Midnight Rambles [Collection of short Poems-ish]

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Empty

The emptiness within has been eating me away.

Piece by piece, leaving no crumb behind.
It was eating me clean; squeaky clean.
I felt like a stranger in my own skin. .
Disgusted, almost.

Scrubbing until a drop of blood peaked through.
Once again, the emptiness flooded my veins

and every aspect of my body.
Slowly but surely my soul was no longer mine.
My body was no longer mine.
I was not me.
Anymore.

2.

A Puppet's Show

I was a puppet and you were my master.
You pulled the strings and I danced.
I danced till my feet bleed.
I struggled to stand still yet, you demanded I dance.
I danced with my crimson feet, broken ankle, and heavy eyes.
You ignored it all and repeated, "Dance!"
Night after night, I put on a show.
You bowed before the crowd as I fell.

3.

Queen

I wore a crown of lies.
Ruled a kingdom of deception.
Walked the halls of pretense.
Ate meals of dishonesty.
And believed in hypocrisy.
Truth was a lost word
As lies became a foundation of beings.
False hope - one after another
Dead or alive, it huddled
Consuming.
Body and soul
Mind and heart
Filled with lies.
When will it stop?
When will it end?
When will it let me be?

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Author's Note:

[THESE WORKS ARE PURELY MINE. PLEASE DON'T USE THEM WITHOUT MY PERMISSION]

Welp. Yeah.

I didn't know I could write shitty poems(ish) either. But these are literally written in middle of the night... so just let me know what you think of it. I am an amateur and I cannot write poems to save myself but these are sort of poems, I guess? This thread will be more of just whatever comes to my head and I write it down. It won't be all fully poems. Some will excerpt of short stories. Thanks!

-Sanaya

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-Elysian- thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiul
a puppets show is amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome...
Beautiful poems love it👏👏👏
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay, I'm like 903% sure I've read all of these before, but reading them again makes me fall in love them all over again, and I just want to go back again and again to read these. Also, sorry for the use of the word again, I've used it like seven times and I kinda' want to smack myself, so I totally don't blame you if you share my sentiments.

I don't know if it's just me, but A Puppet's Show and Queen are definitely my favorites, Empty's nice too, but the other two... I don't know, maybe it's the clear use of imagery and the rhyme scheme, but I got really into those two, like, could not even pick a favorite line because they're all so good, no bs, I'm totally serious.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow...amazing poems...🥳...so brilliantly penned...⭐️⭐️⭐️...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️...do write more dr...👍🏼...will be waiting......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So intense and awesome!!
U have got skills dude, comeon come up with more of these poem:-))))
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolutely fabulous poems!

I agree with Diya that the last two are definitely the best! Especially the puppet master one. I just love the imagery you created. So dark...yet so good! Well done😃😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful poems!
The puppet master one was my favourite <3
Keep writing and thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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emptiness and be someone puppet ..
i guess i understand ..
if related to situation i am in

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