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Posted: 18 years ago
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well totally love this one...

i promised that i would read the full thing na? i read it!!!!

and im so so so so so hooked on to this story and u knw what i am glad i caught THIS one cos u update a LOT and very FAST!!! i love that in you...

i read it from beg to end... great cos its in one post...

and really love arjun/priya ka jodi... want them to get together 😳...

and anurag is sweet bt i cant see him wid priya... arjun and priya r too cute...

and yea its obvious anurag isnt in love with manisha... then what will happen to naina...

u gotta update fast...

i can actually picture the scenes in my head and glad to say u have chosen the pics for ur charecs well...😳..

oh and one more thing... i could spot a LOT of grammatical errors all caused by small typos and u might want to overlook that next time...

luvya

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Had originally been posted on IF.in. I'm starting from the start for the people whom have not read my story and have added some changes for the interest of the reader.

Episode 17

Kiran comes into Priya's room while she is sleeping.

Kiran: (shaking her up) Priya wake up! Manisha here to help you get ready for your date.

Priya: (pushing herself up) Yeah I'm up, tell her to come up stairs.

Manisha: (going through her closet) to late, I'm already up here.

Priya: oh Great! (Falling back on her bed)

Kiran: (brushing through Priya's hair) Ok get up and get ready. Its 6 [P.M.] (Kiran leaves)

Manisha: you were also tired in school. Why? What happen?

Priya: (getting off her bed) I was talking to Avinash all night.

Manisha: Oww who's Avinash?

Priya: (walking to the bathroom) It not what your thinking. We're just ready good friends.

Manisha: (sarcastic) Right, I believe you.

Priya: (at the door) Manisha

Manisha: No I really do.

Priya walks into the bathroom and opens the sink. The door closes behind her.

Manisha: (seeing the door close. Childish) Priya and Avinash sitting on a tree (Priya comes out with a hand full of water and throws it on Manisha) Priya!

Priya: (copying her) Manisha! (Priya runs to the bathroom)

Manisha: (knocking on the door) that's not fair. Watch when you come out I'll get you. (Manisha goes back to picking out clothes)

After a few minutes Priya comes out in a robe. Grabs the dress from the bed and goes back into the bathroom. Priya comes back out dressed and begins drying her hair.

Manisha: you look better with wet hair.

Priya: (drying her hair) I don't like my hair wet sometimes. (She stops drying her hair when she hears people laughing downstairs) Who's downstairs?

Manisha: Mitesh, Anurag everyone else.

Priya: What are there doing here.

Manisha: I don't know your dad called them.

Priya: My dad's too much.

Manisha: what do you mean?

Priya: Never mind. Let's go.

Manisha: what about your makeup?

Priya: I don't like putting on make-up.

Manisha: (pulling Priya in front of the mirror) Come I'll put some on. (Manisha puts make up on Priya) There you go.

Priya: (looking at the mirror) hey it look's good. Thanks!

Manisha: you welcome. Let's go.

Manisha and Priya walk downstairs. Everyone downstairs gets up. Pritem grabs his heart and falls into the couch.

Kiran: (looking at Pritem) Beta Pritem your name suit's you. Tum deewane ho.

Pritem: (getting up, pulling his collar up, acting fresh) Yeah I know. (Anil stares at him) Sorry.

Priya: Ok I should go. Sunny waiting (grabbing her bag)

Anurag: I through we'll drop you there.

Priya: No its ok I have my own driver. (Priya leaves)

Manisha: You can drop me home.

Anurag: fine let's go

Everyone leave and drives behind Priya. They drop Manisha off and continue to drive to the cinema.

Anurag: (at the cinema. Standing outside his car) I can't find her.

Arjun: there's she is (pointing at the entrance)

Anurag: You know what to do right

Arjun: (happy) I was born to ruin her life.

Meanwhile, Sunny and Priya are talking

Sunny: I didn't know what movie you would like, so I'm wondering No Entry.

Priya: Sure I wanted to watch that movie too. (Priya and Sunny walk to get the ticket)

Anurag: Alright they going to buy they ticket, lets go (they walk across the street and they get on line)

Arjun: They better not watch a sad love story.

