my poem~pyaar ke ehsaas & taarey's love story

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hello friends, 😛😛 main phirse aagayi aap sabko pareshan karne 😆😆 .. well this time i m here 2 present u all my poem depicting taarey's love story - PYAAR KE EHSAAS ( but dont worry ending taarey fans ki pasand ki hai so enjoy 😛😛)
~~~~pyaar ke ehsaas ~~~~~
( poem with purple color and story with pink )
[ taani has come 2 mumbai but 4 studying not 4 rey , but still whenever he comes across him either in class or just 4 asking something, she feels a little different something ticklish when he touch her and so was rey ,he also get lost in her beautiful twinkling eyes and angelic face , he feels soothing fragrance and a magical atmosphere when she is around ]

kaisa hai ye ehsaas
anchuaa sa (untouchable) phir bhi hai khaas ,
do dilon ko jode ( connect) hue hai
dikhta nahi , par phir bhi ,
kisi andekhi dor se , un dono ko baandhe hue hai

kitna khoobsurat ehsaas hai ye pyaar ka ,
jaise koi jadoo hai khuda ka
Jo banaye dilon ke khoobsurat rishte
unki nok - jhok se khathe
aur unke pyaar se meethe

[ 😳 imagine monsoon special where rey was adoring taani every second and just capturing taani n her innocence mixed with bubbliness ,cuteness,n sweetness through his eyes into his heart .. imagining d tip tip barsa sequence , but again saying 2 him ,that he is mad and again refuse his feelings 4 her 😕😕😕]

do dil jaankar bhi anjaan hai isse (pyaar ke ehsaas se)
mehsoos karke bhi inkaar hai isse
par vo maane yaa naa maane ,
EK to unko hona he hai
aaj nahi to kal ek duje main ,khona he hai


[but after taani's beautiful rain dance she had 2 go home alone as swayam want 2 spend some time with sharon { she is there with them in my story ) so he ask rey 2 drop her home as its not safe 4 her but inbetween rain started and she again started enjoying rain , forgetting everything leaving d umbrella , she start loving rain , enjoying it jumping up n down , hopping .. while rey was just staring at her intensely ☺️ .controlling his heart's desires. but all of a sudden she stops as there comes some bikers circling around them who start eve teasing BUT WHY WORRIES 😆 hamara hero hai na 😉 ,she tries 2 stop rey but he make her wear his jacket and make her behind him ,and then DISHUM DISHUM , poor goons 🤣🤣 🤢🤢 but well deserved , but in that taani also get's a little injured at leg in a try 2 save rey , so she cant walk so rey picks her in his arms 2 her home though she was refusing 😳😳😳. both gave first aid 2 each other 😳😳while d pain of taani was visible in rey's eyes and d pain of rey was reflecting in taani's tears alongwith love n care 4 him ...]

jab rab ji ne likha hai unka saath ,
to chahkar bhi isse nahi kar payenge vo inkaar
DHEERE DHEERE , AAHISTA AAHISTA
PYAAR KA JADOO CHAANE LAGA
AUR UNKE PYAAR KO GEHRA KARNE LAGA ..

