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@navk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

ya 1 more thing
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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

congo for second thread tasha...

i love this story...and want u to update twice a week but i know its not possible...

coming to the update it was superb mind blowing and romantic too...

i loved it how ryan was calling ella his girl , his kitty...

their good bye kiss was hot...

so...i knew it that ella will not be safe...

oh god...that letter was scary...i hope ella will be fine...

now they are dead as ryan will crush them...

waiting for next update eagerly...

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Aiman

@princess_tara

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

congratulation for 2nd thread of this amazing story

thanx for scrap and pm both

coming to the update it was superb

ryan n ella both r very cute together

love thier cute moments

omg ella is in danger i hope as always ryan safe her

eager to read next part

update it asap

Edited by princess_tara - 10 years ago

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Aanchal

@-AnyDestiny-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

I so damn loved it..😃

it was hot..😳

and emotinal too..😭

finally ella leaved..😭

But that last prt..

scary..

update soon..

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cuppypie121

@cuppypie121

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

looks like i need to read this story from start🤢

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Hi...i m ur new reader...usually i read swaron works...nd sme tr...but this is an amazing work...thank you soomuch for the pm...ur decsriptions abt each scene...whtr its action ,romance or funny...well written...superb job dear...waiting for the nxt update...love you

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Priyanka Datta

@taani.priya1997

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Congrats for second thread

I so loved that kiss moment...
Reyan and ella...well they are just awesome...

Waiting for ashiquii

And you have send me a personal PM will reply soon and will send you PM.

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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

res
unres

now be ready for a long comment...😛
Chapter 1 & 2

I must say I became a fan of Ella 's character right from the beginning...
Her character really appeals to me...inspite of being brither's baby sister...she is mentally strong , courageous...and brave as well...😃..i also liked the intro of ryan a.k.a rocky..
then came ryan's pov...i wonder who is spike...🤔
then ella's pov ...i donno who that unknown person is , who did that to her...😭
i hope its not ryan...

Chapter 3 and 4

omg..! 'determination'...that's what ella's character showed us...her faith on herself that she'll find her brother is ...👏
oh my my...the action part is wow...!!..
i liked .the way ryan spoke with authority...over ella...
i also hope ella find's her brother soon...it's almost a month..
then the pub scenario...ryan's reaction was quite unexpected for me...😳
i should also mention i'm liking stephaine 's character as well...😊
ella 's reaction was mind-blowing ,, the way you described ryan's pov ...it was awesome...

Chapter 5 and 6

i loved ryan's concern for ella ...he does feel something for her ...doesn't he ?😳
i'm sure something fishy between ryan and ACP...something the spy knew i guess...
oh yes...how can i forget ella and ryan's convos are a pleasure to read..😊
i liked this one "ummm so you are not hungry and kitty but you agree that you are mine hah?"
now who's this kyle😡...don't come in between...!
and they kissed😳...
ella is such a wonderful person , though she knew stephaine for a short span of time and was aware of the risk involved she decided on helping her...👍🏼
and this kyle popped in again...but ryan came as the saviour...😆..y is ryan sometimes so cold towards ella ?😕
i am still happy that he's helping her out...

Chapter 7 and 8

yeah ella does miss ryan...and maybeeven he does somewhere...😊
sometimes i donno y but i feel that spike and evan are the same ...i knw i'm crazy...😆
you truly deserve the title of 'ACTION QUEEN ' the way you pen down everything it's always so easy to imagine things...
but then ryan was injured..😭
The way you showed ella's concern for ryan , how she was all worried for him..n.everything..😉
she was quick and efficient as well...😊 ryan still keeps on teasing ella (reminds me of vrushan )
then i was scared if those bad people would do anything to ryan and ella..😕
and then they ran for.life..😭
i hope they come out of the place before the place is burnt down...😕

Chapter 9 and 10

Both the chapters were brilliantly penned down..👏...both are my fav chapters..😳
They were full of everythig...Action, care, romance...😳..
as i've mentioned earlier ryan-ella 's convos are always a pleaure to read...😊
there was one thing common that is , both ended with a cliffhanger..😛
i wonder where is evan ?...
i really wanna know whatwill happen next...so please update soon...😃

phew..!!..it took me a lot of time i tell u...
anyways...so u have understood that i've all the chapters in a go...and have commented as well...
u r an amazing writer !!👏

p.s. i have imagined vrushan/swaron as ella and ryan...

lastly update soon...👍🏼

lavanya

Edited by lavanyalaa0 - 10 years ago

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Priyanka

@happiness13

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

wow cool update
loved ryans pov
he don't want her to go
how cute
oh she kidnapped
hope Ryan will make everything alright

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Sanjana

@sanjana.sanju

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Wow again an amazing work. But still the last part. It always keep me think what would be happening. hope ela is ok. Thanks for the pm. i am sorry that I can't comment regularly due to busy college work but still i will try to comment.

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