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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guyzzz!!!! i m new in indian forums. This is my very first poem...hope u will like it. Looking through a picture
Scrutinizing the details
Remembering the old gone days
Makes you speechless for a moment A faint smile lit up your face
Searching the past with happiness
That no longer exists in this
Selfish and hypocrite world

People are around you
Here there and everywhere
Like your knight in shining armour
Pretending to be your saviour

But when the time will come
When you will be surrounded by darkness
You will find no one lighting
The candle to escape you.

i hope u guyzz like it...pleazzz comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi dear,
Beautifully expressed your feelings about the World.Keep writing .😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u so much guys for giving such wonderful comments...😊

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