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Posted: 16 years ago
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The next day Zamia and Zaara were returning from college in an autorickshaw when Zaara suddenly realized that Zamia had been very quiet the whole way.

'Zamia? What's wrong with you?'

She looked at Zaara.

'The supermarket guy. He's Ayan. Met him yesterday.'

Zamia had told her about Ayan and Ada.

'Oh' Then she started laughing. Zamia scowled at her.

'Zamia, you should be happy. I mean it's not like they're going out now or anything.'

'Shut up Zaara. He looked so sad when Ada was talking about her new house. Thank God she dint mention her new boyfriend!'

'Wait. What exactly has made you sad? Are you sad because your supermarket guy turned out to be your cousin's ex-boyfriend or because they aren't together now?'

Zamia thought for some time. 'A bit of both. I mean I wish he wasn't Ayan. And I wish Ayan and Ada hadn't broken up. It's almost like I'm thinking of two different people.'

Zaara looked at her for a long time and then finally spoke when they had paid and got out of the auto.

'You're mental.'

'Yeah, I know that.'

'Zaara, are you sure you don't have a brother?' Zamia asked after some time as they got into the elevator.

'Yes. Why?' Zaara asked.

'Nothing. But are you sure? Ask your parents about it.'

'I'm sure I don't have a brother Zamia.'

'Really?'

Zaara frowned. 'Why?'

'Well, Imran Khan looks like he could be your brother.' Zamia said, smiling sweetly.

The elevator had stopped at 8th floor and Zamia ran out before Zaara could react.

'Zamia! You wait…'

The door to her house wasn't locked so Zamia opened the door and rushed in through a narrow passage that led to the living room. Zaara ran to the door but stumbled on the threshold and was about to fall when someone caught her just in time.

She straightened up cursing Zamia under her breath and was about to thank whoever had saved her but when she saw the person in front of her all she managed was 'YOU?'

Who else? It had to be Sahil. He let go of her quickly. Just then Zamia came back to see where Zaara was.

'Hi Sahil. What are you doing here?'

'Mum asked me to give some book to your mother. So I came here directly from college. I need to go now. Umm, Excuse me.' Zaara was blocking the way to the door.

'Oh sorry.' She stepped to a side.

'Zamia stop smirking' Zaara said as soon as she had closed the door.

'What? Me? Smirking?' Zamia said trying to make an innocent face and failing.

Zaara glared at her.

'What? I'm just happy coz you two look so good together. I'm sure your brother, I mean Imran, won't mind either…after all Sahil is my brother.'

And then began the tom-and-jerry-chase.

The first week of College went by quickly. So far Zaara was enjoying college. They had finished with the bridge course and from the second week their actual lessons were getting started. Zaara had her first Hindi class on Wednesday and she was nervous. Until now she had been successful in avoiding Brian but since the number of students opting for Hindi as their second language was very small, commerce and arts students would be having Hindi classes together.

Zaara went to classroom no. 3 with her classmates who had taken up Hindi as their second language. She sat down with Pooja. Sahil sat down on the other side and turned to say something to her.

'Err…Zaara…'

But then the Principal's secretary came to the room and asked Sahil to come to the office. He got up and left and just then the students from the other batch arrived. Brian was the tallest. Zaara tried to hide her face by holding a book in front of her while Pooja started giggling. Brian looked around, spotted Zaara and rushed to her.

'Hey Zaara' he smiled at her.

'Hi Brian' she tried to smile back.

He kept Sahil's books on a seat in front of them and sat down even as Zaara said

'Brian, that seat's taken…'

'That's ok. They won't mind, I'm sure. Anyways where have you been? I was searching for you all over the college.'

'You were searching for me? Why?'

'Zaara, of course I was searching for you. We're friends!'

Friends? She felt like kicking him. She dint what to say now but then she noticed Sahil entering the class.

He came to them and then saw that his seat was taken.

'Excuse me, this is my place.'

'Oh yeah, I kept your books there. You mind if I sit here?'

Sahil looked at Zaara with one eyebrow raised. She nodded with pleading eyes.

'Yes I do.'

Brian looked irritated.

'Common dude, what's your problem with sitting there.'

'Nothing. I just happen to like that seat a lot. So move.'

'Err…Brian, I think you should sit somewhere else. It's his seat after all. It's only fair.' Zaara said.

Brian got up and went away grumbling.

'Thanks.' Zaara said.

'Your welcome. But who is he?' Sahil asked.

Just then the Hindi professor entered the class. They couldn't speak after that. After Hindi class they had lunch break. Once their Hindi lecturer had left Zaara grabbed her books and rushed off before the others had even got up.

'What's wrong with her?' Sahil asked Pooja.

She laughed. 'I guess she wanted to go before Brian could come over to talk again.'

Sahil frowned. He got and left the classroom. After lunch he saw Zamia and Zaara at the canteen. The two were laughing about something.

'Hey.'

'Hi Sahil.' Zamia said.

Zaara smiled politely.

'Are you going to tell me now who that Brian is?' he asked Zaara.

'Brian?' Zamia looked shocked and stared at Zaara.

Zaara explained to her what had happened.

