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Hello guys,

This is my first time doing an update. i hope i dont get in trouble for it. hehe.. anyways i tried to make it as detailed as possible. i hope it makes sense. Enjoy.



Update..


The scene starts out with Abha thinking. Even though god has taken so much away from her, she still believes that god is on her side. Then she realizes that she hasn't spoken to Sanskar since she arrived. Abha phones Sanskar.

Sanskar is gently caressing Sanya's forehead, when the phone rings. Sanskar picks up the phone and Abha apologizes for calling so late and inquires about Sanya's health, going on about how her due date is coming closer. Sanskar cuts Abha off by stating that everything is over and that the baby was born dead. Abha is shocked and says that she will come over right now. Sanskar refuses and says that if she leaves Swarn Bhavan and comes here then Masiji will do something. He tells her that he is there to take care of Sanya, and the rest of the family is there as well, and if Abha needs anything then just give him a call. Abha tells sanskar to take care of sanya.

Back to thinking. Abha feels bad for Sanya and misses karan. She suddenly remembers to call the police station in Mumbai. The inspector informs Abha that they are still searching for Karan, and the only good news for her is that no body has turned up, and none of karans belongings have either. He tells her not to worry and that if any clue are found, she will be called. End of phone call.

Abha notices one of Karans shirt sticking out of the cupboard (red with black checks). She remembers his words, "how does the washer wash the clothes. I have no buttons on my shirt, Abha please put the buttons on" Abha bursts into silent tears and cries asking for karan to come back because she cant do everything alone. She cries more.

Abha then thinks about what she will do when Sidarthji goes back to Mumbai. She sees the calender and thinks that tomorrow is the 7th of February. She remembers the words of the priest, "I'm here to give you a warning. the number 7 is very inauspicious for you" . She worries if something bad will happen tomorrow.

PRECAP: Abha is holding sidarthji's cell phone. It's ringing with a Marathi song (I think). Abha picks it up. On the line a woman says "Hello? Ranchod?" Abha is shocked.

Its night time Sidarthji is sleeping on the bed, and abha is sleeping on the floor. Sidarthji stirs awake and sees abha on the floor. He Calls out to her. No answer. Psss. No answer. He comes closer and realizes she's sleeping. He picks her up and puts her down on the bed and lies down on the floor while muttering that he can fall asleep on the floor, but the sindoor wali wont be able to, then he turns to the side and says one shouldn't drink alcohol its very bad.

He stands up and goes to the mirror, and has a "conversation" with himself. He says "Karan Prasad. Heh. Where is Sidarth kumar, superstar. You forgot your identity, Ranchod Tiwari. Sit. Alcohol is bad, it ruins your system. Amit said right in 'Suhaag'. now look. Puke, hangover. You got it now. But the emperors said one thing right. To get rid of a hangover, take another shot. But this house probably doesn't even have a picture of a bottle of beer than the real thing. I can smoke though. that's allowed." He starts to look for a cigarette and sees the packet under Abha's pillow. He slowly takes the cigarettes and asks a sleeping abha if she has matches. Abha opens her eyes and slaps Sidarthji across the face, only to go back to sleep. He gets mad and growls, if he should hit her father? (something like that) he goes back to the mirror and says shes just like you r mother ranchod tiwari. Now go to sleep.

Its morning now. And theres the funny ringtone. Abha wakes up, and is shocked to be on the bed. She slowly picks up the phone and calls sidarthji when the phones rings again. She picks up the phone and says "hello". the girl on the other line says "hello? Ranchod". Abha is shocked.


PRECAP: Abha says to Sidarthji " look I just heard on the phone. Your name is Ranchod?" Sidarthji holds his hand out shutting abha up.

Abha is shocked and asks again what the girl said. But Sidarth takes the phone away. Abha is shocked again, and tries to ask him if his name is Ranchod, but Sidarth cuts her off by holding out his hand. He turns away with the phone and says hello darling. Abha quickly follows and says wait, is your name really? Sidarth turns around annoyed and says that she can talk to her. Abha nods her head. Sidarth continues his conversation with the girl on the phone, calling her darling. He tells the girl that he is shooting a film. He tells her not to question him and that he will tell her everything when he comes back, and to not waste money by calling him (roaming charges). He cuts the phone.

Abha starts right away and tries to ask him about his name. Sidarth cuts her off again and says "if you do something then its magic, but if I do something then.." he leaves it unsaid. He tells her to leave his private matter alone. She says that she just heard on the phone that his name is ranchod. Sidarth thinks that his dad screwed him over by naming him ranchod tiwari. She asks again if his name is ranchod. Sidarth tells her to shutup and that his name is sidarth kumar. She says that she hear on the phone, but sidarth cuts her off again by saying "but nothing. You heard wrong. Go put some oil in your ear and get it cleaned". he then asks her what the hell she did to him, he tells her to get his black coffee And a black t-shirt, she will be paying for his clothes from now on as well. Abha wonders if it really was her imagination.

YASHO AND TURD MONKEY SON!!!

Dushant is sleeping and asks for water from his mother. Yasho is furious, she asks him what did "karan" say yesterday. Dushant cant remember, all he remembers is karan saying "sid, sid". Yasho is beyond pissed and blasts at him for drinking while doing her dirty work. Dushants wife runs in with lemon water, and whines that she wanted to go to the cinema aswell. But the second she sees yasho's face she shuts up. Yasho says that because you guys couldn't do anything, she had to threaten pratz into shutting up. But yasho is scared of abha forcing pratz to say the truth to the family. Devyani gets all hyper and says that there is still a chance to go before we get in trouble, using the back door otherwise everything we have gotten will be taken away. Yasho tells devyani to shut up and says that she has decided, only one person can stay alive. Either pratz or me. Dushant devyani are shocked.

SENTI SCENE

Abha remembers giving Karan the watch and runs to the drawer to press the beeper. Karans watch is also beeping. Abha picks up the picture on the table and says karans name. Hands come around Abha and we hear karans voice "ABHA". Abha slowly turns around shocked. She sees karan and hurgs him crying while asking where he went.



PRECAP: Sasurji asks pratibha what she wanted to say to him. Pratibha says I want to say something about Yasho. Yasho looks nervous. Pratibha says, "When I ran away from the ashram then yasho ne mujhe'..

END OF EPISODE
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Posted: 14 years ago
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when karan coming back or is this karan
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thanks for the awesome update
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thanks for the update very well written. continue the good work👍🏼

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Thanks so much......you did an excellent job on the update !!!! 👏
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thanq for fabulous update.............u did amazing job
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thanks for the nice update
very well written. continue the good work
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thanks deadly-kiss , good job with the update ....
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thanks for the update!!! is abha dreaming, was that really karan? prob a dream

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