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Hi everyone this is Trina here and I am back with my new story Time Machine. And wait this is not a sci-fic. It mainly involves the characters of Ramayana is Ram, Sita, Lakshman, Urmila, Bharat, Mandavi, Shatrughan and Shrutkirti ; And some modern day inspired counterparts.

Ram- Raman
Sita-Siya
Lakshman- Lakshya
Urmila-Yuvika
Bharat-Bhuvan
Mandavi-Mansi
Shatrughan- Shravan
Shrutkirti-Kritika

Besides these characters, we have some of our friends from IF who appear as main characters in my stories.They are Sumi, Anu, Prakiti, Shreya, Swati, Srutha, Riya, Mili, Shivam,Ramya, Anokhi, Charvi and yes, Me.

PS. Don't be surprised if some new characters appear suddenly or if some weird thing appears.

Warning: This story is only based on my crazy ideas and has no connection with reality. It is made for humour and is not meant to hurt anyone's sentiments. So please don't take it seriously.


Part 1 -below

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Part 1 - Trouble Comes Knocking



Ina big room, some voices could be heard. Four girls where sitting and chatting while looking in their mobiles. Another four were watching something on a laptop and talking in between.

Girl 1: This is so awesome. I love this part.I am waiting for the next part.
Girl 2: I know. Anu, this is amazing. Just like you.
By the way, Trina what are you doing, she said peeping in her Mobile.
Anu: I am sure she is updating her Time Machine. you know it was due for a long time.
Sumi: I know. But did you know, I only convinced her to...
Swati: Sumi,stop. We all know that.
Trina looks up from her mobile. Hi guys, did you know that I have added all of us in my story.
Sumi, jumps up. Wow, really. It sounds so interesting.
Anu and Swati together: Sumi sit down. Let her complete.

In other place, Srutha, Prakiti, Ramya and Shreya were watching reruns of Mahabharata on Srutha's laptop.
Ramya looking at Arjun: Arya is looking so handsome.
Srutha: I know. I wish we could meet him in real life.
Prakiti:Looking at Kanha, I have got a new idea for my OS.
Shreya: Hush. He is saying something, let me listen to him.
Srutha:Shreya,you have seen this episode about ten times.Let us discuss abou our new OS that we will writing together. Then we will watch this episode.
Ramya:Sru, did you read my last OS. You know I am waiting for your review since one week. When will you unres your comment.

At this time, someone knocks on the door.
Srutha: I think this is Riya, Shivam Bhaiyya and Mili. They are again late.
Ramya goes and opens the door.
Ramya: You three are again late. What happened now.
Mili: Ask your Bhaiyya only. He was so late. Me and Rii were waiting at his house for 30 minutes. She said as she sat down on the couch.
Shivam: See I was busy unlike some of you.
Riya: Stop. I had enough of Mili and Shivam' s bickering the whole car ride.Next time I am not picking up these two. They are so troublesome.
Prakiti:Its alright. We can understand.
Riya: Are those chocolate cookies. She picks up one and tastes it. Wow.
Sumi: They are so tasty.I love it. Swati got them for us.
Riya:Thanks Swati.
Trina: By the way, bhaiyya did you see Anokhi. She called m two hours ago but when I picked up her call , she didn't reply.
Anu: I am sure this is one of her pranks.
No, this is not one of her pranks. A familiar vouce said from behind them.

The whole gang turned around to see six familiar faces.
Raman, Siya, Bhuvan, Mansi, Shravan and Kritika walked in through the door.
Shivam:What do you mean. We didn't get it.
Siya: We have a big problem here. Anokhi along with Yuvika and Lakshya has gone missing.
The whole gang stands up from there place.
WHAT. How. They all shouted.

Kritika: I will explain. Siya's uncle, Khusal is a scientist. He had made a time machine but he had not done its trial. So he had called us for help in the trial.Yuvika and Lakshya had reached here before us.Anokhi had also come here with them. But looks like they had unintentionally activated the time machine and reached in old age. Khusal uncle called Siya and told her all this. So we decided to call you all here. We need our help .We don't know how to get them back. Uncle Khusal has come , he will explain us and only he can help us save our friends.

