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Dream Weavers

Posted: 1 years ago
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The Eternal Philosopher


In the midst of a split second

An emotion slipped from my heart.

Started twirling whirling, and twisting

As if it had flower-light feather wings!


Magic is what dreams are made of.

Feel genuine as long as we are inert

When awake, its canvas fades

But vibrant hues left a rainbow behind!


Inspire hope with sunshine

It will develop into a sunbeam!

Which breathes life

It gives you a fresh start!


When Dusk and Dawn started playing

Their preferred game Merry Go Round.

Time chuckled and joyfully applauded.

Only the eternal philosopher can hear!

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Beautifully encapsulated smiley32smiley32smiley32

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 1 years ago
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Beautifully written, Madhu. I especially loved the stanza about dreams - it rang so true! They feel real as long as we're not conscious. But in that alternate reality we feel every emotion as deeply as if it was real!

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Beautiful smiley27

Read your poem after a long time.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Simply beautiful smiley27

Love the imagery you draw with your words

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Adore this lyrical rapture of inspiration and getting inspired, the interplay of visual n tactile imagery and the realm of the Eternal Philosopher who is privy to all happening!! Thumbs up, good one but why have you gone slow on your writings? Yeh Dil mange more!

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Dream Weavers

Posted: 1 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: dhun.laagi

Beautifully encapsulated smiley32smiley32smiley32

Thank you Tannusmiley27, for this appreciation. smiley31
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Beautifully written, Madhu. I especially loved the stanza about dreams - it rang so true! They feel real as long as we're not conscious. But in that alternate reality we feel every emotion as deeply as if it was real!

Because they both incorporate a person's experiences and perceptions, dreams and reality have a lot in common. When reality is the objective experience of the outside world that we observe when awake, dreams are a type of subjective experience that takes place while we are asleep.

Thanks for the good words and appreciation, Lizziesmiley31

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: vyapti

Beautiful smiley27

Read your poem after a long time.

Hmn... It seems I am a bit slower than earlier. smiley1

Thank you Vyapti. smiley27

Edited by Viswasruti - 1 years ago
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Dream Weavers

Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: DreamOfEndless

Simply beautiful smiley27

Love the imagery you draw with your words

Thank you Ritu for the appreciation for my simple poem. smiley31

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