Anurag: We're next

Mitesh: Can I know something, why are you behind them? What are you going to get out of it?

Anurag: I don't know what I'm going to get out of this. I don't know but I have this weird feeling that there is something wrong with this. But I'm here so he won't do anything wrong.

Mitesh: (acting like a father) Priya's a big girl, she know right from wrong (back to himself) Anyways how do you know if he'll do something wrong.

Anurag looks at Mitesh with the expression of "what are you saying"

Counter lady: hello how may I help you?

Anurag: yes I would like to know what ticket those two (pointing to Priya and Sunny) purchased.

Counter lady: Sorry it's against the cinema policy.

Anurag: Damn! Ok hold on (he grabs his phone and dials Priya #) Hello Priya

Priya: Anurag!?!

Anurag: Yeah what movie you watching?

Priya: why?

Anurag: Just asking

Priya: No entry

Anurag: Oh ok thanks

Priya: wait why you want to know

Anurag: Umm (pausing) because what if we go to the movies later on, I don't want you to see the same movie.

Priya: (surprised) ahhh ok. (Priya cuttes her phone and looks around for Sunny, who was getting popcorn, and sees Mitesh and Pritem. Thinking) oh so my father sent spies. Ok now the fun just started)

Anurag: Alright 4 tickets for No entry (he takes out some money and pays the lady) Alright lets go.

Anurag, Mitesh walk into theater and take they seat 3 rows behind Priya and Sunny. Pritem and Arjun come back with popcorn and soda.

Anurag: What are you doing? We're only here to watch Sunny.

Pritem: Correction, you and Mitesh are here to watch Sunny. Arjun and I are here to watch the movie.

Anurag falls back onto his seat mad. After a few minutes of the movie, Sunny begins to yawn and stretches his arm.

Anurag: look! Look! He's doing trying to put his arm around her.

Mitesh: Maybe you were right.

Sunny while bring his arm down, he puts his arm around Priya. Anurag and Mitesh look around and see Pritem and Arjun eating popcorn and grab the cup of popcorn. Anurag and Mitesh begin to throw the popcorn on Sunny. Pritem and Arjun look at each other and begin throwing the popcorn too. Priya and Sunny turn to look back. Anurag, Mitesh, Arjun, and Pritem notice that Priya is about to turn around, so they duck.

Sunny: (looking back) who's throwing that?

Priya: (turning back around) you don't want to know. Let it be.

Sunny turns back around. The boys get back up.

Pritem: That was close

Arjun: We're guys are lucky that no one in front of us. You have a clear view.

Mitesh: It's not luck it's called friends

Arjun: huh?

Mitesh: My friend is the manager here and he kept the seat empty for us.

Pritem: then what about the girl in the counter?

Mitesh: He can't do everything on the name of friendship.

Sunny tries to put his arm around Priya again and again, after every 5 minutes. However is unable to since Anurag kept on throwing popcorn.

Anurag: (throwing popcorn) Yo this guy doesn't know how to stop.

Sunny turns around and the boy's hide again.

Sunny: (turning back around) why are you stopping me from going to the manager?

Priya: Ok look that is Mitesh and Pritem, maybe even Anurag and Arjun.

Sunny: why would they throw popcorn at us?

Priya: Cause my father told them too. They don't want you to get close to me.

Sunny: (smirking) really (putting his arm around Priya)

Anurag: Yo the popcorn finished.

Mitesh: Same here.

Arjun and Pritem: (knowing that there got nothing left to eat) great!

Sunny pulls Priya closer.

Priya: what are you doing?

Sunny: I just want to know what they'll do if I made pretend to kiss you (pulling her closer)

Priya: (shocked) Kiss me (pushing him away)

Anurag and Mitesh take the popcorn cup and throw it at Sunny. Sunny looks back at them.

Sunny: (turning around) why do they keep hiding?

Priya: they think that I don't know they're here.

Sunny: oh

Priya: ok let's watch the movie.

