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Posted: 10 years ago
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Samsara- The Circle of Life.

loved loved loved Govind-Yagyaseni bond... the talk...👏

brilliant rimi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Both MB & Shiv-Sati story were awesome! Brilliantly penned down<3
Thanks for the pm dear :) keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for reserving 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -phenomenal-

res.. will read soon... :)
sounds interesting! :D

[B]thank you 😊 . take your time ad read 😊 [B]
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Res Rimi di , new story yippee and in castle's style Enjoy !

Unres

OH Castle!beckett's purring.😛
I really love this totally . Now the first part
Kiratarjuniyam

Abhisara-The Adventure of Love

I really loved the way u described everything and loved the words used here . 👏👏
Amazing .
Thank you so much. All my efforts proved fruitful.😳
Now these lines made me jump in , so beautiful . Your every word and every line is jus 👏 no words
By the way these descriptions of the them were so good .

She looked at him...tall, lithe and muscular figure now decorated in animal hides and tree barks. Around his head a torn cloth was draped with bunch of peacock feathers, which had formed a crescent-moon shaped crown, over the long flowing matted locks. His whole body was covered with mud and ash to hide his aura and white complexion

This amazing bond shared by them

Thanks but all credits goes to Mahadev and his MahaMaya...they could always make you do something beautiful. At least I believe so.😳
Now the second part

Samsara- The Circle of Life.

Krishna and krishnaa jus wonderfully explained . U don know di , how happy I m to read this . I m a fan of Draupadi also and the bond that she shares with her Govind , I just love that and u pen it down in such a beautiful way . Amazing ! In Beckett style 😉
Thanks Beckett*Castle's huge grin* Tell me how good I am*need my ego inflated*😉😆

Now this is what is really a good piece . I love it . Each and every bit of it . By the ways Di are u planning to continue this or not ? I hope u r cause I love this otherwise I would have to go follow u for this like CasKett 😆
Caskett chasing me.😲😆😳welcome🤗and surely like to continue...infact would update soon.
By the ways I don get what the title means di ?

Abhisara-The Adventure of Love...Abhisara is a word in Vaishnav Padas where Radha's adventures are described for her Krishna. The way she cared none but Kanha in her life...her pure, dedicated love for him...that is I find in Uma too for her Shiva. hence Abhisara. Also it indicates Parvati's enchantment for her Lord Shankara, and her playful nature as the Prakriti...alone with her Purusha in a forest...so this a a adventure of love.
And Samasara or the cycle of life...well you too are ardent watcher of MB. Krishna taught us to face and bear the sufferings in the light of knowledge...the incident Krishnaa and Krishna talked was a mark of the end of a time. From that time...all were behaving according to their own dharma..and Yuga dharma or the dharma of time...but what is the essence of dharma?? how that can be performed...and what consequences the actions brought...that was the matter of debate. And it is and will be in everyone's life...in the world or Samsara. SO Samsara-the cycle of life.
Love
~Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

u wrote both the incidents nicely...liked it...the mahabarta and shiv sati both... beautiful...nice concept to write on such


Thank you Kitykaty.😛Love you for saying such kind words for me.😛😉
And her name is Aparna and Parvati here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

but what does the title means?


Abhisara means stealthily adventure for your beloved with him.
Samsara means world in one's life...full of ups and down.
for example think about Castle's life...right now his samasara is with Beckett. And what Kate does with Rick on hunts and chase, stealing glances with each other and else😉😉😉 are their Abhisara.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Exceptionally Beautiful !! Loved How Your Parvati Is Mesmerized By The Beauty Of The Forest And Mahadev Slowly Binds Her In His Love !

Thanks so much...coming from you is a great honour in itself.🤗Just she is not my Parvati...😆she has set her heart for stone(Shivalina) and has her in her life(Shiva)...she is completely his.😭
Also, How You Portrayed Govind And Krishnaa's Relationship Was Very Sweet ! Kanha's Anger And Draupadi's Helplessness Was Portrayed So Beautifully !!
Beyond Everything !!! Keep Writing !!

Oww...this relationship fascinates me as well...I admire the fierce uprightness in Draupadi. And he is My Lord whom you loved so much My Lady.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

HariHaram...!!

Mahadev+ Mahabharat...

:)


Another Excellent piece of work from my lady shakespeare


Detailed comments please😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: foram.

loved it Rimz...
oh...🤗aap ke liye he tha...but I haven't get any siggy. Make one please.
Abhisara-The Adventure of Love

u know wat i'll be happy in a jungle too if i have man of my dream by my side..
her love for him can be felt from her thoughts... and here he comes.
haha was he teasing her?
yup😉if AdiShakti could be woman always once Mahadev couldn't be husband?? so he is teasing her...do always so that he could hear her talk, listen her music, see her smile and feel her liveliness.😳
and loved the way to described their look... u know i actually imagined them😳
loved loved loved this lines...

same here...😳
She smiled to herself, "Even a walk with you on the path of life could teach so many things. And I am fortunate enough to get you as my husband in this life." Slowly she withdrew her aura and divinity into her merged into her Lord's shadow, in her Lord's path.


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