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VishaD.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

More lovely scenes and maybe a rain dance scene. I think i shall write one on that soon 😊

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rechus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Do it fast.. New track is worst.. Atleast enjoy ur ff.. No other happy..

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VishaD.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: rechus
Do it fast.. New track is worst.. Atleast enjoy ur ff.. No other happy..

Sure, shall write from tomorrow. I shall also write Love Poem soon 😉

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rechus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Love poem..? Wow.. Tel the truth what happend to u..

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VishaD.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rechus
Love poem..? Wow.. Tel the truth what happend to u..

I actually love writting. II have written many stories and poems last time but left after i joined college as became busy with assignments and exams. Now in the mood to re-use my old works for Karan and Abha 😉

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aarcha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

i want raj 2 beat her black & blue ...or green or red...a tsunami of tight slaps...special offers fr others too ..as much as slaps...koyal deceived raj the most...no sister'll get such a caring & loving bro. & this b****y b***h cheated him so cheaply...🤬 anyway...good riddance !!!👍🏼

btw, visha...script was nice ...👍🏼⭐️👏

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rechus

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Visha_Dhami

I actually love writting. II have written many stories and poems last time but left after i joined college as became busy with assignments and exams. Now in the mood to re-use my old works for Karan and Abha

may I ask..?

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VishaD.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: aarcha
i want raj 2 beat her black & blue ...or green or red...a tsunami of tight slaps...special offers fr others too ..as much as slaps...koyal deceived raj the most...no sister'll get such a caring & loving bro. & this b****y b***h cheated him so cheaply...🤬 anyway...good riddance !!!👍🏼
btw, visha...script was nice ...👍🏼⭐️👏

I felt that Raj is such a loving guy and he would not have the heart to beat his sister so badly. So he only gave two slaps, Two slaps from Abha, One slap from Thakur, One slap from Lata and Strangle from Prakash. And high point, she gets shot and dies. This way would have been better and i would have been more satisfied.

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aarcha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

teahh definitely...the show high time disappointed us...koyal did a horrible crime resulting in the death of CP...so m also nt satisfied with the cvs of YMGGK...👎🏼

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VishaD.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: aarcha
teahh definitely...the show high time disappointed us...koyal did a horrible crime resulting in the death of CP...so m also nt satisfied with the cvs of YMGGK...👎🏼

Yes, Koyal was doing so many things and all they did is ended just in one day. Hardly gave time for Abharan moments and their next set of problems started 😕

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