Bhuvan: So will you all help us in this mission.
Anu:Of course. They all our friends after all and friends help one another.
Sumi: Definitely. I am detective Sumi and I can solve all problems.
Mili:Wait kiddo, don't forget us. When Detective Mili is there then no fear.
Shivam: To save all from these two detectives, I am here Detective Shivam.
Sumi and Mili glare at him.
Srutha: Don't forget I am the boss.
Shravan: And I am Srutha's assistant.
Then Swati comes to the rescue of others. Swati: Don't mind them. They are like that only. But we will definitely find our friends don't worry.
Siya: I am worried about them especially Anokhi, Lakshya and Yuvika are very naughty and they are always doing pranks on others.I hope they don't do something that will put them or dear Anokhi in trouble.
As soon as she said this, Shivam and Sumi started laughing.
Shivam: Siya don't worry for Anokhi. I hope that Yuvika and Lakshya are fine with Anokhi. Anokhi has a knack for getting in trouble. Hopefully, she doesn't put Yuvika and Lakshya in trouble.
Sumi: Bhaiyya is right. When Anokhi is there, there is always trouble.
Kritika: So that means there will be double trouble this time.
Everyone looks at her. What she said was actually true and they hoped that the three don't cause much trouble.
Uncle Khusal comes there from his room. So you all are here.
Siya: Yes uncle. Please uncle tell us what happened.
Khusal: Well in the morning, Yuvika and Lakshya had come with their friend...
Raman: Her name is Anokhi , Uncle. Sorry everyone, he has a tendency to forget things.
Khusal:Yes, Anokhi. They were there to help me when by mistake, they activated my machine and reached in some old age. Come I will take you to my office.
He lead to a door and when he opened the door, everyone saw a huge room full of many devices and computer.

Everyone was shocked to see the room. Finally Mansi broke the silence.
Mansi: Wow. This is amazing. I have seen something like this is my entire life.
Shivam: This is awesome.
Siya: Let us not forget why we are here. We can admire this place later.
Riya: Uncle, show us.
Khusal stopped in front of a huge computer.
Khusal: This computer is attached to the Time Machine so we can get the idea where the three have gone. He did something on the computer.
Ahh. I got it. Your friends have reached Treta Yug. The signals have detected the time machine in Treta Yug. But how did they get there I don't know. One thing is clear that my time machine is working.
Raman :If you can find where is the time machine then can't you bring back the machine.
Khusal laughs slightly, Raman I know you are worried about our friends. But unfortunately I can't do anything. Time machine can only come back if they bring it back.
Siya: so the thing we can do is hope that they come back soon. She looks thoughtful.
Raman keeps his hand on her shoulder, to support her. Don't stress. Everything will be all right.
Riya: Yes, we will find them soon. Isn't it Shivam.Shivam.
She turns around to see that Shivam and all their friends are not there.
Siya: Where did these people go. They were here only.
They look everywhere in the room but they couldn't find anyone.
Raman: Let us look in the living room.

When they approach the living room , they find their friends there. They all were busy doing something or the other.
Shivam was discussing with Ramya and Kritika about the later's new I Phone 7.
Anu , Sumi, Trina and Shravan were reading and talking about Anu's FF and Trina's Time Machine SS.
Prakiti and Mili were admiring Bhuvan's paintings on his phone. While Bhuvan was talking to Swati about her job.
Srutha and Shreya were watching reruns of Mahabharata with Mansi, while admiring their Arya.
Raman, Sita and Riya were to see this.
Raman: What's happening here. We were here on a mission to save our friends and now leaving that aside, these people are enjoying here.
Siya: Exactly. These people will never change,she said while shaking her head.
Riya: Wait I will do something.
Everyone, Stop. She shouted at the top of her voice.

Everyone stopped what they were doing and stood up from their places at once.
Raman and Sita look impressed at the stern and strict side of Riya.
Riya: What's all this. Our friends are in trouble and you people are enjoying here. Don't forget that we have to complete. Everyone just stop whatever you are doing. NOW, she bellowed.
Mili:Sorry, Uncle was taking a long time so we just thought to ...you know...
Siya: Guys, we can all enjoy together. But first, we must find Lakshya, Yuvika and Anokhi.
Raman: Let's go see Uncle. He may give us some suggestions. We must find them fast else we all will be in great trouble.
Anu: Oh my! If their parents find out about it , what will we do. We just can't tell them that they have gone in old age through the Time Machine.
Bhuvan: Yes, so if they ask us about them we will have to give them a good excuse for their absence. We can't let anyone know about this.

Everyone agreed on this and they proceeded to Khusal's office.
After few minutes...
Mansi: Uncle, did you find anything.
Khusal: No. I tried everything I could but there is nothing I can do. Your friends must only activate the machine and come back to the present.
Kritika: But how. I mean they don't even know how to use it.
Shravan: Yes, they just activated the machine by mistake last time. I don't know if they will be able to do it again.
Swati: We can just hope that they are able to activate it and come back here.
Khusal: I am trying to adjust the controls of the machine and see if we can locate it and bring them back. The only thing we know is that they are in Treta Yug.
Another thing, I forgot to tell you. When your friends came this morning, there was another girl with Anokhi. ...I don't remember her name but she looked about 17-18years old.She also went with them.