Priya and Sunny continue to watch the movie. So do Pritem and Arjun. Mitesh and Anurag are also watching the movie but keeping an eye on Sunny.

The movie ends Priya and Sunny walk out like Mitesh, Anurag, Pritem, and Arjun were never there.

Sunny: Imagine if they were following us.

Priya: (looking at the stores window) Yeah they are I can see they reflection on the glass. (Sunny turns to look at the glass) Sunny I'm sorry.

Sunny: for what

Priya: for them throwing popcorn and following us.

Sunny: it's ok. It's was kind of… fun.

Priya and Sunny begin to walk faster.

Anurag: why are they walking fast?

Pritem: Maybe they know were following them.

Mitesh: Hurry up they walking quicker

Priya: I have 3 questions for you.

Sunny: Shoot

Priya: ok first do you like to run? Second, have you ever had to run on a date? Third do you mind if we ran?

Sunny: yes umm no and yeah sure I won't mind if we run.

Priya: Great! There's a first time for everything ok first lets walk quicker and then when I say now we run, got it.

Sunny: got it.

Priya and Sunny begin to walk quicker. So do Anurag, Pritem, Mitesh and Arjun.

Priya: ok now

Priya and Sunny begin to run away. Mitesh, Anurag, Arjun, and Pritem begin to run behind them.

Sunny: Priya there's a park across the street lets go there.

Priya: great more hiding room.

Priya and Sunny run into the park. Mitesh, Pritem, Arjun and Anurag run across the street and stop.

Anurag: (catching his breath) Ok I take the north entrance, Pritem's takes south, Mitesh you take east and Arjun will take west. (Arjun, Mitesh, and Pritem are holding on they knee, catching they breath. They all look at Anurag as if he had gone crazy) Just catch them.

Pritem, Mitesh, Anurag, and Arjun break up and run into the park. Priya and Sunny run and hide behind the slide [It's not just a slide, it has a jungle gym, poles, another slide attach to each other. What I'm trying to say is that if you don't look closely then you can't see them hiding behind the slide]

Sunny: there's Arjun, Mitesh, and Pritem. Where's Anurag?

Priya: (turning Sunny around) right over there. How are we going to get out of here?

Sunny: Don't worry they'll move. (Thinking) Hey the minute they move, you see all those trees, we'll run there.

Priya: ok

Mitesh, Pritem, Arjun, and Anurag give up and group together.

Arjun: I couldn't find them.

Mitesh: me either It's getting dark that's why. Priya and Sunny run out towards the trees.

Pritem: (yelling) there they are. (Pointing)

Priya lets out a squeak after hearing Pritem.

Mitesh: (yelling) Priya

Priya and Sunny continue to run towards the trees. Mitesh, Pritem, Arjun, and Anurag run after them.

Priya: (stopping behind a tree) we should split up.

Sunny: Sure But will you be alright by yourself.

Priya: yeah

Sunny and Priya split. Pritem, Arjun, Anurag, and Mitesh see them split and begin to run after them. Anurag and Arjun run behind Priya, while Mitesh and Pritem run behind Sunny. Priya rest and begins to giggle behind a tree. Arjun finds Priya and taps on her shoulder.

Arjun: hi!

Priya: Hi! (Realizing it was Arjun) Shit

Priya runs a bit further. Arjun follows. Priya circles the tree so does Arjun.

Arjun: (circling the tree) I got you so there's no point of this whole circling think.

Priya: You don't have me until you catch me.

Arjun: alright

Arjun runs behind her but falls into a mud puddle and is completely covered with mud. While getting up Arjun gets an idea. Priya turns to look, but doesn't see Arjun. She stops and begins to look for Arjun. Arjun snicks behind her like a zombie and taps on her shoulder. Priya turns and screams. Priya begins to walk backwards, scared. Arjun continues to walk towards Priya like a zombie. [Due to Arjun being covered with mud Priya doesn't recognizes him] Priya turns and runs away from Arjun. Arjun run behind her. Priya looks back and see Arjun running behind her. While running and looking back at Arjun; Priya bumps into Anurag. She looks up and hugs him as hard as she could. Arjun stops in front of Priya and Anurag, looking at Anurag. Anurag gives a gesture of he doesn't know what happen.

