A One Man Army ||~Season 2~|| - Page 66

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww..
loved every single bit of it!!!
great update..
thankgoodness they are both alright!!!
yippie!!! so our hero again saved our girl!! or, should I say he saved his girl*giggles*
man, the elaboration of the fire scene was literally scary!!
poker face or not, rocky is damn confusing!!
yet another cliffhanger!!
well, I really don't expect rocky to go all lovey-dovey but I hope he play some over-protective guy!!
Thanks for the pm!
muaaahhh!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome nd superb update
each scene was amazing
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: FireFlies.

res/unres
finaly...finally u updated...and this was so so so lovely...

first ryan saving ella...and when she didnt find her she started screaming his name...but then the hug was ☺️

so he said her to go away...and she have to coz ryan said...

omg...they found her but then ryan came and the way he fight , hiding her behind him , it reminded me of Mitwa Sequence...

and then the most awaited , their kiss...☺️

but kaha stop kiya yar...thoda aur likhna chahiye tha...😔

any ways this ch was so awesome...waiting for next update...


Yh it takes me forever to update
Thanks a lot <3
I m glad u liked him fighting n saving her their hug
Lol yh kinda mitwa scene
N that kiss was for u :D
I had to stop somewhere :p
Will update soon
N again strting to write next update cause of u ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg beautiful story
U write superb


Read whole story in one go
Really u portrays everything so flawlessly

I'm so in love with this story


Would love to read more


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey this story is awesome
loved it from the bottom of my heart
read the whole story in a go
update soon
i really wanna read it
wanna write more just resing for a while
so its a
RES
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! beautiful story dear...I just loved it & read in one go...continue the story & keep up the good work...by the way I also loved the banner...anime...hmmm...interesting...Do u write stories on anime characters because I love them...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -AnyDestiny-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Lovely!😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">read all part in one go!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">and it was hell amazing!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Amazing writer you are di!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">that kisses part was quite romantic..😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Loved it..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Update ASAP!😊</font>


Thank u so much
I m glad u tried n liked it
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc story
fantastic concept
plz pm me nxt tym
already send u buddy request
n thanks for the information
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting concept..

Love the plot.

Your writing has a great flow.. Great going..

Brilliantly penned dow..

I can't promise to be a regular reader as I am very busy with my exams and classes. But vil definitely give a read to it and comment on each update.

Keep writing!

Thanks for scrap.


Edited by Vani20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jasmine_ash

Res/unres
Tasha as you said its really superb yaar :)
but i am sorry bec i imagined taarey. Rey at place of ryan( i think not much difference) and ella as taani.
Sorry dear i can't help myself.

Coming to update it was action packed one.
Fire scene where beautifully written and described.
Punch on goons face yip awesome.
Kiss scene quite romantic one :)
totally a prefect title :)
thanks for pm


Lol it doesnt matter
U can imagine whoever u like
Thanks dear
I m glad u liked it
U r welcome

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