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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abharanfan_1,
Beautifull Fan Fiction. Continue writing more and i am looknig forward for reading next chapter. Bravo ! very good story with great introduction.👏😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome job abharan 👏👏👏 can't wait for next part 😛
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Wow, its really well written. Nice to see us having more FF writers. Can't wait for the next part and the reason Abha leaving college. 😊
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TUM MERE KAUN HO...
PART 2
Karan was running and runing just like he had never done before in his life for he knew that his life was slipping away from his hands and he wanted to meet her before it was too late.He saw abha when she was just about to enter the car.he called "Abha..".it was not a loud call but it had all his love for his abha that his call was loud enough for her to hear and she turned round.she saw karan.she had tears in her eyes .seeing karan she wiped it suddenly.he came near her and asked why she was crying and why she was leaving her studies? he asked if u leave your studies in between then what about your dream of becoming a lawyer?abha sais"i'm doing this to fulfill someones dreams"
Karan was really puzzled.he thought he should now let abha know that he loves her and that he will soon come to her hose to ask her hand in marriage from her father.karan said"abha...i..i want to tell you something.."
"yes what is it karan.you are my friend and don't hesitate to tell anything to me."
karan was about to open his heart to abha" i...i..."when suddenly the driver came to call abha"malik is calling ,beti.."
then abha interepted karan and said"karan i..i don't know how to begin but i don't want to take much time. i'm getting married day after tomorrow.my woodbe is an engineer and works abroad and he is from takur family of bhopal.his name is vishwajeet takur.after marriage i would go with him to states and these are my last days here in ujjain and swarn bhawan.i don't know how i will adjust but have to do it for this day comes in every girls life she has to leave all her loved ones and things one day and has to go to her sasuraal where she lives the rest of her life.well karan did i bored you .since this is a quick marriage i didn't get time to invite all of my friends. karan you should come i will wait,and no excuse and if u don't then katti (she crossed her fingers).dost mein itna haq to bantha hai na karan?"
he didn't know what to say .he felt he was numb.he said"tumhe poora haq hai abha...but why all this so suddenly and did you enquire about the groom well.are u really happy with this marriage abha..?"
abha said"karan i told you this decision is to fulfill someone's dreams"
"but whose dreams abha..?"
"pitaji's,you know karan,your parents fulfill all your wishes when you are small and they bring you up with much expectations and dreams.they will be shattered when you don't live up to their dreams.pitaji has a dream that my bidaai should also be done in Swarn Bhawan.."
"you live there then why such thoughts?"asked karan.
"Swarn Bhawan is not ours any more.it's soon going to be auctioned.and pitaji wants my shaadi before that...any ways it was nice meeting you karan...you were always with me in my troubles as a true friend...i will surely miss you...bye..take care..."
when she said that tears were rolling down her cheeks and karan wanted to comsole her but before he said a word she ran away from him into the car and the car moved away.
karan stood there rooted for much time,he doesn't know how much.he couldn't believe his ears.suddenly his phone rang.he looked at it it was shaili bhabhi"karan where r u..what r u doing how many times did i call you?..ok..karan when you come home please get papa's medicine and also some important files from sharma uncle which papa had to go through..is it ok karan"
" yes bhabhi..i'm coming home now.."
"why? you don't have class today?"
"no,i don't feel well bhabhi"
"r u sure you will come alone or i should send the driver?"
"no i'll come bhabhi...bye.."
karan walked to his car.he was simply sitting inside for some time thinking about abha..what he dreamt and what happened to her...his dream..he shook his head and took the car.he was driving when he came across a marriage procession.he saw the bride and the groom in the car.he smiled at them.they too smiled. suddenly he saw that the bride was abha and the groom was he himself.he again smiled and was driving when he closed his eyes and opened he saw the bride was abha but the groom was not him it was someone else.he was much disturbed and he felt like fainting and he lost control of the car and it fell into a ditch.the people there took him out of the car and informed the police.the police came and they took him to hospital.
Shaili was preparing lunch for karan as he was not well and was returning home early.suddenly her phone rang and it read karan"ha bolo karan.. are u alright ?why r u late?.."
a voice from the other side of the phone said"sorry mam,i'm not karan.i'm inspector yadav .actually mr.karan met wilth an accident and he is admitted here in the city hospital.you please come soon for his state is critical and he should be soon given an emergencyoperation and relatives consent is needed for that.."
shaili didn't know what to do. she informed all and within no time all reached city hospital..they saw karan ..wounded badly..smeared in blood..seeing him prathibha and shaili broke down...
(will abha get married to vishwajeet?what will happen to karan...to be continued)
Edited by abharanfan_1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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does swarn bhavan belong to Karan's family or is it still under abha's father name?😕

