Dosti..a poem dedicated to my pen friends :)

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Beautiful poem

loved it completely🤗

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

UN_RESERVED

Its simply awesome and beautifull poetry...I loved it..I always feel and i am sure to say..Their is only one relation which go longer in a human life..which is "Friendship"..Dosti"..Each and every essence of dosti is completely justified with u'r words and lines..That is perfect poetry...
I am biggest lover of hindi poetry and shayaris..So it feel great to read u'r poem in hindi..So moving on with u'r poem..

Dosti ...ek dor...dilon ko dilon se jodne wala...

Uski ek muskurahat ..dil me phool khilane wala..

Amazing start with beautifull wordings..

Dil se shuru hoke Dil tak pahunchta he ye ehsaas..

Jab koi dhundla sa chehra banne lagta he khaas..

Well said,its a relation from heart to heart..

Anjaan he...par aise juda tumse...jaise suron se sargam..

Dur he fir bhi itne kareeb he jaise dil me ho dhadkan..

Thats great line..Dosti means for "Agar hain toh sab kuch hain,aur nahi toh kuch bhi nahin"

Dosti ...ek yaad...jisme lamhe theher jate he..

Dost ki ek muskurahat...dil khush kar jata he..

Truly dost dil aur dimmag dono, khush kar jaate hain..

Uska ek ansoo...dil me chubh jata he...

Khamosh ungliya jaan phoonkte he is rishte me..

Now,its a preety turn of wordings here..loved it..

Ankahee dastan bayan hoti is kisse me...

Dosti ...ek dor...dilon ko dilon se jodne wala...

Wah..!!! beautifully ended here with starting line..Brilliant job..

U just done a perfect job of wording,thinking and imaginations..Amazingly written..I loved each and every line..Please dont mind.. i really think u should write more as a continue part of it...
My poetry is nothing in front of u'r work.u are multitalented..Keep it up dear..and do write more..i am waiting for it..

Sorry for late comment..And thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Di a beautiful poem on one of the most beautiful relations in lyf. Friendship. Wonderfully written the different aspects of friendship. Doston k bina zindagi adhoori hoti hai. Without friends lyf is nthng. A selfless relationship bonded by trust nd love. Once again a gr8 work di.

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awww such an AMAZING

A PERFECT ONE FOR IF FRIENDS

BEAUTIFUL

LOVELY

SUPER AWESOME :)

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Anchoring in a familiar heart

Friendship is not how you feel
it's how you feel from the bottom of the heart
friendship in not what you perform
it's what u perform selflessly
friendship is what u can deny
but only when u r nt in life.
friendship is what by that u r forced...
forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
that perfumes ur breath till death.

superb poem dear...really mindblowing😊
srry fr late reply.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

dosti hain ek ehsaas ...

dost door ho ya paas,

unki chahe jo pehchaan ho...

chahe kuchbhi aukad ho...

alag alag unki humare jivan me ahmiyat;alag alag hote hai unki bartaw,

bas itna hai pata hai hume---ki chahe dhoop nho ya ho chhaw,

jo humesha hamara saath nibhaye

hume aansoyon me bhi hasaye...

chahe purane ho ya naye

unka sirf ek hi hai parichay----

ki vo dost hai---humare dil mein apni jagah banate hai

agar hum rah se gum gaye toh hume raasta dikhate hai

humare kamiyabi mein charo aur dhindhora peetna

ghum mein...kandha agey kar dena

ye farishtey hai...badle mein sirf ek hi chees mangte

humari dosti; aur deepu---ab mai thak gayi likhte likhte.

your poem was mindblowing----and you are a poet---thats the highest praise i can allot you dearie.

Edited by medhasarkar - 12 years ago

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

DOSTI

Awesome poem
u really are an all rounder
Friendship indeed is a very beautiful relation to have
And u penned so well
You are amazing deep and thats all i can say
😛

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago

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