Guzaarish| CH 9: PG 9 - Page 6

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

wow i am just so happy to read your updates daily ..it makes me happy 😊
awesome update...no doubt its very well written with those little little informations which makes it really beautiful👏

the couple convo was just soo beautiful ...happy to know that he effects her sumwer that she got a peaceful sleep😊
and the way he got embarrased and let that was cute 😉

update next part soon 😊

Originally posted by: Enchantress

You are right zoya is very much free spirited and she forgives very easily but then when something really big happens with you , you can't forgive and forget that easily and that is what I wanted with zoya.. To once not forget things easily and I don't know a side of my brain things zoya fits raina in that sense.. Sorry I know its your story but I can't stop my brains from working...

And yeah If I put characters into your characters , it surely looks out of character...

Me and my naan sensical talks... Me gonna read the chapter... cya soon...😆

Originally posted by: Enchantress

I don't know what this story is doing to me.. Or say what are you doing to me.. Rehaan and Raina... I just love them...

You know what sometimes you are so sad and vulnerable that you don't feel to communicate to anyone not even your own family or loved ones. You feel that they'll judge you.. But then a stranger from somewhere who doesn't even know you nor do you know him, you actually talk to him and feel yourself being a bit contented and relived not that you actually discussed your issues or anything with the stranger but you just had a light conversation and that actually relieves you somewhere.

Raina n rehaan are somewhat the same they don't know each other that closely but still they could make each other comfortable...

Rehaan he is so sweet and adorable.. I could imagine him blushing when he called her beautiful. I m so happy that he made her laugh for once after so many years,,,..

Y do I feel he'll bring her happiness and he'll bring the same Raina back..

I m going with the flow... You are doing a perfect job.

Do continue soon!!!

Dee

P.S: I just loved the banner... Amazing...

Originally posted by: sector

Aww lady, you have us hooked, now givemmmeee more !!!!!

(i was wondering, Could you please please give a serialised number to your chapters, like in an index, so i can reread the ones that are close to heart, please dont bother about this suggestion in case it doesn't suit the storyline...)
😊

Originally posted by: ..nisaluvrk..

awesome...i was feeling like reading something n opened urs n started reading it n then i just had to read the whole!!
it is soo amazing..
curious to know what did happen with raina n how rehaan will provide her that comfort...!

plz can you pm me when you update??

Originally posted by: arhifandebi

Hey Zahara!!!!!!!! You are back!!!! ⭐️I'm so so sooo very happy..😃.🤗...Really sorry dear I was out of station so couldn't comment earlier..... Anyways How are you????????😊 I missed you loadzz...😭... Though even I was quite inactive due to my board exams...but now after a month or two I'll be fully back to the forum...And Please do continue soon with the story...I hope you remember How mad I was after you for updating this story...😛.. Loved to read it yet again...❤️

Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart

I think I read all these chaps, but just to refresh my memory I had to read it all once again, and you know what it was "mind boggling"! When first time I read I didn't picturerize the characters, but now I'm able to! I have formed an image of Raina in my mind which doesn't resemble any actress. Strangely whenever I read this, she comes to my mind! I dunno who she is lol, but I feel there's someone in the world with that face! I don't know wat I'm babbling boutbut I can't get that face outta my mind...now this is like some supernatural thriller 😆 #whattodo?

So I could make out something from the story by far..Raina ran out of her house one fine day in her bridal costume? and her mother let her go? she doesn't want to return back? she wants to keep her real identity closed? there was a marriage proposal for her? and the supposed man broke her heart? she isn't able to forget him?

See so many questions, now try answering these 😆! Update soon..cos I want my ANSWERS to these QUESTIONS!

P.S. I think I res'ed a spot sumwhere, forget that 😆

P.S.S The banner is AMAZING!

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.

Hey! Thank you so much! Aha, take as slow as you want as I too am nearing exam dates! Good luck with exams! <3 P.S added you to my buddy list for future PMs =)

Originally posted by: _IcePrincess_

Thanks! Would love to read more of ur writings, this one is amazing!😊

I love ur writing style, it's so clean and detailed that I can almost see the scenes in front of my eyes. Every character has been portrayed with care, with their own traits and personalities. Great job!
Chapter 1-5 done, more on my next session😆
Story is getting really interesting, I've got a few thoughts about y she must have left home, based on what you have revealed till now.. Let's see if any of them matches with the real thing.
Oh n ya, Thanks and all the best for ur exams too😊