In your scene, you mentioned shelly bhabhi in swarn bhavan waiting for karan.?

Otherwise beutifully written and waiting to read more.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i'm extremely sorry pooja,SB belongs to abha's family now,it's not auctioned yet and thank you for noticing that error...would try my best to be error free and make it more interesting..
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Originally posted by: abharanfan_1

i'm extremely sorry pooja,SB belongs to abha's family now,it's not auctioned yet and thank you for noticing that error...would try my best to be error free and make it more interesting..

No need to apologize dost...you are doing an amazing job...writing is not an easy job and i understand it. I just wanted to make sure i was on the same page as you are. I can't wait for more chapters. 👏😛
Story is interesting and i can't wait to read more. If you write next chapter then i would enjoy reading this over the weekend. Thank you.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that's really nice plz continue
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TUM MERE KAUN HO... PART 3
Abha reached Swarn Bhavan.Chandraprabha was waiting for her to return.soon after she came abha went upstairs to her room without saying a word to her mother.she knew that Abha was upset.she decided to talk to her.she came after Abha and asked her was everything ok.Abha was crying then and she wiped her tears and said "yes ok maa.bus i don't feel well and need a little sleep".Chandra Prabha said"i have known you for these much years and do u think i don't find out when you lie to me? tell me what happened Abha..?"
"maa.. today i saw karan.he came running when he saw me..looking at his face i couldn't lie to him.i told him everything.he was shocked and from his face i could read that he was sad too.maa i had told u that whenever i see him i feel like i have known him for ages.some sort of a relaton i feel to him.i don't know why maa..i think i love him and i have told u and lata deedi also about my love for him.pitaji told about how he had decided my shaadi with vishwajeet on that day when i was going to tell karan that i loved him.i know that he also liked me because oneday he introduced me to his bhabhi shaili bhabhi .when they were walking back i heard her saying that she really liked me for karan and she was teasing karan a lot.today when we last met he was about to tell me something.i knew what it could be so i stopped him and told about my marriage.i knew i shattered his dreams but i can't go against the wishes of pitaji also you know it na maa"
"don't worry abha,if karan is for you u will surely get him and noone can seperate you from him.don't think too much take some rest and evening we have to go to mandir to meet the panditji and for other arrangements of marriage ok..?
abha noded and lied down on the bed.she was thinking about karan.whenever she closed her eyes his face came in her mind.she turned to other side and tried to close her eyes and get some sleep.she didn't know when she fell asleep and dream occured to her.in her dream she and karan were driving in a car to a beautiful place. in between he was teasing her and romancing with her.they were joking and happily drivingwhen suddenly she saw a truck heading towards then and she called karan...he suddenly turned the car and the car fell into a ditch and it landed on a slope.karan told abha to get out of the car slowly as both cannot get out at the same time as the car may slide down into the deep ditch.she hesitated but on karans repeated request she got out slowly and looked down.she felt like fainting.when karan was about to get out the car began to slide slowly and all of a sudden it fell into the ditch.abha saw it helplessely and screamed KARAN... and her scream echoed in the valley."karan..."suddenly abha woke up .she realised it was a dream .but her heart felt heavy on seeing such a bad dream and she prayed "hai bhagwan karan ki raksha karna..bus use kuch muth ho.. woh sahi salamat rehe.."
