The Girl in Crimson Red:: One Shot - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Writer,
This is the first piece of your work I've come to read. And it caught my attention. So there are mysteries to unravel if you intend to do that. However, a girl ghost roaming in the school... I couldn't help myself from recalling mourning Myrtle from HP!

Why he became irate when his friend had called him Aki? Hope we'll get this answer too!

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Writer,
This is the first piece of your work I've come to read. And it caught my attention. So there are mysteries to unravel if you intend to do that. However, a girl ghost roaming in the school... I couldn't help myself from recalling mourning Myrtle from HP!

Why he became irate when his friend had called him Aki? Hope we'll get this answer too!

Love,
Dyuti


Dear reader,
Call me Sanaya :)
I loved your response. I see you are also a fan of HP!
Though, whilst writing I didn't quite think of Myrtle :') But yes, I see the resemblance.
This piece was and is meant to be a one shot. I purposely left the the ending with such mystery so the reader can have their own interpretation.
However, since I am seeing many interested in a story in this manner... I might write something a bit similar to this... Might. Not a gurantee yet. I am still thinking.
Nonetheless, thank you so much for your kind feedback. Hope to see you in my other works as well :)

-Sanaya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You deserve to be smacked hard! Here I am dying g for an update on LilliAke and don't want to read anything but that and you bring on board an OS such as this. It was so hauntingly beautiful that it is criminal to let it just be an OS. But I know for the fact that if you pull into a FF it will die a slow painful death just like other stories.

Seriously when you can write this good you better write and write till kingdom come. My mind is swirling with endless possibilities to this tale. How diabolic of you to let it hang in a perpetual state of what if .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meself

You deserve to be smacked hard! Here I am dying g for an update on LilliAke and don't want to read anything but that and you bring on board an OS such as this. It was so hauntingly beautiful that it is criminal to let it just be an OS. But I know for the fact that if you pull into a FF it will die a slow painful death just like other stories.

Seriously when you can write this good you better write and write till kingdom come. My mind is swirling with endless possibilities to this tale. How diabolic of you to let it hang in a perpetual state of what if .

hahahahahahaahha
it was meant for what ifs.
that was the sole purpose - what if.

my classes just ended today so im still contemplating if i want to write here again lol

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome One Shot Sanaya.I specially loved the Romeo-Juliet part.Do write more.

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