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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi, guys! 😊It is a truth universally acknowledged that when you need to study for an up-coming exam, you want to do everything other than study. And, thus, I came up with this. Please do give it a shot.
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A CURIOUS CASE
The unchanged exactness of her room pleased Atika.
She had had a spectacularly bad day. Her neighbour had refused to acknowledge her with a greeting when she waved at her while leaving for work. She had not had a single customer at her counter at the departmental store where she worked part time. She had called her mother, only to not be heard by her at all. "HELLO!" She had screamed at the phone. Her mother had snapped the receiver. Atika had not received a single call or text from her all day.
Her room, at least, was in the same condition as when she had left it.
"Thank God! Some things don't change." She heaved a sigh of relief.
She went to her dressing table. She stood in front of the mirror, expecting to see a reflection of her messed up self. Only the wall behind her, and nothing else, stared back at her***
Please do read and comment. Thanks! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah!!! 👍🏼
Fab dear 👏
I love ur rytin skills...the way u ended was superb ^_^
Keep writin more..n plzz pm me too abt ur upcomin wrks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

Woah!!! 👍🏼
Fab dear 👏
I love ur rytin skills...the way u ended was superb ^_^
Keep writin more..n plzz pm me too abt ur upcomin wrks

Thank you! 😊
I don't write too often these days. If I do, I'll let you know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ah, hey!
Tanisha, right?

Oh, my, I really liked this!
The start was so like any bad day which might happen to anyone and everyone...
People ignoring us for they are too busy with their own work, calls not connecting...
But the end!
It took an absolutely unexpected twist!
I loved it!
Would you be continuing this?
I'd love to read further.

~Maya

P.S. : Universally acknowledged truth, indeed. ;)
*squeals at the reference*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haah! Curious indeed. In the beginning I am almost pissed off on the narrator's behalf. But then, curiosity killed the cat - in this case vanished the person. Remember, the invisible ink episode of Tom and Jerry. I know, totally off the case ;) Anyways, Tanisha, I like.

And I have this itch to write too, so I acknowledge the universality you are talking about 😛

Deeksha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊

Originally posted by: .Rhapsody.

Ah, hey!

Tanisha, right?

Oh, my, I really liked this!
The start was so like any bad day which might happen to anyone and everyone...
People ignoring us for they are too busy with their own work, calls not connecting...
But the end!
It took an absolutely unexpected twist!
I loved it!
Would you be continuing this?
I'd love to read further.

~Maya

P.S. : Universally acknowledged truth, indeed. ;)
*squeals at the reference*

Hey!
Yeah, this is Tanisha.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I am so glad you liked it.
I don't really think I can write a continuation to this. This was just a on-a-whim OS sort of thing. In any case, I suck at writing anything in installments. I never have the patience to keep at something for a long time. 😆
Thanks again. 😊
Tanisha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Dee-

Haah! Curious indeed. In the beginning I am almost pissed off on the narrator's behalf. But then, curiosity killed the cat - in this case vanished the person. Remember, the invisible ink episode of Tom and Jerry. I know, totally off the case ;) Anyways, Tanisha, I like.

And I have this itch to write too, so I acknowledge the universality you are talking about 😛

Deeksha

Heya! Long time! How have you been?
Umm, no, I don't remember the episode. Come to think of it, I can't remember a single Tom and Jerry episode. (Wonders what happened to memory!)
Thanks for the comment, though. So glad you liked it. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveToLaugh

😊

Hey!
Yeah, this is Tanisha.
Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I am so glad you liked it.
I don't really think I can write a continuation to this. This was just a on-a-whim OS sort of thing. In any case, I suck at writing anything in installments. I never have the patience to keep at something for a long time. 😆
Thanks again. 😊
Tanisha


@Bold
I know, right?!
It's pretty much the same with me, I can't write anything longer than a shot.
I don't know, maybe someday I might, and that day might be near or far, but as of now, I only see myself writing moments out of lives, and not their complete journeys.

Thanks for the request, btw. :)
Do PM me next time you write?

~Maya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Rhapsody.


@Bold
I know, right?!
It's pretty much the same with me, I can't write anything longer than a shot.
I don't know, maybe someday I might, and that day might be near or far, but as of now, I only see myself writing moments out of lives, and not their complete journeys.

Thanks for the request, btw. :)
Do PM me next time you write?

~Maya

Haha. :D
Yeah, sure. Definitely, I'll let you know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, Tanisha, great OS 👍🏼!
Loved the normal build up of just another crappy day and then the totally unexpected Whoa! ending 😲 😆.
Nicely done :)

Though its little bit of a damper that you won't be continuing but I totally understand.


PS: Truth universally acknowledged, yup. Also all kinds of creative ideas only appear when we sit down to study 😆.

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