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Originally posted by: LakshMila

Speechless I am!

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Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..

Love this chapter, Bhu!

The scene between Shiva-Parvathi is sweet and very realistic. I can imagine it happening for real.

The scene with Dharani imagining herself comforting Krishna is so nice. Is he feeling pain because of the atrocities of people on Earth?

Dharani's mom is starting to get annoying. I wish there was at least one affectionate scene with her.

Is Pravha supposed to symbolize Urmila?

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Shrutha,

Very profound and beautiful. I simply love the way you write, it is enthralling.

Love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

Unres.

I have too many things to say.

I love the name, I love the concept of Dharani seeing Kanha, talking to Him. I understand and deeply sympathise with the theme

About the Shri-Bhu part, I agree completely with that viewpoint.

Janani Dharani bonding was depicted amazingly. To have a Ma in a best friend, a sister. It was ❤️

I loved the part where you show Madhava as hurt by people's lack of understanding of Him, because it probably is true. I loved the Shiva-Parvati scene too ❤️ They are too epic for words

I do believe that God has human emotions. I really can't wait for the next part! 😳

Originally posted by: ramya06

Srutha,a beautiful chapter. That scene between Shiva-Parvati was lovely!
And that vision which dharani gets, the lord being hurt because no one understands him. I don't know i am a bit confused about many things in this chapter. 😛
But nevertheless it was a great read! 👏 Keep writing!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

This was just wonderful! Oh, Kanha is really the best of ALL of them! Ohh, he shouldn't be sad at all! It's the people's fault they don't understand him, why does he have to be sad! I'm so glad to see how things are slowly turning bright for Dharani!

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

I loved Shiva -Parvati part. Shrutha being a person of Kaliyuga forgive me for saying this, I can never connect with the idealistic world. I cannot connect with Dharani seeing Krishna. You needs to be connected to your feelings more maybe to feel that way, but my brain works more than feelings 😃

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Speechless I am!

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Originally posted by: radianteyes.

Same reaction 😆

You mentioned it all di

Everything out