Poem: Spectator

An exultation brims within me,
Yet i fail to find happiness;
A tear trickles within,
yet its not out of sadness

i stare,unmoving,not judging-
As the world moves by-unstopping
I see change-i don't accept it,
yet i don't have the conviction to oppose it…

So i stand by-a mere spectator,
Observing and absorbing
witnessing and evolving
Breaking and recovering…..

Originally posted by: DevvivekAshNI

Though you have written it with Simplicity but it delivers the Core Message behind it.

We see changes everyday, didnt like them, but its Not in our Hands to get Old again. Its just Nature's creativity. Would have Loved it more, if you had written it little Long.

Regards.

Originally posted by: princess163

Thanks a lot for your ever so kind words dear :)

I generally write long poetry but then, it all depends on that moment...that thought...can't make it any longer than it come out to be😊