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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Good start. But dont confuse me. You have 3, 4 FFs going now and I get confused 😃. Finish one please, I am waiting how long for the other one the Madhava one😆😆

Also I have to applaud you for writing so many, I cant think of another one with Seven Vows running

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Very interesting story . Waiting to read the further story .😊

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LakshMe

@Milaksh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome...👍🏼

loved the concept❤️...

Eagerly waiting for the next update😃

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Synopsis.

Okay this has to be the darkest stuff that you have written. I say dark because the one thing that I could envision was Vishnu in fury with both His Sister and Brother-in-Law accentuating that rage in him. I don't know why I get this picture but this refuses to leave my head. Next the subtle mention of Shree taking the form of Dhara and residing again at Her Lord's heart. It feels the anger will be calmned somehow all thanks to Dhara. I really loved this one. But promise you will continue this one or else I won't bother coming here.

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Prologue.

Will come to this later.

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Maria

@JRia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Nice prologue... waiting for more

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Srutha, ermm so a its time for bhudevi to incarnate. And narayana this time would adorn an eka-patnivrat. Very very interesting this is. Tell me, this is based in kalayuga or dwaparyuga or??

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aanvi

@aanvi98

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

The convo was so sweet! The point u got; sita was part of Bhudevi. Good analysis! So it will be set on kaliyuga. I hv a ques, will it be a complete love story or some villain will pop up suddenly? I love love stories without any hurdle. Plz keep my req😆