Everyone was shocked.
Shivam: Who can this be. Oh no, he suddenly realized something.
Prakiti: Its Charvi. Oh my. I remember, we tried calling her an hour ago but it said that there was no signal.
Mansi: I hope she is fine.
Srutha: Charvi is smart, I know she will be able to do something and keep the others out of trouble.
Trina: Yes. But knowing Anokhi, I think they will surely have some trouble.
Riya:When Charvi is there, don't fear. I am sure they will be fine. They should just come back soon.
Siya: Uncle, we are outside. Call us if you find anything or need any help.
Saying so, everyone returned to the living room to think about the situation. They all were worried for their friends, hoping that they were fine.

A few minutes later, they heard a loud sound coming from the office, hearing which they all ran there. On opening the door, they saw the Time Machine coming back.
It was surrounded by a bright light so they couldn't see anything. They all closed their eyes.
Bhuvan:See our friends are back.

Everyone smiled. They were happy to have their friends back. A few seconds later they all opened their eyes expecting to see their friends.But the sight in front of them shocked everyone to the core and they were left standing there with their jaws open.



Edited by Trinaa - 8 years ago
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So my Trin Trin or Bharat Bhaiya is back with new SS : Time Machine .. 😎
It was damn awesome and funny 🤣😉👏
I can't wait to read it further 😛
So coming up to the story , it was intriguing and amazing ⭐️
Starting with Anu's update and me boasting that I convinced Trin Trin .. 🤣
Sru, Praks , Rams and Chutku watching Krishna's episodes and their reactions 😆 😆 😆

Then comes our Milz , Bhaiya and Riii 🤣🤣 Detectives along with me 😎😆

Yuvika Lakshya Anokhi gone in Old age , something damn funny for us in store ... Isn't it ?? 😆😆😆 😉

Waiting to see how Anokhi creates trouble for Lakshya - Yuvika 🤣😉

Ramayan Collab with us , it's so amazing to read yaar , u know , it's feels too real 😆😉

Who came back 😲 , come on , I hate Cliffies 😡😆
Update yaar , can't wait to read yaar and bring Lakshmila in next part , I am missing them 😭😆

Love yaa
Sumi ❤️😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Trin Trin!
Loved every bit of it...
Awesom-ease!😆
Totally enjoyed reading it, with highlights of each of ours' characters brought about amazingly😉

Shivam Bhaiya and my bickerings😆
Redo Sweetheart❤️
Anu ke FF ke charche har jagah hain...I'm sure Treta Yug me bhi honge😉
Anokhu on an adventure...I know she's gonna enjoy!
As I said...loved every bit!

Update jaldi jaldi :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Trin Trin!!!!!😃😳
You are so good in writing all genres Dear, Missed you really a lot!!!

Thanks a lot for coming back! Your writing is awesome !! Really good dear, awesome!

And coming to the part, damn I died 😆😆

I love the part that you've given me 😃
Awesome !!

I love how the story will progress .. really want to read more !!

Love, Anu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi!

Thanks for coming back!!🤗

Loved it...

Sounds interesting!

Mili and Sumi glaring at Shivam Bhaiya was hilarious🤣🤣

It was a cute, funny, hilarious and intriguing os.👏


Want to read second part soon.


hope its lakshmila who come via time machine to 21st centuary.

With much love,

Sakshi❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LakshMila

Trin Trin!
Loved every bit of it...
Awesom-ease!😆
Totally enjoyed reading it, with highlights of each of ours' characters brought about amazingly😉

Shivam Bhaiya and my bickerings😆
Redo Sweetheart❤️
Anu ke FF ke charche har jagah hain...I'm sure Treta Yug me bhi honge😉
Anokhu on an adventure...I know she's gonna enjoy!
As I said...loved every bit!

Update jaldi jaldi :D


@bold With your blessings Milu Maa ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SenAnu


@bold With your blessings Milu Maa ❤️



Ye kya tum log mujhe Maa ke darje pe pohcha rhe ho😆
Pehle Char aur ab tum. Doesnt suit lol.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Trin Trin!
This was so nice.
Loved loved loved 😳
Most exciting part? Meko ismein include kiya! ❤️
And epic that you capture everyone's reactions bang on!
You go girl!!
Agli baar meko PM chaiye! 😆
Edited by Shrinika13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic part Trinaa😃

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