Anurag: (moving Priya always from him) Priya are you ok.

Priya: (moving away. Calming down) Yeah I'm sorry I don't know what came over me.

Arjun: (cleaning his face) did I scare you

Priya turns to look at Arjun and laughs, so does Anurag. Anurag, Priya, and Arjun walk back into the park. Mitesh and Pritem and Sunny come back into the park also.

Pritem: (acting like a cop) you both are under arrest, anything you say can and will be used against you in the court of Anil Malhotra.

Anurag: You know something we were sent here to keep an eye on Sunny, but it was really you we should have kept an eye on.

They all walk back in front of the cinema.

Priya: I going with sunny

Mitesh: But we're following

Sunny: ok sure I don't mind.

Priya and Sunny get into the car. Mitesh goes to his trunk and gets out a blanket and lays it on top of the back seat.

Mitesh: (talking to Arjun) try not to get any mud on my car.

Arjun: (getting into the car) Yeah, Yeah, Yeah.

They all drive off and arrive at Priya's house. Anurag, Mitesh, Pritem, and Arjun go into Priya's house. Priya and Sunny are outside talking.

Priya: Sorry for all that happen tonight. I didn't know it will go this far.

Sunny: No I said it was ok. It was kind of fun, after such a long time I felt like a kid. I should be thanking you.

Priya: I should go now.

Sunny: yeah you should

Sunny reach over to Priya and kisses her on her cheek. Sunny walks back to his car. Priya walks up to her steps and turns to watch sunny leave. Priya turns and opens the door. Priya enters and see her father with his arms crossed. Arjun is behind Anil giving her a gesture that she died.

Anil: what were you thinking, running away from them?

Priya: I'm sorry dad.

Kiran: (coming out of the kitchen) she did what?

Priya: look mom this is what happen, I arrived to the cinema when we got a ticket we went inside to get popcorn. But then Anurag called me asking what movie I was watching. After I cut of the phone I looked around for sunny, who was buying popcorn, and I saw Mitesh and Pritem buying tickets so I knew dad told them to follow me

Kiran: (to Anil) you sent them to follow her. How could you?

Priya: and then in the theater they began to throw popcorn at sunny and then the cup; that was holding the popcorn.

Anurag: cause he was going to kiss her. (Anil and Kiran are shocked)

Priya: He wanted to know what you would do if he pretended to kiss me. Anyway before I was so rudely interrupted, I pushed him away before he threw the cup. Then when we left they begin to follow us. So we ran into the park and then we just ran around and now we're here.

Kiran: (talking to the boys) I'm disappointed at all of you, mostly you Anil. You should have called like you always did. Anurag and Mitesh you look like the smart ones, why did you go with this.

Pritem: Actually we meaning me and Arjun we're the smart ones we were there to watch the movie.

Arjun: and we just threw popcorn because it seemed like fun and (acting like soldier) we're boys it are duty.

Pritem and Arjun walk like soldier towards Kiran. Pritem, Arjun, Kiran, and Priya are across Anurag, Mitesh, and Anil.

Mitesh: I was there as a big brother and causes Anurag dragged me. (Walking towards the other side)

Anurag: tum be.

Anil: (yelling) Party change (whispering to Anurag) who told you to bring them and why did you throw popcorn. I told you not to mess it up, just follow them.

Anurag: I don't usually do anything without them. And that they only thing we could do to stop him from putting his arms around her.

Anil: Alright but still we lost.

Anurag: What do you mean?

Anil: they have more people.

Anurag: so

Anil: When Kiran gets involved it her rules, not mine. Her rules are the person who has more people on they side wins. If it's equal the first person who changes his mind loses. So it's better if we say sorry and get on with our lives.

Anurag and Anil: (talking to Priya) we're sorry and we'll never do this again

Anil: except I'll call

Priya: fine with me

Anil: chale

Anurag: where and for what

Anil: I have to go to the kitchen for the punishment.

