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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

tasha...update soon...

one more thing...after thinking a lot abt this story...i think the unknown guy is Ryan.only...i have this strong feeling that its ryan...and the other guy is evan...

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Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.
tasha...update soon...

one more thing...after thinking a lot abt this story...i think the unknown guy is Ryan.only...i have this strong feeling that its ryan...and the other guy is evan...

Will try to abhi toh kya tha update
N lol 😆
U guys r so into it to find who those two people r
N to know if u right or wrong will hv to wait for a couple of more updates
But it wont b long for the lil truth to come out n lil mystery to b revealed
So stay tuned ;)

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: --Ta_Sha--

Will try to abhi toh kya tha update
N lol 😆
U guys r so into it to find who those two people r
N to know if u right or wrong will hv to wait for a couple of more updates
But it wont b long for the lil truth to come out n lil mystery to b revealed
So stay tuned ;)

ya...stay tune...aur koi rasta nahi...

btw dont forget...romance in next update...😉

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.
ya...stay tune...aur koi rasta nahi...

btw dont forget...romance in next update...😉

Hehhehheheh true 🤣
Dang i kind of did forget
But keep reminding ;) when u see me replying to everyones comment

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Deboleena

@OtakuGirl-Debo

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#575

hey Ta Sha I choose my characters for Ryan,Ella n Evan...here are they..

This is my Ryan/Rocky ☺️

And this is my Ella 😳

And this is my Evan 😃

so what do you think about my casting? 😉😆

Edited by deboleena.manna - 10 years ago

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@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: deboleena.manna
hey Ta Sha I choose my characters for Ryan,Ella n Evan...here are they..

This is my Ryan/Rocky☺️

And this is my Ella😳

And this is my Evan😃

<img src="http://bluehuedsin.files.wordpress.com/2013/08/snap014.png" alt="" />

so what do you think about my casting?😉😆

Aww all 3 r great
Thanks :D
Will bother u now when i make 2nd thread's edit ;)

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Deboleena

@OtakuGirl-Debo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#577

sure...love to help you...thank you for giving us such an awesome story..😳

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@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: deboleena.manna
sure...love to help you...thank you for giving us such an awesome story..😳

U r most welcome
I m glad u all r loving it so much ❤️

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#579

Am so sorry! Everyday I plan to comment but I hardly get time to come online!

If I don't comment Mrw.. Send me A reminder!

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#580

Here I come with My comment! 🥳

Sorry for being late as always!

The way you write Inspires me to write! 😃 I just love your way of writing like anything! ❤️

This update just hooked me throughout and by the end I was like "Oh it got over" Such a freaking awesome update!!! 👏

I just loved the way you wrote it!!!! 👏

I love my heroine El ❤️ ! She is inspiring! 😎

Added to her all qualities today I found a new one! Her presence of mind! ⭐️

Despite the panic she had, despite seeing no one coming for aid, she found a way out! Mostly at times when people panic they mess up with things but her mind worked perfectly, she found the cart, helped him in, took picture of his wound, hid him behind boxes, seek help from doc in clinic! Tried her best in mending his wound!

The place they are in is no safe place, so the amount of fear she must be having, yet with great care she is treating him!! hats off!!! 👏

I bow down before this awesome character!!! 👏

This update it was El who stole the show!

I love the way you wrote about the emotions going through her!!!

Now coming to Ryan!

Even if I feel El stole the show, without speaking about Ryan things are incomplete! 😃

Firstly even i was surprised to see him pout! I could visualise that scene where Ryan would be pouting!

So coming to the update! Gosh this guy is so awesome!

What is he composed of? He can be cool, calm, caring, stern, angry and deadly all at the same time!

The way he fooled her when he was in such a pain, the way he got angry when the goons said she is their bait, the way he was concerned for her! OMG!!! I can go on and on!!! He is a mystery himself, decoding it will indeed be thrilling !!! 😉

And now me started wondering about Spike! About Ryan's past, about Ryan!...About everything surrounding him!

Those goons! Will that place be ever safe? OMG..i felt my heart beat rising as i was reading through the chasing part... I could feel the pain of El and also imagine the physical pain which Ryan would have faced! The way they got hid inside! It was such a thrilling update!!!! So much was in this update!!!! Loved it to core!!!! 🤗

Am waiting eagerly for next update after reading the precap! Fire Scene! So its gonna be action packed ! 🥳

PS: I thought when Ryan pulled El near him, he was about to kiss her! 😆