mean while in the hospital karan was battling for his life.he was taken to the operation theatere and all the family members were waiting outside praying for karan's life.doctors and nurses were rushing in and out.the family members went after each one who came out to know how karan was doing.the doctor said "look i can understand your situation but let the operation be done first i'm sorry to say that the chances are very little and have faith in god and let's hope for the best.excuse me."
prathibha and jagmohan broke down on hearing this.vimal,shaili kanika and veer came to them to console them.vimal said "arey woh aise kaise hume choodkar jaa sakthe hai.he has so much of dreams to fulfill and after all he is ur favourite beta na ..papa..he won't do anything that will make you sad he will recover soon and will come back to us."
shaili said" yes papa..vimal is right..he loves us all and he can't go..you know when i came to this house as bahu all were strangers to me and i was very sad and it was karan who came to me and cheered me up . he promised me that he will never let me alone and won't let the memories of my mayka make me sad..why karan you forgot that promise you made to bhabhi..."shaili was crying inconsolobly ang vimal came and hugged her and he too started crying.veer and kanika also started crying.all this time priyanka was standing at the side of them.she told the as if she was not bothered " sab log aise ro kyun rehe hai. waise karan ko kuch hua to nahi na.. now just relax..."
shaili suddenly turned at her and said angrily but in a lowered voice" priyanka how could you be so mean?...kya karan tumhara koi nahi hai,tumhare liye koi mayne nahi rakthi..if you don't want to stay here please go back...veer please .."
abha and maa aws at mandir.all the while ChandraPrabha was noticing abha.she seemed to be disturbed and she was not listening to what the panditji was telling.then they were doing aarthi.abha was totally absent minded and she burnt her hands."tumhara dhyan kidhar hai abha.tumhe ho kya jaya hai abha?"chandra prabha asked.
suddenly abha came to her senses and said"mein tik hu".
all these while abha was worried about the dreanm that she had and she was praying"karan ko kuch math ho..god please always save karan.."
though she was in the mandir she was not feeling pleasant as usual.she seemed to be worried about something. she was very quiet also.now Chandra Prabha interepted.
"abha what happened?i was noticing you from the time you came back from college.you are sad and depressed.are u not happy with your pitajis decision?aur ab to tum kahi khoye khoye rehthe ho..kya baath hai abha? tell me..tujse meri kasam hai.."
abha told her about her dream then Chandraprabha consoled her and told her to pray "jo sache dil se bhagwan ko bulaye bhagwan hamesha uske raksha karthe hai.kuch nahi hoga karan ko.. it's only a dream.don't worry"
At the hospital,the doctor came out of the operation theatere."doctor,how is karan?"vimal asked.
"dekiye,abhi hum kuch keh nahi sakthe..waise operation is over and we have tried our best to save him.mr karan ko kafi gahari wounds hai..aur bachne ka chances 50-50 hai.abhi filhal karan ko icu mein shift kar rehe hai..."
jagmohan asked"use hosh kab ayega?"
doctor said" dekhiye mr.prasad hum abhi kuch keh nahi sakthe hai.his pulse is very low..he is on ventilator, patient is not responding to medicines,he is very critical.abhi use 78 hrs observation mein rakhna pddega and this 78 hrs is very critical for him.if he covers this 78 hrs there is some hope for us.we have chances to save him.une 78 hrs ke baath hi hosh aayege aur agar 78 hrs baad karan ko hosh nahi aaya toh i'm afraid woh coma mein bhi jaa saktha hai.it can be for hrs,for days,weeks, months or years.let's hope for some miracle to happen.aap log bhagwan par bharoza rakhiye aur himmat mat hariye..excuse me.."
hearing what the doctor said all were shocked prathibha collapsed calling"karan.."
(will karan come back from death? what will happen to abha? will she get married? to be continued...)

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