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attubaby

@attubaby

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

wow...girl u pen down human emotions so well👏

how lucky a girl gets when she can see the reflection of her father in her husband...same care, same efforts to push forward and same concern😊

very emotional, very touching, and very beautiful indeed.

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: gmgi
Janu 🤗

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Desirable_Star

@Desirable_Star

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey dear!!!!

Brilliant story👏👏

Really loved it to the core❤️

A daughter and father relationship is a unique one...and trust me you described it really well😃

I literally have moist eyes now...your story is just too good👏

And the last line...*trust me angel i m there*...this dialogue which her dad said...really a girl want to see her dad's reflection in her husband...😳

Keep writing like this😃

PS - I would be glad to read your stories...please pm me the link if any other is there...or if u write any in future...😊

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Desirable_Star
Hey dear!!!!
Brilliant story👏👏
Really loved it to the core❤️
A daughter and father relationship is a unique one...and trust me you described it really well😃
I literally have moist eyes now...your story is just too good👏
And the last line...*trust me angel i m there*...this dialogue which her dad said...really a girl want to see her dad's reflection in her husband...😳
Keep writing like this😃

PS - I would be glad to read your stories...please pm me the link if any other is there...or if u write any in future...😊

Hey thank you so much..

I have written another OS called let go which am thinking to extend. Again am working on 2 stories EKAKI and complexities on the writers corner.

You may find them on the first or second pg as I update them daily. 😃

If u r on wattpad u can find these stories under the profile of jan1916. 😃

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Janhvi di, this is so touching 😃

Being a daddy's girl, i became so emotional & the last part was heart wrenching 😭

I am commenting here after a few sobs

Dad is the first hero & love of every daughter 😃 and she expects her spouse to be the reflection of her dad 😳

Thanks for pm 🤗

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Janhvi di, this is so touching 😃
Being a daddy's girl, i became so emotional & the last part was heart wrenching 😭
I am commenting here after a few sobs
Dad is the first hero & love of every daughter 😃 and she expects her spouse to be the reflection of her dad 😳
Thanks for pm 🤗

Don't cry babes..

🤗