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Posted: 9 years ago
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marvellous OS...👏
keep on writing like this .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey proteeti !
Grl i need a hug 🤗
ths was perfect.. Extremely well written and BEAUTIFUL
NO DOUBT UR AN EXCELLENT WRITER.
I cried reading ths! Why? For the SHe in the os is ME!
It felt like u have watchd me sitting and crying fr my grandma and after seeing me u've written ths 😆
nt just that instance bt the whole os i cn relate to and have gone thru
keep it up
brilliance is YOU ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice os friend
good job
well written yaar
thank you for pm
waiting for new story

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful shot dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so beautiful os...👏👏👏...very heart touching...👍🏼...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

Beautiful os👏



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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_

Amazing OS.

Really heart touching.
Tfd pm.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: TwinMadness

Pro, you are just 👏

You are a fantastic writer :)
Our Krishna has gifted you with the talent of writing :) Write a lot more, okay?(I can't help saying it)
I loved it ❤️
Can't wait for more and more from you :)



Aww! Thank you so much Sruthadi! I'm so happy you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani



Aww! Thank you so much Sruthadi! I'm so happy you liked it!

I like everything you write :) You're like my little sister 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Beautifully written pro

You are wonderful at writing
Love this os to the core
The banner is amazing as well
Keep writing more
-Manu :))



Thank you so much Manu! I'm glad you liked it!

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