Oooh Burn!! Pt 2 Pg 3 FINALLY!! - Page 2

👏 👏 👏 Wow!! great style of writing Shreyu!!! 😃
can't wait for the next part 😳 ...specially want to know the idea behind the roomies thing! 😆

awesome, awesome shrey... looooove it 😳 😳
& sharin an apartment? sort of reminds me of joey & rachel.... neway... do continue asap 😃

The title caught my eye.
I liked the way you told the story especially how you started it off. And i didn't expect her to do that to him for standing in her way!
Great characters the way they speak to one another is entertaining would love to read how their attitude delops towards one another.

Originally posted by: Tearrops

The title caught my eye.
I liked the way you told the story especially how you started it off. And i didn't expect her to do that to him for standing in her way!
Great characters the way they speak to one another is entertaining would love to read how their attitude delops towards one another.

thanks for replying! 😃 actually this one person did that to my friend.. it was quite painful to see him lke that.. and thus i thought of including it.. thanks for the encouragement 😳

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

awesome, awesome shrey... looooove it 😳 😳
& sharin an apartment? sort of reminds me of joey & rachel.... neway... do continue asap 😃

thanks shriya.. yeah its kinda like joey and rachel but they didnt hate each other.. you could imagine monica and janice.. that might be better 😆.. thanks for the encouragement.. continuing !! 😃

Originally posted by: datspreets

Is there a part2?

of course 😃

Originally posted by: Prenz~13

👏 👏 👏 Wow!! great style of writing Shreyu!!! 😃
can't wait for the next part 😳 ...specially want to know the idea behind the roomies thing! 😆

thanks preru 😳 for the encouragement.. and you'll get to know it soon 😳

Originally posted by: MNMS

I agree with all... Fab story and writing style 👏 👏 Waiting for the next part 😃

thank you 😳😳

Originally posted by: datspreets

More than the humor in it, i liked the writing style. 👏

Perhaps i didn't get the inherent humor in this one. 😕 😳

thanks for liking it 😳..

Originally posted by: Naughty_n_nice

Never heard of a boy and a girl sharing a room, but it's very funny! The guy amuses me, sounds like a brat! 😆

hehe he is.. thanks for liking it😳

Originally posted by: umrao_jaan

IT"S HILLARIOUS!!!!!

But....girl+boy roommatesss???? Agreed! Neva heard it b4!!!! Bit it seems funny! Da guy's a brat! And da gal does have some cheek! Whoaa-way to GO!!!! Wondering what awaits in the future...

lol thanks for the encouragement.. i know the guy's a total brat.. but im picturing him to be really hot😳😆

Originally posted by: T.

Love your writing style. Looking forward to a little more background on how Her and Him got to be roomies even though they hate each other so much.

thanks soo much 😳.. there will be background after two or three chapters.. so dont worry 😃

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

read this long back but got disconnected so couldnt reply!!!
btw i liked ur introduction the best!!!!!!!!!
and the guy and girl are cute 😳 but the guy seems to be an ultimate bugger
great job!

thanks soo much for the appreciation..hope you like the next part 😃

Part 2

It was later on in the day when she actually started feeling the teeniest bit of sympathy for kicking him in … private… areas. She ploughed through the dining room to his bedroom to find that he wasn't there. Not that their apartment was big, but she searched the whole of it and found that he has disappeared. Completely , utterly, gone.

It was then that she had the idea of searching the laundry room and the garbage room. As she pushed the door and entered it, she saw him sitting on a bucket with his head clutched in his hands. He looked up as the door creaked, to see her standing there and started up. As she started to walk in towards him, he shrieked, "Don't let the door--"

The door slammed.

"--Close." He finished, and glared at her, "Look what you did. Now we're both stuck here. Great, just bloody great."

"Stop whining, you brat. How was I supposed to know about the door?"

"Har, har. It's your house, sweetheart."

"Well, darling, you should have said something before."

"You know what, Sonja, leave. Leave before I absolutely start pulling my hair off--"

"That will be good. I mean, look at you—eww.. your hair is sticky and damp. Disgusting."

"That's a bloody mop. Not my hair."

"Same thing to me."

"…"

"Karan?"

"…"

"Say something."

"Stop talking, will you? I'm currently trying to block off your shrilly voice by putting this bucket over my head."

"Err.. you do know that our janitor uses that for cleaning the toilet?"

"…"

"Karan, say something."

"MY HAIR. MY BEAUTIFUL, SMOOTH, PERFECTLY TRIMMED AND GELLED, COMPLETELY VIVACIOUS AND SMOOTHLY PARTE--"

"Karan?"

"WHAT?"

"Shut up."

"How would you feel if your hair--"

"I don't give a damn right now. Will you stop your whining?"

"I will, if you move away. You're being alarmingly close to some.."

"Oh."

"Jesus Christ."

"Yeah."

sorry for the extreme delay you guys
and thanks all of you so much for SO MUCH appreciation .. thanks all of you.. you were VERY sweet 😳 🤗
hope you like this part as well 😳
happy reading,
shreyasi