Anurag: Punishment

Anil: too wash the dishes

Anurag: (yelling) I'm not washing dishes this is not even my house.

Anil: Don't raise your voice and when did you I say that you have to clean it

Anurag: Sorry I through you was telling me to come when you said chale. But don't you have a maid.

Anil: My wife does everything at home with the help of me and Priya. So she says she doesn't need a maid.

Kiran: (throwing an apron on at Anil) Anurag beta look you don't have to clean the dish, but don't think that this is not your house. All of you are welcome here. Think of this as your own house.

Anurag: ok Aunty

Kiran: (to Anil) Now you straight to the kitchen

Anil: Yes madam

Everyone leaves. Priya grabs another apron and puts it on and begin to help her dad.

Anil: what are you doing?

Priya: helping

Anil: why

Priya: If it wasn't for me you wouldn't be here

Anil: oh mera beta (hugging her)

Edited by .:Misty:. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you Gaurav''s Love and ~Sirius*Ysh~ for your comment. Ysh i'll try to go over and fix my mistake more.

Misty

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sure!!! ypur mistakes have redeuced a lot in this chapter!!!!

I really like this one too... it was fun and i could picture all the charectors!!!!!

and sunny seems sweet... wish you showed Arjun being jealous!!!

i like arjun/priya pair better than anurag/priya pair :">

but yea tey're cute too... its just that i like the fighty fighty love-hate thing u knw...

great chapter and wanna know what happens next!!!!
pleeez update soon

luv

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Had originally been posted on IF.in. I'm starting from the start for the people whom have not read my story and have added some changes for the interest of the reader.

Episode 18

Priya walks into the canteen.

Priya: hey (wondering) where's Pritem

Mitesh: he didn't feel like coming to school today.

Anurag: (mad, but doesn't show it much) so how's your boyfriend

Priya: (confused) Boyfriend who?

Anurag: Sunny

Priya: (laughing) Sunny is not my boyfriend.

Anurag: Yes he is

Priya: No he's not

Anurag: (begins to show that he's mad) Yes he is

Priya: (getting mad) No he's not

Anurag: Yes he is

Priya: (mad) how are you going to go and tell me that he is my boyfriend?

Anurag: you when on a date with him.

Priya so! One date doesn't officially make you boyfriend or girlfriend

Anurag: yes it does

Priya: No it doesn't

Anurag: yes it does

Priya: No it doesn't

Anurag: you're so negative

Mitesh, Manisha, Arjun watch back and forth from Priya and Anurag.

Arjun: (yelling) I'm the only one who fights with Priya.

Anurag and Priya: (looking at Arjun) shut Up (Arjun jumps back as Manisha and Mitesh laugh)

Priya: I'm negative (Priya sees sunny at the door, yelling) Sunny (sunny looks up at Priya) Come here (sunny walks up to Priya) If you go on a date once, does officially make you are boyfriend and girlfriend?

Sunny: No

Priya: (speaking to Anurag) see

Anurag: But could a first date indicate that you are boyfriend and girlfriend

Sunny: yes

Priya: But what -

Anurag: (cutting her off) Sunny you can go, she just going crazy.

Priya: I'm crazy, I'm negative well you're (stumbling on her words, everyone giggles) you're (pauses) Uhhhhhhh

Manisha: forget him; he's in the mood of bugging everyone.

Priya: (calming down) why weren't you in class today.

Anurag: Didn't feel like going

Manisha: I don't want to go to class today.

Arjun, Mitesh, Anurag: me either

Manisha: Let's cut [cut, buck, meaning don't attend class]

Anurag, Arjun, Mitesh: Fine

Priya: But I want to go to class

Manisha: Come on it will be fun.

Priya: I want to go to class

Anurag: (giggling) what you're in love with Mr. Verma

Priya: You're disgusting

Priya gets up to get away from Anurag. Priya walks behind Anurag. Anurag grabs her hand and pulls her. She falls on top of Arjun.