[ days passed they became friends , ya phir sirf kehne ko friends 😉 , rey dont like whenever taani talk 2 any other boy , he get's jealous , very very jealous , cant see her talking or even hand shaking 2 any other boy and taani also feels angry n jealous whenever he talk 2 any other girl, they love spending time with each other , they cherish it making it a lovely precious memory 😳😳 in between coming close 2 each other , sometimes gets awkward while sometimes like it😳😳 ]

har pal uss ladki ki adayein , us ladke ka dil churane lagi ,
aur vo ladki bhi uss ladke ki aankho main baar- baar khone lagi
uss ladki ki muskaan se hanse uss ladke ke hondo(lips ) pe aane lagi

shayad pyaar kaa jadoo chalne laga tha
rab ji bhi inn dono ko dekhkar muskura rahe the ,
pal -pal in par apna pyaar lutta rahe the
aur inhe ( taarey ko ) ikk duje ke kareeb laa rahe the

(god is also cherishing their love story n blessing them by his love and making them come close 2 each other )

[ avp came n then gs post and there starts their misunderstandings , conflicts , actually they were fighting with d feelings 4 each other and in that try they start fighting with each other , their heart was saying repeatedly loudly that they have fallen in love but they always refuse it dont want 2 accept it ,they try a lot 2 hate each other , but love is magic which can even melt d hatred ]

par chodi na zidd in dono ne bhi
aur takraar ka rasta apnakar ,
apne pyaar ko chupaaya ,
par bhool gaye ye dono deewane , ki
pyaar ka khoobsurat ehsaas ,
kabhi chupaaye chupta nahi aur roke rukta nahi

{ then RASIA SEQUENCE , in which they float in love forgetting everything , taani tried 2 wipe rey's tear in an order 2 wipe all d pain from rey's heart , rey also got lost in her , and couldn't control himself or his feelings 4 taani .. both live that beautiful moment with each other as if they live d life n true love d very first time ~ pehle nasha ~ pehla khumaar , just like that , but still taani went away although she also wanted 2 lose herself in this beautiful lovely moment or drown in rey's love , as she knew that it was not right 4 her 2 cross her limits ..
but rey misunderstood and heartbroken that taani dont love him 😭😭😭 and whatever happened shouldnt have happened ]💔
takraar main bhi baar baar vo aaye paas ,
par ek duje ka dard dekhkar ,
vo roye aur tadpe har baar
duur jaane ki bahut koshish ki,
par har baar unka pyaar unhe laaya paas

aakhirkaar dono ne maani haar , aur
pyaar ka jadoo chaa gaya ,
aur vo khoobsurat sama aa gaya
jab kiya qubool dono ne apna pyaar
aur ho gaye hamesha ke liye ek banke - do dil .. ek jaan ..

u can open this link 4 the following story part as background music 4 better effects
BUT THE POEM HAS NOT YET ENDED , IT WILL END WITH STORY;S END
{ taani tried 2 talk and sort out differences but nothing worked in front of rey's anger ..and rey also after not talking 2 her 4 some days and living a deadly life , finally one day actually at night 😉 ,he went 2 taani's home with some unanswered questions and climbed 2 her window but found it empty but when he saw taani's laptop open with his pics background , he felt some sort of relief after seeing his photo with her , a hope arisen in his heart , that his beloved also loves him he started searching 4 taani but couldnt find her , so he went 2 terrace and there she is looking at d sky , she was looking so beautiful even from d back he stared at her 4 a while 😳😳 but walk in and stood behind her ,and silently kept his hands on her waist taani was totally shocked and immediately turned and was about 2 shout but rey kept his hand on her mouth 2 before she shouts 😆😆 and then their cute eye lock ...while d cooling breeze was playing with taani's hairs and touching her beautiful face making rey jealous and still lost in taani , rey then removes his hand from her mouth , raise that hand and puts d silky strands of hairs behind her ears , taani was just looking at him trying differentiate d between d reality n d dream but it was reality which was being witnessed by moon n stars , d nature n d plants , d air n d sky , rey - taani , mujhe ppyaar ho gaya hai , iss duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki se , bilkul angel hai vo aur main aaj tumhe mere other half se milvana chahta hun 😉 mere pyaar se , meri zindagi se , meri dil se ,
taani ( felt as if someone has snatched away her world from her n stabbed her heart real brutally but coming out of trance , painfully n hurtly as she thought rey is talking about some other girl ) - kaun .. kaun hai vo ..( and starts looking here n there 2 hide her tears )
rey bent on his knees n taken out a mirror ,( dont ask from where )
rey - ye dekho uski ek jhalak 😉
taani got confused ..
rey - nahi samjhi , koi nahi main samjhata hun ,
main uss ladki se pyaar karta hun jisse chand bhi jalta hai , jealous hota hai kyunki vo ladki , uska heart , aur uska soul us chand se bhi zyada khoobsurat hai ,usse bhi zyada pyaara hai ..
