..||Arcanus- A Love Saga||..Part-4 on Page 15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sumimita

i don't know what to say after reading it...i m dazed with it...😊

👏the update was freaking awsome and superb..👏

dheere dheere i m getting it...actually what is happening...

the story is becoming more and more interesting...

it was bit scary...

u r an expert in writing adventurous and thrilling story...aditi..

keep writing..

well i m very much curious to know what will happen next..

so update it soon

with lots of love

moumita

Originally posted by: yogini64

m sooo sorryyy for being sooo late here... 😔

very interesting story ... i must say... 👏

both updates are poles apart... obviously her life changed all of a sudden n she have no clue...

i've a thing for fantasy fictions... imaginations beyond reality ... looks like m not alone with such thoughts... 😎

her life was quite simple with simple dreams ... but whats with some strange things around her .. 😵

this 8:57 time thingy is quite weird ... now I have a feeling that may be this antique watch has something to do with her jumping in ancient times... 😳

what hapoened that late night was very scary ... 😳

ur house disappears all of a sudden n then whole town transforms in a forest n possibly a war land is a nightmare ofcourse...

awww... such a sweet horse... these animals are actually very sympathetic... 🤗

lol... poor guy ... n poor avleen... both are finding each other superweird...

this happens only when ppl from different centuries meet... like it happen occasionally... haha... #superweird imaginations... 🤣

riverside view must be very beautiful...

update soon 😊

Originally posted by: ..nams..

that was amazing!!

seems like some kind of time travel isnt it?

well i dont know whats all this about, me getting curious! continue soon.. else u will find me irking you to update every now and then :P

Originally posted by: aishu3003

namastee😛

wil unres soonish😳

unres😳

adi (can i call u adi😳?)🤗

fab updateee👏

damn interestinggg👏

soo avleen has travelled back in time😊

and who tried to kill her😲

loveddd aaron's intro and also flame😊

d small moment between aaron-avleen was niceee😳

wer s he taking her😕

waiting eagerly for d nxt part⭐️

update soonish😉

Originally posted by: -reine-

wowiee so soon next part..haye

dii this is damn awsum story..

i just loved the way u wrote down every single think..

so she is in forest of that name sorry i forgot that name..

anyways she found a lost horse, she got attacked nd many things

this is freaking mysterious, nd i loved this so much..

so there come Aaron well i love the names of character very much..

he is a warrior by this m sure she is not in 2014 nd there is lot more over here to read..

now where is he taking her..?? well i love this so much dii

update soonwa dii i cant wait to read more..

Originally posted by: ..Rish..

OHMYGOD !!! How interesting can this get?! 😲😲 Where do you get these ideas from, Ms. Smarty Pants? 😆 But seriously Newton, this was FABBB!!! I loved it so much, the description and Avleen and Flame ^_^ , the attack and then Aaron , its all so mysterious!! I swear if this was novel,I would have ended up reading it in one night only, its that interesting !!! ^_____^ I can't wait for the next part, update very soon :*

Originally posted by: Meesocute

Starting mein toh sb itna confusing lag raha tha..

But slowly-2 sb samajh aa gya.
U a awesome writer
this concept is so diff fron perivious one...
Let's see how story unflods

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

my my girl...u have really surpassed yourself...i m coming back after so many days and m reading all the missed parts of racing track and then m sad that it ended...but now something new...and that too...speechless...one ques...wen is the next update...