Arjun: (in pain) my legs my legs, your crushing my legs

Priya: (still on Arjun) I'm sorry, I'm soooooo sorry

Arjun: (in pain) get off my leg

Priya gets up and moves a side

Arjun: First it was hurtful to stand, sit and just be with Pritem. Now it's Anurag. I wonder who's next.

Manisha: what do you mean now its Anurag?

Arjun: remember the day Mitesh was teaching her to defend before we came to the canteen, she fell on top of me and that day I was with Anurag and yesterday night I was running with Anurag and I fell in the mud.

Priya: why don't you just disappear from my life?

Arjun: why don't you disappear from mine?

Pritem walks in

Pritem: (sad) hey guys

Manisha: you ok

Pritem: na

Manisha: why what happen?

Pritem: Nothing Anjali

Mitesh: why?

Pritem: she had to leave; before she left she wanted to meet me.

Manisha: Priya I told you didn't I

Priya: I'm Sorry

Pritem: why would you say sorry? Its destiny

After a few minutes the bell rings.

Manisha: Why don't we go to the park?

Anurag: sure

Priya: ok you guys have fun. Bye

Manisha: wait we'll drop you

Priya: what if Mr. Verma sees you.

Manisha: we're going to stop at the corner.

Priya: ok

Anurag: (leaving) yes he is

Priya: (leaving) no he's not

Anurag: (leaving) yes he is

Priya: (leaving) no he's not

Everyone walks to the class. Manisha, Mitesh, Pritem, Arjun, and Anurag stop at the corner. Priya walks towards class.

Anurag: she really walking towards class

Mitesh: Yo Arjun grab her before she enters

Arjun runs towards Priya. Arjun grabs Priya before she enters the class and drags her to the stairs. Manisha, Anurag, Mitesh, and Pritem run by the class and reach Priya and Arjun at the stairs.

Priya: (mad) what the hell were you thinking? Never and I mean never grab me like that

Arjun: (mad) I don't get an enjoyment doing this. You're the one who was walking into class like you were all it.

Mitesh: can we go now.

Priya ignores them and walks down the stairs. Pritem also ignores them and walks down the stair. Anurag, Mitesh, Manisha, Arjun walk behind them. Priya and Pritem walk out of school towards the park.

Manisha: I can't see them like this. we have to do something.

Mitesh: But what

Manisha: I don't know.

After a few minutes in the park, Priya and Pritem sit on the grass, back to back. Priya taps on Pritem to hand him the bag of chips.

Manisha, Anurag, Arjun, and Mitesh are sitting on the ledge looking at Priya and Pritem.

Anurag: This is not fun.

Mitesh: to make it we have to do something to get them back to normal.

Arjun: well we have a long week off from school, they'll get better.

Anurag: that's it

Manisha: what's it.

Anurag: look we have about the whole week off.

Manisha: So

Anurag: so let's go to my farmhouse for the week, it will be change of atmosphere.

Manisha: (pinching his cheek) you're so cute when you say something smart.

Manisha gets up and walks to Pritem and Priya.

Manisha: hey guys (Priya and Pritem look up) we have decided that we're going to Anurag farmhouse for the vacation.

Pritem and Priya: aha

Manisha: well then we're leaving tomorrow at five. So pack you bag and we'll meet each other in front of Mitesh house.

Priya and Pritem: aha

Everyone comes and sits next to Priya and Pritem. Pritem lies down and Priya lies down and puts her head on Pritem's stomach.

Manisha: So Pritem you'll pick me and Arjun up and drives us to Mitesh house and Priya Anurag will pick you up. And then when we come back we drive to Mitesh house and Pritem you will drop us home and Anurag will drop Priya home.

Pritem and Priya: whatever

Manisha: so it settled

Manisha lies down and puts her head on Priya's stomach. Anurag lies down and puts his head on Manisha stomach. Mitesh then puts his head on Anurag and Arjun puts his head on Mitesh, creating a circle. They all lay there looking at the sky.