aur jiski aankhein in taron ki tarah timtimati ( twinkle karti ) rehti hain , jiski vajah se main phir jeene laga hoon jiski hasi mera dil ka sukoon hai , aur aansoo meri soul ka dard , jisse dekhe bina main jee nahi sakta , jisko paane ke liye krishna ji se prayers bhi karne laga hoon , jaanna chahogi vo kaun hai , vo aur koi nahi balki ye ladki hai jo tum iss aaine main (mirror main ) dekh rahi ho
( tears were flowing down her cheeks , but before they can fall rey get up and caught them in his hands and kissed them as if promising 2 never let them fall again . then wipe taani's tears )
rey(cryingly )- vo tum ho taani , tum , mera pyaar , meri mohabbat , mera ishq , mera junoon , meri zindagi yes I LOVE U TAANI , AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE U UNTIL MY LAST BREATHE
taani hugged him and says cryingly - I LOVE U TOO REY , I LOVE U , rey hug her more tightly as if not letting her 2 go never ever after hearing those 3 magical words , he felt as if he was won this whole world and kissed her neck and and then cheeks ( the moon and d stars also got shy n a bit jealous as well seeing d
TRUE BEAUTY AND D PURITY OF LOVE , so they hide behind d clouds making way 4 d rain and letting them make love more n more )
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after sometime they got married
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aur uske baad dono ke dilon ki dadhkane dhadakti thi ek dusre ke liye aur
saanse chalti ek dusre ki khushboo liye .. vo jeene lage sirf aur sirf ek dusre ke liye ... ek dusre ke sang ...
SHAYAD YAHI HAI JADOO PYAAR KA
JAISE HAI PYAARA TAUFA KOI KHUDA KA ...



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OK FRIENDS , I KNOW ITS QUITE LONG ,AND NOT THAT GOOD BUT STILL DO TELL ME HOW IT IS ??
, DO U LIKE THIS STORY CUM POETRY OR NOT ?????
PLSS DO LIKE N COMMENT FROM HEART ,AFTER ALL I TOOK 4 HOURS 4 WRITING THIS
LOTS OF LOVE
MONI
TAKE CARE N KEEP SMILING ALWAYS
😊😊😊



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Karan_TaaRey thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. / Unres.. !!

U know I had Tears of Joy While Reading This..
This Made Me remember all the TaaRey Journey nd the changes u made were outstanding..I just loved This...
The Edits R superb...And This writing had a very special effect on me ..even I think o n every one.. ❤️ While reading it I felt like I m in between clouds...atmosphere around is was full of love... And The Cooly Rainy Breeze came from window...made me feel more special while reading this..
I deadass Loved it. ❤️
Di,..Palki is anti-cupid nd u r her opposite 😆 😳
Loved it a lot lot lot ❤️
Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww .meri pyaari didu ..
I love you so much !
Itni acchi poem hai ..
Appne rula diya ...
Tension not , khushi ke aansu 😆
You are super awesome
Firse TR ki yaad dilaadi .. 😳
Awesome ,..👏
Aur , kitna accha likhte ho ye to sabko pata hi hai 😳
I literally got involved in the story . 😊
Hats off 😳
Love you ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awieee...!!! 👏
love u shooo much my sisooo...❤️
tune mujhe aaj bhi rula diya... 😭 😆
bt khushi ke aansoo they...😃
kaash yeh sab hum firr dekh paatey...😭
bohot dukhta hai dil yeh sab padti toh...😭
ki kaash mere taarey waapas aatey...😭
DID I JUST SAY THAT???😲
WOW!!! 😆
and awesome poem baby!!!⭐️
love u cho cho cho much!!!🤗
Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow moni...its awesome...i so loved it...keep it up dear...ur poems are so so so beautiful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome poem
loved it
keep writing
Edited by so2102 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm yaar ...luv ur poems ⭐️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nyc story...n poem waz toh damn cute.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww cute stry n luvly
poem thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb 👏
I am speechless 👏

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