'And you dint tell me till now!' Zamia said accusingly.

'I was about to…' Zaara said.

'Who is Brian?' Sahil asked.

'Why are you so interested?' Zamia asked.

'I was just asking. Anyways I came to ask Zaara if…'

But then the bell rang and they had to rush off to their classes.

Edited by zuman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
grttttttttttt part
sahil wanna know who brian is
soooo do i
is it a luv story btw brian n zaara ????????
y is she avoiding him soooooooo much



post da next part soon

luv
Tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
i was waiting for this part of the story it is getting more interested love it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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haha...Briaannnnnnn
Zumaaaannnnnnn i give u 24 hours more{thats very generous of me} for u t update.
so update. now.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: afreen_786

grttttttttttt part
sahil wanna know who brian is
soooo do i
is it a luv story btw brian n zaara ????????
y is she avoiding him soooooooo much



post da next part soon

luv
Tina

u'll get to know abt Brian soon......
sorry abt being this late..Iahd to ake some changes int he story...
and I was ahving my board exams for 11th....
thnx soo much for replying....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: djdoll2004

i was waiting for this part of the story it is getting more interested love it

thnk...and sorry for not posting the part earlier.....pllz keep replying
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: legallyzoya

haha...Briaannnnnnn
Zumaaaannnnnnn i give u 24 hours more{thats very generous of me} for u t update.
so update. now.

Legallyzoya????? nice😆
yes Brian...😆 you know who...
I'm updating now...
Edited by zuman - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Sorry for not updating for such a long time...I had my board exams...

and I've made some changes to the story...I've edited the parts...
Hana's name has been changed to Ada(I know someone named Hana and I think of her every time I write the name... so I wanted to change the name)
And Sahil and Brian have taken up Commerce and Zaara has taken Arts...
I realized that just because I've taken up Science doesn't mean that all my fictional chracters should too...
Sahil, Zaara and Brian still have language classes together....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saturday - 5:00 PM

'Zamia, open the…'

'I'm studying… I'm not moving from here.' Zamia shouted back before her mother could ask her to open the door. Zamia was studying for a chemistry test and was in a bad mood which was inevitable as she hated studying chemistry.

Zamia closed her room door- she dint want anyone to disturb her. After about 5 minutes Zamia got tired of the equations and wondered who had come. She opened the door slightly and tried to make out who it was. Just then she heard someone say

'…college is fine…but I was getting bored. Aunty, isn't there any good library around here?'

She recognized the voice- it was Ayan's.

'Oh I don't know, but Zamia must know. I'll get her now.'

Zamia closed the door quietly and hurried back to the study table and pretended to be studying when her mother opened the door.

'Ma, don't disturb…'

Her mother told her who had come and asked her to come out to meet them.

'But why have they come?'

'Zamia, don't ask stupid questions. Just come.'

She went out nervously.

'Hey' she smiled at them. Ayan's dad Iqbal, who was talking to her dad, just smiled at her.

Ayan said 'Hi' and Sarah aunty said 'Hi Zamia. How are you beta?'

'I'm fine aunty. How are you?'

'I'm fine. You were studying?'

'Yes, I have a chemistry test on Monday.'

'Oh, we shouldn't be disturbing you then.'

'No aunty, nothing like that. We have tests every week. Not a big deal.'

They talked for some more time and then Ayan asked her about the library and Sarah began talking to Mahi and Zamia's mother.

Zamia told him about the library and then she started talking about her favorite books. They kept talking (well, Zamia talked and Ayan listened) when Zamia's mother asked them to come to the dining hall to have snacks. They went to the dining hall. Zamia kept talking even while she was eating and her mother kept scolding her.

Ayan grinned. 'You used to talk just like this before, even when you were eating. What happened to you that day in the party? You were being quiet.'

She looked a bit embarrassed and said 'You said I talk too much so I thought…'

Ayan was taken aback and then he said 'I dint mean that I don't like to hear you talk. In fact it's fun to talk to you…'

That made Zamia very happy. Then they began talking of stuff they used to do when they were kids and they were surprised when they saw that it was already 7 when Ayan's parents got up to leave.

'Bye Zamia. Hope to see you soon again.'

'Yeah. Same here. Bye'

Zamia kept smiling and went back to her room. She really had enjoyed talking to him. And she enjoyed listening to him. And she liked the way he smiled at her…

Ok stop…get back to chemistry.

She began studying Chemistry but she couldn't concentrate.

He said he likes to hear me talk…

Zamia! Enough already!

And after some time…

I wonder when I'll meet him again.

And it continued that way till 8 when she realized that she hadn't studied anything at all.

That's it. It'll do no good for me to see him again. The last thing I want is for me to have a crush on him. Nope. No more of Ayan-business!

Poor Zamia. She hadn't even realized that she already had a crush on him. A major one, that too!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaaaaayyyy finally someone heeded to ym reuquest
well yeah its awesome..as usual!!!!
Oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh i ditn read this part last night :d
its great
but u missed out the bhaashan aprt.
but tis great anyways👏
tralalalala
oooh BTW i got a new pussycat notbook :D
ill shw u wen u coem home ok?

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