Edited by .:Misty:. - 17 years ago
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awwwww the part b4 this was soooo hiliriousssss with them running around in the park like kids!!!!! 😆 dis part was so funny with anurag n priya fightin 😆 😆 continue soon hunnn
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Awww...thanks for posting all the sections. Finally got a chance to read it all. Very cute story...but I don't want Priya and Anurag to end up together. If that happened, I doubt Manisha and Priya can stay friends. I'm curous about this Avinash character...he seems interesting. Can't wait to read more!
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that was such a cute part... ic ould visualize the circle 😆

i loved arjun and priya fighting... but anurag and priya are cute too 😳

nd poor pritam yaar... hes so cute 😆

great job! and love this chapter!!!!

update soon

luv
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Had originally been posted on IF.in. I'm starting from the start for the people whom have not read my story and have added some changes for the interest of the reader.

Episode 19

Everyone started to pack. Priya is taking out some clothes from the closet.

Kiran: (looking through Priya's bag) Did you take your toothbrush?

Priya: oh no I forgot. (going into the bathroom)

Kiran: so when are you going to come back.

Priya: (coming out) the end of the week maybe, I not sure, but when Anurag comes I'll ask.

Kiran: ok finish packing, I'll wait downstairs.

Kiran leaves. Anurag and Pritem get into they car and drives towards Manisha's and Priya's house. Anurag arrives at Priya's house and begins to continuously honk the car horn. Priya opens her window and sticks her head out.

Priya: (yelling) Anurag, I'll be right down. But the way, when are we going to return?

Anurag: (yelling) the end of the week, the latest.

Priya: (yelling) ok

Anurag: (yelling) hurry up

Priya comes back in and closes the window. She grabs her bag and runs down the stairs.

Priya: Mom, the latest I'll be back is the end of the week.

Kiran: (speaking from the kitchen) Ok call me when you get there.

Priya: ok bye

Kiran: (coming out) wait, aren't you going to eat something before you go.

Priya: I'll just take a paratha.

Priya walks into the kitchen. Lefts the plate and takes out a paratha.

Priya: (rolling the paratha) I eat on the way there.

Kiran: take a napkin

Priya: I know. (kissing her mom on the cheek) ok bye. I call dad in the office.

Kiran: ok have fun.

Priya: (putting her shoe on) I will

Priya puts the rolled up paratha in her mouth. She grabs her bag and heads for the door. Anurag is inside the car, chewing on his nail, looking straight. Priya walks up to the car and knock on the window. Anurag turn and opens the door. Priya throws her bags to the back and gets in. she takes a bite of the paratha. Anurag drives away.

Priya: (after swallow the bite) You know that biting your nail is bad for health.

Anurag: I wasn't biting I was chewing

Priya: (grabs his hand, showing him his nail) you were biting.

Anurag: that part of the nail ripped off

Priya: (letting go) yeah right.

Priya and Anurag arrive at Mitesh house. Mitesh is outside, Priya and Anurag get out of the car and go to the back seat to get they stuff, so they could put it in Mitesh car.

Priya: (putting her stuff in the back of the expedition) Where's Manisha?

Mitesh: Don't know they late.

Anurag: Actually there they are.

Pritem pulls up to Mitesh driveway.

Arjun (coming out of the car) Sorry for being late, Manisha couldn't decided on a hair style to do.

Manisha: (taking out her bag) look who's talking the person who was in front of the mirror for an hour.

Pritem, Arjun, Manisha grab they stuff and puts it Mitesh's car. Everyone gets in. Mitesh get into the driver seat, Anurag in the passenger seat, Priya behind Mitesh and Arjun behind Anurag in the middle. Pritem sits behind Arjun and Manisha sits behind Priya in the back. Mitesh begins to drive. After a couple of minutes.

Priya: (calling her dad) hello papa, we're left.

Anil: When will you be back.

Priya: maybe at the end of the week.

Anil: ok have fun. Call when you get there.

Priya: ok bye dad (cuts the phone)

Manisha: Priya, you're going to love the house and the scenery it just to dead for.

Priya: Really! I can't wait.

Arjun: Anyways you know that Anurag house is haunted.

Priya: Yeah like I'm going to believe you.

