*Ke Pag Ghungroo*~ A Short Story(Update Pg 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: potterginny

Mahishee!

I so love this story! ❤️
Shubhangi's story in two posts, her passion, love and respect towards art, reverence for elders, triviality of people who don't understand neither of these qualities, frailty of human mind and sweep around life in general... so much in so little..you said it all!
You have some real gift of talent there! I am so glad you do! It's a treat getting to read what you pen down.
Thoroughly grateful for the pm, dearie.
Love,
Yagneshri


Yagneshri!

Thanks a ton dear
I am so happy you loved this... It's a pleasure to read such beautiful comments on a piece of hard work
Love,
Mahishee
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmishthi

Great start yar , ek kam kar ek link bejhti hoon PM PE waha post kar it's a great platform for writers called wattpad .


Thanks... Done :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Commendable pace here! The flashback was very beautiful! Very eager to know what mistake did her Aunt commit before!
And, it was so good of her to refuse the Englishman.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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An interesting series dear !
You should update soon .
Sam
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Pro!
Yes, you will get to know
But erm... The mistake was made by Shubhangi herself😊

Am glad you liked it so much! It encourages a lot😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

An interesting series dear !

You should update soon .
Sam


Thank you Sam
I'll definetly read your stories too, except that 18+ one😆
Doing it right away

Yes I will😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After a pretty vacation... Am back to IF! And here's the next update. A bit short one... Please wait patiently for the story
Thanks for all your love!





Chapter 3




That Evening

Shubhangi went around the house, doing the evening chores. She lit the lamp on the dias on the Tulsi Manch. She watered the plants, folded the dried clothes. All the time she hummed a soft tune to herself. It was actually a lori her Guruji used to sing to her. It calmed and soothed her mind giving a certain degree of peace and satisfaction. She was expecting the cook to come anytime soon, when the doorbell rang. She went to the door and froze for a moment. For a second, she couldn't comprehend who were they because she was too used to the cook's arrival at that hour.

"Hmmm...?", she questioned the new comers. Foreigners, they were. Young girls of her age , somewhere in their early twenties. Dressed in loose salwar kameez, they indeed looked adapted to this Indian environment. One of the young lady even wore a Bindi. It looked rather cute to Shubhangi and a soft chuckle escaped her lips.

" Please come in", she said when they were unable to answer the question at the door. They settled in the living room, adjacent to the open courtyard. There was a certain warmth in the house. Ancient pieces adorned the shelves and old customary wall hangings hung on the walls. The yellow walls seemed brighter even, when they reflected the lamp light of the diyaas lit around. Overall,it was quite impressing to the group and they found this very unique.


"Miss Shubhangi", began the eldest of them. " Mr. Jerry sent us here in search of true art."
A sigh, involuntarily gasped from her mouth. Disinterest clearly reflected her face as she prepared herself to say a flat "No" before heading or understanding anything what they had to say.
Nevertheless, the lady continued: "Mr. Jerry, our theatre contractor, who signed us for a stage performance here, wanted US to learn from you. And if you would be kind enough, we would be rather pleased to have you as our lead dancer."

Shubhangi crossed her arms against her chest and with a little desperation, politely rejected their offer.

"I am sorry Miss, I don't work for someone else."
"Please, Miss, we come here with high hopes", she said.
" I am sorry", came a simple reply. Flat and bold, she refused to budge from her point.


They got up to leave after a humble "Thank you". When everyone had almost left, Shubhangi went to shut the door. But before she could do so, one of the ladies returned for a last talk.


" Look, I am really not inter...", went on Shubhangi.

"But I want to know the REASON", came a pat interjection.
REASON?

It seemed a simple word. But it wasn't. Not atleast for her.
But she had a point. She couldn't be so rude to them. They ought to know the reason.


" Come in", she said. But this time her tone had softened down. Humbleness made its way into her voice.
The lady sat hesitantly on the sofa. Shubhangi found her different from others. There was a sparkle in her eyes and a look of determination. Much like she herself. And sometimes, we just tend to like someone, no specific reason though.

"I don't know of anyone else in the world but the Man who lies inside, motionless and still." Her voice had gravity and heaviness.


"I might be seven or eight when I found him or rather he found me. We had been neighbours for sometime and when Ma and PA passed away, she readily took up my responsibility. Some relations neither have the strength of blood or the support of family background... Some just happen and are bound to be. We share such a unique one."




Love,
Mahishee😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Res for Chapter 1
Unres for Chapter 1

Mahii 👏👏
Fantastic chapter 😊
Being a dancer myself, I can understand Shubhangi's feelings, and her love for dance. This is how all dnacers feel. If something happens to their Guru, they feel crippled. Very well written :)
Edited by TwinMadness - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Intriguing. I liked your portrayal of the strength of Shubhangi's character, as indicated by her polite but firm refusal of the offer. A job well done, I say.👏
I'm excited to know what the further chapters reveal.
Update soon.

Love,
Lily
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Shubhangi's inner strength is admirable. Not many can put down such offers like she did.

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