Arjun: I didn't say that you should believe me. I was just informing you.

Anurag: It's not haunted it just that before I bought it someone died there. A guy around his 20's.

Priya: How did he die?

Anurag: (turning to look at Priya) this is what the representative of the house told me. The guy who lived there was Mohan Gupta. Mohan was home alone that night, mostly he lives with a roommate, but he went to visit his family. Anyways, he was upstairs when he heard something break, like a glass or something. When he came down he saw 5 people trying to steal some of his stuff. He quietly walks upstairs to call the cops, but one of the robbers saw him going up and told the others. While Mohan was dialing the number all the robbers came behind him and brutally murdered him. There wasn't even one part of his body that didn't stab. Some say that they all watched him die. Whenever they thought he was breathing they would stab him. Another said that, until they weren't positive that he was died, they kept stabbing and stabbing him. But after he died they took the body and kept dipping the body in the water, I think to clean it off. Then there took the body and hung it on the tree in the back of the house. After a couple of days his friend return and saw dry blood leading from the front door to the masses amount of dry blood on the floor of Mohan's room, he called the cops. They made an investigation, but didn't find anything. The only thing there found were proof that there were 6 people which was including Mohan and that they took his body to the lake next to the house and found him hanging on the tree. The weird thing is that the robbers didn't take anything. So Mohan's friend sold the house. This guy brought it but then moved to Mumbai. After that my parents brought it when I was 18. But there's no sign of any ghost, so you don't have to worry.

Priya begins feeling sick to her stomach.

Priya: (holding her stomach) stop the car

Mitesh: what?

Priya: Stop the car

Mitesh stops the car. Priya jumps out and ran to the side of the road and begins to throw-up. Everyone gets out and walks towards Priya. Manisha runs to Priya.

Manisha: (holding on to her) Priya you ok

Priya: (shaking her head) yeah water

Manisha: Mitesh you have water

Anurag: yeah I do.

Anurag grabs and begins to search his nap-shack. Anurag throws the bottle of water at Priya. Priya rinses her mouth and spits out the water. She drinks some water and washes her face. Everyone walks towards the car. Mitesh puts his hand on Priya's head.

Mitesh: You ok

Priya: yeah

Mitesh slides his hand of her head.

Anurag: sorry I shouldn't have told you

Priya: It was just the thought of someone dying like that. (Unable to make an expression)

Mitesh was about to walk into the driver seat.

Anurag: I'll drive

Mitesh: ok

Anurag goes to the driver seat Mitesh to the passenger. Priya sits behind Mitesh, Manisha sits behind Anurag, Pritem sits behind Priya, and Arjun sits behind Manisha. Priya puts her head to the side to rest and looks across at Anurag, who is chewing on his nails.

Priya: you're biting

Manisha: (not hearing what she said) huh

Anurag: It chewing.

Priya: biting

Anurag: chewing

Priya: biting

Anurag: chewing

Priya both ways it's bad for your health.

Anurag: how is it bad?

Priya: there are germs in your nail and then they go in your mouth. '

Anurag: that's why they invented mouthwash.

Priya: yeah when you eat they go into you stomach.

Anurag: that's why we have antibodies, sweetie.

Arjun: Yo I came here for a vacation not a health lesson.

Manisha: just put on some song.

Mitesh puts on Nakhre. Everyone falls asleep except for Anurag and Mitesh. They arrive at Anurag's house.

Anurag: (shaking Priya to get up) Priya wake up we're here

Priya: (sleepily) huh

Anurag: Priya we're here get up.

Priya: no 5 more minutes.

Priya goes back to sleep. Anurag tries to wake her up but she's falls fast asleep. Anurag picks her up and takes her into the room.

Anurag: (looking at Priya) Good night.

Edited by .:Misty:. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
great part this one too!!!

and that murder was too gross na i felt lyk priya too 😆...

and a week alone together??? wonder whats gonna pop up now :> :> :> :>

waiting for the next part 😉😉

spotted quite a few grammar errors... u may want to look into that 😛
otherwise i enjoed the chapter!!!

❤️Ysh❤️


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